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Title: MORE! NOW! Please!!!!
Reviewed By: Umbrae Calamitas [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a tough critic, so feel pleased by your ratings. The only complaint I might have would be your occasional repetition of words and your diligent lack of commas. ... but then, I have a comma fetish, so maybe that's just me. There is something I have to say, though... WTF!!!!!!! WHY HAVEN'T YOU WRITTEN ANYMORE YET?!?! WRITEMOREWRITEMOREWRITEMOREWRITEMOREWRITEMOREBEFOREIDIEOFCOMPLETEANDTOTALSU SPENSEANDBOREDOMBROUGHTONBYMYVIVIDIMAGINATIONANDITSFRIGHTENINGABILITYTOTHIN KOFRANDOMENDINGSTOTHISFICANDNOTMANYOFTHEMAREGOOD!!! Ahem... NOW! WRITE MORE NOW OR I WILL EAT YOUR SOUL!!! *blink* Please? ~ Umbrae Calamitas Live long. Live well. Write. ... and I will proceed to stalk you until you comply. :)
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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How could you leave a story with only two chapters before the end? It's really good and you STOP!!! Finish it, please...pretty please T_T
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Reviewed By: QueenOfGames2 On: August 26, 2004 21:05 CDT
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AH! Yea! Happy ending... sorta lol haha Khan got his ass kicked neener neener! Great chap, sorry it took me so friggin' long to review, school is gay and causes problems with Queenies fun time! Update when you get the chance! The *Queen Of Games*
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Reviewed By: Author note [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 06:12 CDT
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I've been on holiday which is the reason for the very long delay... Gomen
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Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 04:08 CDT
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You made some typos, but they didn't really irritate me, cause it weren't that many. I really loved the Joey/Seto plot. Can't wait how you're going to let the yami/yugi plot end..
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Stuff! Finally read all there is untill now. I did see some grammar flaws, but who cares *shrug, it's not like it a published book or something* and also it's so great that the feel flaws aren't noticed. You do have some predictable things, but I actuallt don't mind them. Cause all read flowing *thumbs up*. The plot is great. .. ow and for Tea give here a game punishment.. Only then if she's able to get clean of it all.. She'll be back even more annoyingly.. =S Or maybe she isn't revormed at all. And then Yami gets angry again and kills her.. (I Love to hurt Tea) *Muhahahaha*
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Reviewed By: Joyalisious On: August 15, 2004 20:19 CDT
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And please toast Tea.. She annoys me like hell ^^
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Reviewed By: Joyalisious On: August 15, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!
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Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 07:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whheeee nearly at the 150 mark!!!! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 18:51 CDT
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Oh and one more thing... just kill Tea in this fic. Nobody likes her anyway. -Ceribi
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Title: Very very good!
Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this fic!!!!!!!! It's very original/creative/AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Hehe, just one thing. I was slightly offened at the insults you kinda-sorta-maybe threw at Persia, seeing that I'm Persian. But no harm done!!!!! I understand that it was part of that "moment"!!!!! And besides, this is a really good fic!!!!! I hope you continue with it 'cause I'M LOVING IT!!!! -Ceribi
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Reviewed By: Med On: May 24, 2004 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't get this isn't Yami supposed to be with Yugi!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Med On: May 24, 2004 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't get this isn't Yami supposed to be with Yami!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Cherub [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tis a truly goo thingy...^^ i says it's really gooooo^^; likes the style pretty goo...i say tis a nice one-ness defanatly!!! Keep being goo!^^v I suggust posting it on nFiction.com, more people will like it there since it's just starting up...no du? Ja ne! ~Dark Cherub
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Reviewed By: QueenOfGames(Lady Dagan) On: May 14, 2004 21:24 CDT
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I say make Tea evil and then kill her in the sequal.... I don't like her either! Wow freaky! haha Bakura got his ass kicked by a girl! MUHA Hurry and update when you get a chance! The *Queen Of Games*
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