| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 16:20 EDT
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Excellent chapter. I'm glad everyone finally knows. I just hope whatever she gave him wasn't strong enough to do any damage! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 10:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE this chapter! Of course I adored the Trunks & Goten snuggle scenes, no surprise there. The scene where Vegeta confronts Chi Chi is excellent, though!! I'm so glad he didn't kill her yet, just left her in pain. Now we can look forward to more evil plots from the harpy, and more of Vegeta protecting her men from her!! WOOHOO! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo, that was soo great. Man, you should've killed her though. Oh well, at least Veggie make Goku safe now. Awwwwwwwwwwwwww^_^ |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 12:53 EDT
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Finally, Goku is freed from this fucking bitch!! I hope that he`ll have a good time with Veggy-chan!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kitkat On: April 18, 2003 21:19 EDT
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Really great story!
I'm adicted to it. And the theme is so unusual... I wish Goku Mum could remember what is the name of that fic with similar plot that had been talked about, i really would like to read it too.
Great job keep going!! |
Reviewed By: Riltani On: April 11, 2003 09:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a place to leave a chapter! That has to be the worst cliffhanger I've ever seen (For me, I really really really wanna know what's going to happen, it's a great place to leave it for you, who knows what's gunna happen!!) Poor Goku, this is the first type of this story I've read so I think it's really original! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! |
Reviewed By: Zyntonic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 15:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. This is a really nice fic. You've got to update soon! I've read like, almost all of your other fics and I absolutly LOVE them! I'm a big fan of yaoi too, and I'll be posting a fic real soon. The title's 'My Place'...you might want to check it out. Well, like I said, UPDATE SOON! Thanks! |
Reviewed By: scarletlies On: April 05, 2003 14:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't believe my words on how good this story is will do it justice. This story is wonderful and proves that not all good dbz fanfics are gone.you can tell that this is what your ment to do. thank you for shareing this story. cant wait till next chaphter |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 20:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is my wittle Geta bout to save his Kakkarot? Eee hope so. Update asap because as I've said before, your story is the greatest^_^ |
Reviewed By: Faith_Gilbert [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story is awesome! This is a great plot, really original, havent ever read anything like this! And - oh- you're SO mean to do this to us, such an evil moment to end the chapter! Argh! Dont make us wait for too long, I just cant wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Christina G. On: April 04, 2003 15:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! we'd you have to end it there? please tell me ChiChi's gonna get it! is she going to jail for what she's done? or will Vegeta blast her HFIL? |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 15:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BAM! ChiChi's BUSTED!! WOOHOO!! Go get 'er, Vegeta, baby!! Final Flash!!
Yet another excellent chapter!! Loved the TxGt sweetness! AWWWW!! What a Kodak moment, them all snuggled up together!! ^.^
I'm really glad that Vegeta told Bulma and Trunks his reason for not wanting ChiChi to come and take Goten. It's good that they know what a horrible bitch she is. I loved Trunks' response to her, he SHOULD have hurt her, but then Vegeta wouldn't have had the pleasure of rescuing his little love, would he? ~.^ |
Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 12:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this story - looking forward to the next chapter. But wouldn't Vegeta have noticed something wrong with Goku's ki when ChiChi drugged him this time? But this is more dramatic.... |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 11:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated sooner than usual! Thank youuu!!! I'm glad everyone knows about ChiChi now :) The biotch! *shakes fist* But you left it at such a dramatic part! You like being evil, don't you? But I'm glad Vegeta (I'm assuming), got there before ChiChi could really start being evil to poor Goku. I can't wait till the next chapter! Great job! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 10:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a great ep keep it up and going I'm realy into this. |
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