| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing an extremely good job at this. The emotions are coming through very clearly. If you have not done it already (although I get the impression that you already are) research Battered Wife's Syndrome. You are doing a decent portrayal of this issue. The things we do to each other. It's disturbing and sad. I hate to point it out to Water but if someone kills of ChiChi it won't be Vegeta. Vegeta will, however, have to come clean with Goku about his past experiences.
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Reviewed By: yaoiluver16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 13:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love This Story and I Simply Hope That You Will Write More Chapters. Unlees it is that you are done, yet if you are you left it at a pretty precarious point. Write more Goku/Vegeta fics please. Yaoi-Luver-16
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: February 10, 2004 23:26 EST
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please say you didn't abandon this great story! I miss it a lot. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: January 15, 2004 00:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a great story WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED YET????????? I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lady Chi-chi On: December 20, 2003 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the most worst story here fuck anyone who bashes chichi bash that bitch bulma and her ugly ass.!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Saiyan_Kitsune_Foxfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, i love this fic. Its really really good. ~SKF
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 02:29 EDT
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Aww... Im really missing this ficcy.. please don't abandon it!! Its too good!!! ^_^ Looking forward to more ^_^
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Reviewed By: wawaskesh On: September 24, 2003 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i"ve been checking and checking and it's been 2 monthes since you last updated? Is this going to be an unfinished fic? or have you just been really busy? Sorry to bother you but i've just been really enjoying your story thus far.
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Reviewed By: candy00 On: September 20, 2003 19:37 EDT
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Hey I really wish you would update its been like MONTHES!! PLEASE write again soon |
Title: chapter 13
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 02:09 EDT
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Wow. Vegeta did it again. Poor Goku. I can't believe he confused Bulma with Chi-Chi. They're so different. Poor thing. *cuddles Goku senseless* I certainly can't wait for more. *chants* 14! 14! 14! ^_^ I couldn't resist. Until then, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: water On: August 23, 2003 18:44 EDT
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This is the first time I'v read a story about this couple I must say I'm impressed not many can pull a story like this off especaly with thes two caracters. Please write more soon I want to know what happenes next. Also could you have vegeta kill chichi off? thanks :) |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 23:53 EDT
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Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what's next. |
Reviewed By: SSJ_DarkStar713 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE...that was great! *wipes away a tear* and so very incharacter if you ask me. You are soooo good at this!!! you have to write more ASAP! please?! *puppy eyes* |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: July 18, 2003 14:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i absoulutly luv this story. it has to be one of the best ive ever read. I luv all the diffrent feelings youve put out. I cant wait to see what happens between geta and goku. write again soon |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 06:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh another good chappie!! This are starting to get... hehe... nice between 'Geta and Goku.... I luv IT!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! |
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