| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always knew she was a B***h and she needs her btt kicked. poor Goku he needs to leave and he need to tell Vegeta fast. well any way keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl On: February 24, 2003 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SO badly want Goku to kill that bitch of a harpy he's married to!! How could she treat the lovely Son Kun like that??? It's a great story so far, very well written. I look forward to the next update. I'm really glad I found it. |
Reviewed By: Son Ichigo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 10:59 EST
Comment/Review:
Poor Goku. If is at a point, who he is thinking to end his own life by himself. it must have gone pretty bad.
i only hope his choose is the spacespot or he is asking king kai before he is going to put an end on his life, if he would go to hell, if he would do that. but i doubt it. that he would go to hell. he done to much good things. and goku is so far i am know not chatolic or a member of any other religion.
and he really should do a thing. what about a timejourney to mirai trunks or back in the past to help his younger self out. or faraway in the past, so that he can meet his father and his mother on planet vegeta.
what about the dragonballs. can they not do thing. or can goku not thinking of the right wish.
this is so sad, but i like the plot. |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would reeeeeeaaaaaaalllllllly love to hack ChiChi to pieces right about now. *glares at the banshee* At least Vegeta is actually trying to figure out what's wrong though :) I'm hooked to this fanficcy now. It's one of the only reasons I check this site, actually! Great job as usual and I hope ya update soon! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 22:25 EST
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OH WOW!! Once again, POOR GOKU!! God, I just wish he'd tell Vegeta!! He'd HELP HIM!! Hell, he'd kill the bitch for him!! SOMEBODY needs to!!
Awwww!! Ten-kun's playing hard to get!! Sweet little Poopsie!! And Trunks just wanting to hold him...AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! Such sweetness!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 21:57 EST
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Oh wow!! That's so sweet!! I loved how Vegeta felt protective of Goku when he went in the GR!! Poor Goku! I've never felt so bad for him before!! I've never read anything with this theme before, I think it's excellent!!
Truten, Truten, Lala la la laaaa!! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh!! I've always imagined a nasty side of Chi-Chi like that!! YAY! This is good!! Please update soon!! I like it! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 13:30 EST
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Wow, this is really good! Vegeta was so sweet and the way you described Chi-Chi, well, I honestly don't think it's a long shot. I feel so sorry for Goku, but at least she hasn't harmed Gohan or Goten.
I hope I get the chance soon to read what happens next between the two full-bloods. Vegeta taking pity on Goku was so unusual, yet in a way it does seem right. Way to go on a great story so far, and I can't wait for more! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 18:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhh NO. How could ChiChi do that? She's so awful. You should write about the death of her. That would be the greatest, if I don't get to her first *nods with rifle in one hand and flamethrower in the other*. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!!!! GokuxVeggie forever. Update soon. This story is awsome. |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 08:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!! I love your fic. I like the shower scene in chapter two. But I´m shocked! What is ChiChi doing to poor Goku?! Please continue. |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: February 16, 2003 08:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a nice change from the same old same old ....i hope to read more soon ...just have to know what happens next |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 05:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was so wonderful!
I loved the second chapter! Poor Goku.. I can#t wait when vegeta will finally find out what happened.. or maybe Chichi will get to Goku first? Hmm... I can see Vegeta bitching about why Goku puts up with that crap.. poor Goku...
The story I mentioned before can be found here:
http://stories.anzwers.net/sss/To%20Live%20Again.htm
First i thought yours would be pretty similar but now I see that it's quite different. Please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: July 17, 2003 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the few fics that keeps me coming back for more! you write this story wonderfully. lots fo detail and emotion. hope to read more again soon. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am not an english professor, so i won't even try to rate the others. have you posted this somewhere before? i, seriously, love the theme(?) or storyline that you're going with. chichi can seem a bit psychotic. i am looking forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW Goten wasn't conceived by consensual sex!! Chi Chi was DRUGGING Goku!! AHA!! See, I always thought that he'd had a wet dream about Vegeta, and she just happened to roll into the wet spot!
ANYWAY! I really like the way this fic is starting out! Very intriguing and original concept! I feel terrible for poor Goku!
So...you mention that a certain Son is in love with a certain lavender haired prince. Can I hope for a bit of demi lovin' too? ~wiggles eyebrows~ |
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