| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zyntonic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 15:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. This is a really nice fic. You've got to update soon! I've read like, almost all of your other fics and I absolutly LOVE them! I'm a big fan of yaoi too, and I'll be posting a fic real soon. The title's 'My Place'...you might want to check it out. Well, like I said, UPDATE SOON! Thanks! |
Reviewed By: scarletlies On: April 05, 2003 14:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't believe my words on how good this story is will do it justice. This story is wonderful and proves that not all good dbz fanfics are gone.you can tell that this is what your ment to do. thank you for shareing this story. cant wait till next chaphter |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 20:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is my wittle Geta bout to save his Kakkarot? Eee hope so. Update asap because as I've said before, your story is the greatest^_^ |
Reviewed By: Faith_Gilbert [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story is awesome! This is a great plot, really original, havent ever read anything like this! And - oh- you're SO mean to do this to us, such an evil moment to end the chapter! Argh! Dont make us wait for too long, I just cant wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Christina G. On: April 04, 2003 15:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! we'd you have to end it there? please tell me ChiChi's gonna get it! is she going to jail for what she's done? or will Vegeta blast her HFIL? |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 15:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BAM! ChiChi's BUSTED!! WOOHOO!! Go get 'er, Vegeta, baby!! Final Flash!!
Yet another excellent chapter!! Loved the TxGt sweetness! AWWWW!! What a Kodak moment, them all snuggled up together!! ^.^
I'm really glad that Vegeta told Bulma and Trunks his reason for not wanting ChiChi to come and take Goten. It's good that they know what a horrible bitch she is. I loved Trunks' response to her, he SHOULD have hurt her, but then Vegeta wouldn't have had the pleasure of rescuing his little love, would he? ~.^ |
Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 12:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this story - looking forward to the next chapter. But wouldn't Vegeta have noticed something wrong with Goku's ki when ChiChi drugged him this time? But this is more dramatic.... |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 11:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated sooner than usual! Thank youuu!!! I'm glad everyone knows about ChiChi now :) The biotch! *shakes fist* But you left it at such a dramatic part! You like being evil, don't you? But I'm glad Vegeta (I'm assuming), got there before ChiChi could really start being evil to poor Goku. I can't wait till the next chapter! Great job! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 10:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a great ep keep it up and going I'm realy into this. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 08:32 EST
Comment/Review:
*sighs* I don't get to use my tank, since Vegeta's going to save the day. That good, dont get me wrong. i just really wanted to blow something up! Hee hee.
Great chapter. Chi Chi thinks Trunks is taking advantage of her poor drugged son??!! Uh if that actually were the case, I think hypocrit would be the right word here. *shakes head exasperatedly* About to rape her own husband... Anyway, this ended up a bit longer than originally intended.
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: delihn64 On: April 02, 2003 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story. I've never like Chichi very much and I like the tie-in with Goku's fear of needles. You have a wonderful descriptive style. I keep checking for updates on this story all the time. I've eagerly awaiting the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Dream sequence*
"Ding dong the witch is dead, the evil witch, the wicked witch. Ding dong the wicked witch is dead"
*Wakes up*
Oh man, it was just a dream. I really thought Chichi was dead this time *sniff* Oh well, mabey in next chap. Once again, good job dude. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 09:27 EST
Comment/Review:
I'll save you, Goku!
*mischief busts through the side of the house in her tank and blasts Chi Chi with an anti-aircraft missile*
Hahahahaha!
Oh wait, that would totally ruin the story. *grins sheepishly*
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: zorella On: March 31, 2003 08:13 EST
Comment/Review:
Gah! Evil cliff hanger. And poor Goku....
Don't we all just love making ChiChi evil >:D |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: March 31, 2003 00:15 EST
Comment/Review:
The plot of this fic is very interesting. I just like to see where you will take us now. Is Goku seriously injured? Will Vegeta save him? Please, don't let us wait for too long, give this one priority, for once, and post the next chapter quickly. |
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