| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: June 20, 2003 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read and reread this story and on more than one site too! I keep going through my head what would hurt ChiChi the most. I think she should lose Goku (like that hasn't already happened) and have her sons disown her. You know, take her on a nice family picnic at the beach, that has no water, and leave her there, for the vulcars. Death is too good for her. At least in this story. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 19:37 EDT
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AHH THIS IS JUST TOO GOOD! I HOPE CHI-CHI BURNS IN HELL!! WELL DONE ON SUCH AN ORIGINAL FIC! PLEASE DONT HESISTATE TO UPDATE SOON...^_^ |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally mm.org's back to normal so I can continue obsessing over this brilliant work of art. Plz!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE. THis story is still the best. I just love how Tru-kun and Chibi are. That's like the best part. I still say you should have Vegeta kill Chichi though. But, who cares. Don't stop, it keeps getting better every time ^_^ |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 03:44 EDT
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It's been quite a while since I've had time to read, much less review. I decided to leave the particular review though because I wanted to point out something I've noticed. I've been reading some of your stories for a very long time, and I wanted to point out to you how I have noticed you have grown as an author. Your vocabulary has improved, as well as your sentence structure. Way to go. I'm very impressed with your progress.
Now, on with the review. This story is probably my favorite or your stories. It's very dramatic with tons of grief. For some reason, I find myself attracted to stories with a really deep plot. I do think you've gotten your characters slightly OOC from time to time, but to make this story work, you have to. Therefore I'm not going to complain in the least.
Gosh, it's actually almost three a.m. for me and I'm not writing a totally insane, completely confusing review. That's got to be a first for me. I was banned by friends for a while from leaving reviews after one. Maybe I should stop sleeping all day long. Then I'd be crazier at night. Any how, great job and I encourage you to keep up the good work.
I have one last favor to ask of you. For some reason, I never get notices when you update even though you're on my list of faves. I was hoping you might email me whenever you update this story. My email is marvaughan83@yahoo.com. I'd totally appreciate it. Thank you for the entertainment and for emailing if you get the chance. Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl On: May 12, 2003 21:04 EDT
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It's soooo good! Please update again soon! Please please because I'm really enjoying this sooo muchly! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 14:37 EDT
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Aw, poor Goten. I hope Goku doesn't realize he's there, though. He's upset enough that Vegeta knows. Anyway, nice job. update soon. |
Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2003 23:10 EDT
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I am so addicted to this story. I like how Goku is so unwilling to appear weak in the eyes of his prince, and Vegeta all protective. I'm sure you have more evil cooked up for ChiChi...but I think she should be beaten to death by Bulma with one of her own frying pans. (Why should the guys have all the fun?) |
Reviewed By: amanda On: May 10, 2003 15:12 EDT
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i am in love with this fic! you have to update more! the plot is soooooo kewl, and sweet, POOR GOKU!
ill be waiting for an update
yur freind
amanada |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2003 17:27 EDT
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Yay, updates! Still a great story, I am really enjoying it. Keep up the good work and fantastic writing. |
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl On: May 09, 2003 15:53 EDT
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This is an incredible story!!! Please please please write the next chapter soonly soon! This is now definitly one of my faves!!!
10!!! 10 10 10!!! |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 07, 2003 07:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! it's just so ivolving. you really feel what each person's emotions are.
they must kill ChiChi before she does something really bad. i'm kinda scared for the unsuspecting few that don't know what she's done. namely Goten and Pan.
goten's been so out of it he has no clue about what his mother did. and little Pan is a likely target of her grandmother's psychotic behavior.
i'm sure Gohan and Videl won't tell Pan what ChiChi has done. she's too young to be told and understand it. ChiChi could easily trick her into going with her somewhere in order to get back at her family. or to get Goku into a situation he might not be able to get out of.
and what i love most of all is Vegeta's protectiveness. after barely surviving life with the sadistic Frieza; he may be the only one that can rescue Goku. in more ways than one. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that kind of pulled at my heart strings. Great story keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 10:09 EDT
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Oh man, I thought there was going to be a serious fight when Gohan showed up at CC. It's a good thing he was calm enough to actually listen to everyone.
Hmm, so when does everyone go Chi Chi hunting?? Heh heh. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 07:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOH!!! Vegeta's finally realizing some tender feelings toward Goku!! Woohoo!! I'm so glad that Gohan is in on the crisis, too! I was afraid he was going to take his mother's side when he finally found out what had happened, so I'm very relieved that he is concerned about his father and brother.
Speaking of his brother...how adorable is Goten sleeping at the top of the stairs??? AWWWWWWWWW!!! Poor little Poopsie!! |
Reviewed By: Riltani On: April 24, 2003 08:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, that was sweet! But since you didn't have Chichi killed, I bet she'll be back, I hope you make these characters kill her painfully, your excelent story has now made me severly dislike her! Keep up the great work!! |
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