| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oi! I like it VERY much!
I've ever only red one fic that was like this before and, sick as I am, I am a total sucker for this angsty stuff! So please continue soon, this promises to be good! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 23:13 EST
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Wow! Chi Chi is a super bitch! well, not that she wasn't a bitch anyway, but damn, drugging him to get her jollies! sad, sad woman! I'm liking where this is going. update soon. |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: February 10, 2003 18:22 EST
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I have already read a similar fic once, with a total psychotic Chichi, drugging and hurting Goku to a point he nearly died. But I like your approach of this storyline, Goku trying to escape instead of fighting and Vegeta noticing that something is off with his sparring partner / rival and hopefully soon-to-be-lover. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 07:37 EST
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I have seen this theme before, but this one is delightfully well-written and concieved. Goku's long absences from home make a lot of sense with this element!
Go Vegeta! |
Reviewed By: Mistress Vejita On: July 19, 2003 14:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*DOIN' THE HAPPY DANCE* ^_^ I was so excited when I saw this chapie up! Did I tell you that you are awesome? Well, if I didn't I'm sorry... YOU ARE AWESOME! I am still LOVIN' it! Hmm, and I still say the bitch needs to die! *gives Goku a big, big hug* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sade Kline On: February 12, 2003 23:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A perfect 10 I think! I love your stories! I obviously haven't read alot of fanfics because I have never seen this theme type before! I love it! I also agree with Saiyajin_Raven69... Will there be? Better implied then nothing though... -_-' Anyhoo, keep up the wonderful work you always do! Ja! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 02:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yowsa... I like! Everyone who reviewed is right... it DOES make sense that Chichi would drug Goku into submission... THE EVIL BITCH MUST DIE!
*twitch*
Poor Goku! A lot of authors like to write about women being abused... but what so many people don't acknowledge is the fact that a lot of men are abused as well... Reading this made me wanna just cuddle Goku in my lap... poor guy!!
I like the implied relationship between Goten and Trunks ^_^ But I'm more excited about V/G... I'm such a Yaoi addict ¬_¬
So yes.. PLEASE WRITE MORE!! This is going to be epic, I just know it!
*laughs histericly as the nice men in the white coats carry her off* |
Reviewed By: Lauryn On: February 15, 2003 12:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter, just like the last! I'm curious as to how Vegeta will react when/if he finds out what's really going on. It's pretty bad when Goku's afraid to eat. *nods* Chichi must pay!! *shakes fist* I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, I'm at a loss with this I can't wait for the next instalment of this. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwww!!!! How cute! Finally they`re kissing!!! |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: February 15, 2003 14:41 EST
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Nice development, I hope you go on smoothly with this fic and give us a new chapter soon. I'll try to find the fic some of us remember but just the name of it dropped out of mind. But don't get upset! You have your very own way of approaching the theme, just the "Chichi drugging, abusing and hurting Goku" point are similar! |
Reviewed By: alfa star On: June 04, 2003 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more cant wait to see what happens |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: windancer On: February 09, 2003 21:07 EST
Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THATS THE BEST!
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn On: February 09, 2003 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo! Something different for a change! ChiChi is such a biotch! But it's actually quite believable that she'd use drugs as a means of controlling Goku. I can't wait to read more and I hope that you update really soon! *puppy-dog eyes* Great job so far! |
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