| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jam ( to family) Dilan ( to friends) On: March 04, 2003 23:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAIT TILL I GET MY HANDS ON THAT BITCH!! HOW DARE SHE DRUG GOKU!! HOW DARE SHE HURT A MAN WITH SUCH A KIND SPIRIT?! SO FULL OF HAPPINES AND INNOCENCE!? WHEN I GET MY HANDS ON HER I'M GOING TO (NOT MENT FOR PEOPLE WITH WEAK STOMACH'S SO I'M NOT GOING TO WRITE IT)AND LET THE DOGS EAT IT!!
::AHEM!::
[ when i finaly comed down from my rage]
I loved your fic after typeing the words that had freed me from my rage I can only say this...
" WHEN WILL YOU UP DATE NEXT!?!? " |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 21:00 EST
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*cries* poor Goten!! POOR TRUNKS!!
THE BITCH MUST DIE
yesh, great chapter ^_^
WRITE MORE NOW DAMNIT!!
*pokes you with a stick*
come oooooon... wriiiiiite *whines pittifully* |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 19:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh.. Looks like Goten ate the food that was intended for Goku! You can't leave it here!! It's too cruel! It's too good! I can't WAIT another 11 days! *lip trembles* Please update soon! I can't get enough :) |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 18:49 EST
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Goten!!! Is this how everyone's going to find out what's going on behind closed doors at the Son residence? I sure hope Bulma can do something for poor Goten. Maybe this will be enough for Goku to run off that bitch of a wife he has. He's way too good for her, at least in this story.
The only things I could find to complain about were that Goku can read, but since this is slightly AU, I'll let it slide. For future reference, Goku and Krillin both were taught to read, write, and math by Master Roshi during the Dragonball series, but it's no big. ^_^
The other thing I wanted to mention is it seems you've almost quit editing your writing before you post. You write well and have really great stories, but there are a few of the particulars you need to check for and I think a good reading before posting would solve that for you.
All-in-all, great job. I'm really loving this story and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I know I say that every chapter, but I really mean it. If it makes you feel any better, I used to have tons of free time and read stories by dozens of authors, almost a new one every day, but since the beginning of this school year, I've been WAY too busy to read but a very small number of author's fics. You just happen to be good enough to be on that list. I seriously hope you update soon, and mm.org will cooperate so I can read and review it. ^_^ Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: goku_mum On: March 04, 2003 17:53 EST
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Let Vegeta take care of Chichi and send her to some far off galaxy with his bba. And then he can take care for his warrior and the kids. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: March 04, 2003 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am really enjoying this story. but what is goku going to do now that chichi's dementedness has reached his youngest son? how long does she have to live? |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 16:35 EST
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Ooh, it'll be out in the open soon! Can't wait! That evil bitch managed to hurt her own son. Grr, update soon. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 15:15 EST
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Look's like Goten got into someone else's lunch... I wonder how Chi Chi will explain her way out of this one. Great fic, keep writing, update soon! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 14:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No she is more a bitch in my eyes know and I hate her for it. I'nm glad to see this come up and now I hope everything comes out now. Well anyway keep up the good work and I want to know more |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 10:18 EST
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Goku!!! *cuddles the Saiyan* Poor, poor baby. She's so mean to you and the author sure isn't helping any. ^_~
So, Goku was found out by Chichi and now he's stuck with her. Will he ever tell Vegeta what's going on? Will Vegeta help him or simply laugh. Can Vegeta find out next chapter, please?
As always, I hope you update soon and mm.org will work so I can read it. *growling, kicks mm.org* Great job! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 15:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well that was a great ep. I wonder how he is going to leave. With out her knowing and Is Vegeta going to help? lol ok well I can't wait to read the next one. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 18:08 EST
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This fics the greatest in the world. Update soon, I jsu gotta know what happens. Veggie, the little softy..
Vegeta: Shut up
SonKikyo: Softy
Vegeta: I warning you
SonKikyo: Softy softy softy softy!!!!!!!!
Vegeta: Thats is (powers up to ssj2) prepair to die woman
SonKikyo: Ahhhhh update soon. I wanna live long enough to read it. Bye. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 On: February 25, 2003 11:49 EST
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Vegeta is sooo sweet! He's such a softy. ^_^ I like how you had Bulma and Yamcha make up. I always knew those two were meant to be. They just can't stay away from one another for long. And Vegeta staying in the same house as his ex-lover's new/old lover just for his kids is way sweet as well. He's just so damn caring! He even loves Goku! Just please don't tell him I said that. I don't want to die just yet. ^_^ Goten playing hard to get...Very sexy indeed. Not to mention Trunks in pursuit. I mean, wow! Anyway, it's time for me to work...I don't want to go, but my boss says I have to now. Gosh, life sucks. I was hoping to read the next chapter today too. We'll just have to see what happens. Until later, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 15:07 EDT
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Still think it's great. Cant' wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 07:03 EST
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Aw poor Goku thats sooo sad! I want to cry for him! No he cant commit suicide!! I wont let him!! This is a really great fic! I like the way you portray Chi-Chi!!! Well done! |
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