| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 08:32 EST
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*sighs* I don't get to use my tank, since Vegeta's going to save the day. That good, dont get me wrong. i just really wanted to blow something up! Hee hee.
Great chapter. Chi Chi thinks Trunks is taking advantage of her poor drugged son??!! Uh if that actually were the case, I think hypocrit would be the right word here. *shakes head exasperatedly* About to rape her own husband... Anyway, this ended up a bit longer than originally intended.
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: delihn64 On: April 02, 2003 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story. I've never like Chichi very much and I like the tie-in with Goku's fear of needles. You have a wonderful descriptive style. I keep checking for updates on this story all the time. I've eagerly awaiting the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Dream sequence*
"Ding dong the witch is dead, the evil witch, the wicked witch. Ding dong the wicked witch is dead"
*Wakes up*
Oh man, it was just a dream. I really thought Chichi was dead this time *sniff* Oh well, mabey in next chap. Once again, good job dude. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 09:27 EST
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I'll save you, Goku!
*mischief busts through the side of the house in her tank and blasts Chi Chi with an anti-aircraft missile*
Hahahahaha!
Oh wait, that would totally ruin the story. *grins sheepishly*
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: zorella On: March 31, 2003 08:13 EST
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Gah! Evil cliff hanger. And poor Goku....
Don't we all just love making ChiChi evil >:D |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: March 31, 2003 00:15 EST
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The plot of this fic is very interesting. I just like to see where you will take us now. Is Goku seriously injured? Will Vegeta save him? Please, don't let us wait for too long, give this one priority, for once, and post the next chapter quickly. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that just did not happen, Vegeta better get there. well any way great ep and keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! This TOTALLY has me on the edge of my seat!! EXCELLENT chapter!! ChiChi must DIE!! The comments she made about poor little Poopsie made me want to go to her house, and Final Flash her myself!! GRRRRRR!!!!
I LOVE Vegeta's character in this, he's taken over the role of the Son family protector so well! You know I'm not a big GxV fan at all, but I really love this fic!! Can't wait for the next chapter (although NO pressure to get it out! You DO have a real life!!!)!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 01:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply love this story!!! It's the story I'm sitting on the edge waiting for updates for most of them all at the moment! It's very well written and you were right, you really have a completely other twist than that other one! Waiii... is Chichi going to get her hands on Goku again? Is Vegeta going to find him all beaten up and bloody and chained to some wall.. *thoughts turn extremely hentai - blushes* Sorry... I just love angst.. and your story is full off it. I liked the twist with Goten... that just had to happen at some point...
Well, anyway, please write more soon! This is grand!!! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 17:17 EST
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Awwwww Goku's finally gonna tell Veggie what's goin down. Yaaaaaaaaaaaay, I can't wait, I can't wait, I...no really, I can't wait. But, I gotta don't I? Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: March 14, 2003 14:26 EST
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O geee, don't let Goku be killed by that woman! Vegeta, use your brain and save your saiyan! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! You can't possibly stop there!! *throws a hissy fit* How how thou likes to torture thy readers! Fantastic chapter, though I'm tearing my hair out waiting for them, lol! Please update soon, because I can't take the suspense! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 08:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh goody Im sooo glad you updated!! but i cant wait for more! This is sooooooo good!!!!! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 02:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! YES!! CHI-CHI IS GONNA GET FOUND OUT!! HA! SERVES HER RIGHT! BUT IM SAD THAT GOTEN HAD TO SUFFER IN THE PROCESS!
THIS FIC IS GREAT! I LUV IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 15:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrr!!!!!! Oh that's it, ChiChi's goin' down. Damn bitch, why I outta gggggggrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaggghh. Oh...sorry. Really really really really really good job as usual. Be sure to update this masterpiece and uh, make sure ChiChi gets hers soon before I kill her myself Mwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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