| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 00:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow--102 reviews, i was wondering why i hadn't replied to such a wonder fic yet and i guess that was reason why! =^_~=
but it still demands more attention. this fic is quite rare compared to most DBZ fics thast i've read--the story is altogehter different and very well written, the emotions portrayed through the character--each and every one (even the smaller ones) are outstanding, they really make you 'feel' for everyone. i absolutely loved this last chapter (Ch. 13) it was so romantic... in a sincere way and just... perfect. i loved it.
can't wait for the next chapter--soon i hope. =^_^= |
Reviewed By: aquastar On: July 17, 2003 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Damn that woman to the pits of hell'I don't even
think hell would want that pyscho(she might want
to take over).Chapter 13 was GREAT!I wonder
if Vegeta is going to kill ChiChi anytime soon?
I hope so!the bitch deserves to be cut into a
thousand pieces and cooked so Vegeta and Trunks
can feed her to the birds.
Anyways...again I loved this chapter and
I'll be sure to be reading the next one when you
update this wonderful fic. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How thw hell do you always manage to outdo yourself in every God forsaken chapter? Can I have your autograph?
If not, just update. Lovin this story for now and forever more. |
Reviewed By: Tiger Claws On: July 17, 2003 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate Now. ChiChi must die and rest in the ragen pit of hell, Yay for the Yaoi lov'in |
Reviewed By: Mistress Vejita On: July 09, 2003 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God! OH MY GOD!!! You absolutely cannot leave it there! He kissed him... I will die if you don't update soon now. *sobs* This fic is INCREDIBLE! Chi Chi is such a fuckin' bitch! DAMNIT VEJITA, WHY DIDN'T YOU KILL HER?! I've alway's hated her. Anybody who hurts my beautiful Goku like that deserves to be brutally torchered to death! *is off to get glowing red hot poker and other such devices* ::smirks evilly:: NOW YOU WILL PAY BITCH! |
Reviewed By: Jam On: July 05, 2003 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;Day dream;
Put my hands on ChiChi nech and Squezzzzzzzz
;End;
Ahhh!!!, now I fell much better.
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Oh My God!!!!
Vegita is in a lovidovi moment.
:Faint: |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 04:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
Awww that was too cute at the end!! I luv it!! YAY!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 01:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!! Vegeta actually had a sweet moment! *falls over*
heh heh. great job. can't wait to see how Goku reacts. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* Oh, that was so beautiful, *dabs teary eyes with kleenex* please, for the life of me, don't take another whole month to update. This fic just keeps on getting better. Truely still the best. Now matter how much yaoi I fill my head with, this fic beats the crap out of all of them.
so what I'm trying to say is
UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: Trinity On: June 28, 2003 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work....i started readign this on AdultFFN but desided to comment while i was here. I love the story line...it makes sence with the actuall story. Keep up the good work and give us fans more. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: June 27, 2003 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! they finally kissed! and Vegeta's just wonderful in this story. gruff yet still sweet in his own special way. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 21:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
EEK! Vegeta kissed Goku!!! Ohmigosh!!! Thank you sooo much for emailing me about you update. Poor Vegeta. I know right now Goku and Goten are the ones in trouble, but seeing how all this is effecting Vegeta is making me feel so sorry for him right now. Seeing Goku and Goten in trouble is making him relive memories I know he must have tried desperately for years to forget, to move beyond. And now he has to face them again, face the terror. I can totally understand why he wouldn't understand sedimental humans. Heck, I don't understand them half the time and I am a human.
Oh, I did want to mention the part where Vegeta was trying to show he cared about Goten and it came off as a threat. Well, when I read what he said when Bulma left the room, I totally started cracking up! It was so good I had to tell my mother, who did not seem pleased I had interrupted her from making mashed potatoes to tell her about DBZ. *shrug* Since she didn't appreciate it, I copy pasted it to a friend in an email since no one seems to be online right now. Hmm...*scratches chin*
Anyway, great job! I only saw a few mistakes too! That was wonderful! (ebony and it is toward, no "s" ^_~) I wish I could do so well without a beta. I give my chicas tons to do, trust me. *sigh* Well, I'm getting really weird looks from my family and someone wants me to read what she's written on a fic and copy pasted to AIM (it's HUGE!!!), so I guess this is the end. Please let me know again when you update. Thankies!!! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: June 27, 2003 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!! You wrote again! Excellent story by the way! write again VERY soon. |
Reviewed By: Shinigami_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW!! Demi sweetness, father-son sweetness, and full blood sweetness all in one chapter!!! ~gets all warm and fuzzy~ WONDERFUL chapter!! It was well worth the wait! I loved the Vegeta & Gokuness, and you KNOW I hate that pairing!!!! That shows how good it is!! It was so very sweet, the whole thing!! |
Reviewed By: SaiyanPride On: June 25, 2003 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story,its one of my favorite stories
of Vegeta and Goku even Goten and Trunks.I also
love the storyline,its really original and I've
read a few fics with a pyschotic Chichi(I always
thought the bitch was a little demented,anyways)
but I think that your story is the BEST!.I hope
that you'll be updating. |
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