| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that just did not happen, Vegeta better get there. well any way great ep and keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! This TOTALLY has me on the edge of my seat!! EXCELLENT chapter!! ChiChi must DIE!! The comments she made about poor little Poopsie made me want to go to her house, and Final Flash her myself!! GRRRRRR!!!!
I LOVE Vegeta's character in this, he's taken over the role of the Son family protector so well! You know I'm not a big GxV fan at all, but I really love this fic!! Can't wait for the next chapter (although NO pressure to get it out! You DO have a real life!!!)!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 01:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply love this story!!! It's the story I'm sitting on the edge waiting for updates for most of them all at the moment! It's very well written and you were right, you really have a completely other twist than that other one! Waiii... is Chichi going to get her hands on Goku again? Is Vegeta going to find him all beaten up and bloody and chained to some wall.. *thoughts turn extremely hentai - blushes* Sorry... I just love angst.. and your story is full off it. I liked the twist with Goten... that just had to happen at some point...
Well, anyway, please write more soon! This is grand!!! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 17:17 EST
Comment/Review:
Awwwww Goku's finally gonna tell Veggie what's goin down. Yaaaaaaaaaaaay, I can't wait, I can't wait, I...no really, I can't wait. But, I gotta don't I? Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: March 14, 2003 14:26 EST
Comment/Review:
O geee, don't let Goku be killed by that woman! Vegeta, use your brain and save your saiyan! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! You can't possibly stop there!! *throws a hissy fit* How how thou likes to torture thy readers! Fantastic chapter, though I'm tearing my hair out waiting for them, lol! Please update soon, because I can't take the suspense! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 08:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh goody Im sooo glad you updated!! but i cant wait for more! This is sooooooo good!!!!! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 02:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! YES!! CHI-CHI IS GONNA GET FOUND OUT!! HA! SERVES HER RIGHT! BUT IM SAD THAT GOTEN HAD TO SUFFER IN THE PROCESS!
THIS FIC IS GREAT! I LUV IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 15:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrr!!!!!! Oh that's it, ChiChi's goin' down. Damn bitch, why I outta gggggggrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaggghh. Oh...sorry. Really really really really really good job as usual. Be sure to update this masterpiece and uh, make sure ChiChi gets hers soon before I kill her myself Mwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jam ( to family) Dilan ( to friends) On: March 04, 2003 23:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAIT TILL I GET MY HANDS ON THAT BITCH!! HOW DARE SHE DRUG GOKU!! HOW DARE SHE HURT A MAN WITH SUCH A KIND SPIRIT?! SO FULL OF HAPPINES AND INNOCENCE!? WHEN I GET MY HANDS ON HER I'M GOING TO (NOT MENT FOR PEOPLE WITH WEAK STOMACH'S SO I'M NOT GOING TO WRITE IT)AND LET THE DOGS EAT IT!!
::AHEM!::
[ when i finaly comed down from my rage]
I loved your fic after typeing the words that had freed me from my rage I can only say this...
" WHEN WILL YOU UP DATE NEXT!?!? " |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 21:00 EST
Comment/Review:
*cries* poor Goten!! POOR TRUNKS!!
THE BITCH MUST DIE
yesh, great chapter ^_^
WRITE MORE NOW DAMNIT!!
*pokes you with a stick*
come oooooon... wriiiiiite *whines pittifully* |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 19:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh.. Looks like Goten ate the food that was intended for Goku! You can't leave it here!! It's too cruel! It's too good! I can't WAIT another 11 days! *lip trembles* Please update soon! I can't get enough :) |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 18:49 EST
Comment/Review:
Goten!!! Is this how everyone's going to find out what's going on behind closed doors at the Son residence? I sure hope Bulma can do something for poor Goten. Maybe this will be enough for Goku to run off that bitch of a wife he has. He's way too good for her, at least in this story.
The only things I could find to complain about were that Goku can read, but since this is slightly AU, I'll let it slide. For future reference, Goku and Krillin both were taught to read, write, and math by Master Roshi during the Dragonball series, but it's no big. ^_^
The other thing I wanted to mention is it seems you've almost quit editing your writing before you post. You write well and have really great stories, but there are a few of the particulars you need to check for and I think a good reading before posting would solve that for you.
All-in-all, great job. I'm really loving this story and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I know I say that every chapter, but I really mean it. If it makes you feel any better, I used to have tons of free time and read stories by dozens of authors, almost a new one every day, but since the beginning of this school year, I've been WAY too busy to read but a very small number of author's fics. You just happen to be good enough to be on that list. I seriously hope you update soon, and mm.org will cooperate so I can read and review it. ^_^ Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: goku_mum On: March 04, 2003 17:53 EST
Comment/Review:
Let Vegeta take care of Chichi and send her to some far off galaxy with his bba. And then he can take care for his warrior and the kids. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: March 04, 2003 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am really enjoying this story. but what is goku going to do now that chichi's dementedness has reached his youngest son? how long does she have to live? |
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