| "Children of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: kiyoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugggiii!!!! Nooo~~! Save him yami! |
Reviewed By: chaos-chan On: April 02, 2003 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoooaaa!! You end it THERE?! You are cruel, author-san.. cruel....
Update soon please!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooo. very good. very very good. very very...
"She get the idea" Ka mutters. I make a face at him. and turn away siting by my self. "mean" I grumbe. Ka signs. "Fine you can keep saying Very good" Ka signs I grin.
lol can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!! PLEASE! I love this story!!!! |
Reviewed By: bEaUtIfULaNgEL21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 23:12 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! how sad!!! i love the way you write!!!!! omg!!! your such a good writer!!!! wats gunna happen to yugi>???? wat about yami??/ omg!!! update SOON!!!!! well payce outZ~! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! I'm glad they finally told off Tea! Please post again soon! I want to see if they can save Yuugi! |
Reviewed By: randomasdf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you have completed another masterful chapter... The plot is so well-developed and original - you have to update soon! The cliffhangers are ABSOLUTELY killing me! Please keep writing and post soon!
~Randomasdf~ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 17:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: Oh no, Yugi!
LD: Go Yami, put Tea in her place! Oh yeah, go Yami!
Karen: it is so sweet that Yami and Grampa made up to save Yugi... they are going to save Yugi, right? Right?
LD: I guess we'll just have to keep reading to find out! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Gokuson On: March 24, 2003 13:26 CST
Comment/Review:
more please write more |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: March 24, 2003 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OooooHHH! Please, please, continue this story! I sense a love triangle ^_^ between Seto, Yami and Yugi...How come Yami is so clueless in this fic?
Anzu (Tea)...I like her, but I jsut can't see her and Yami together.Yugi and Yami are a couple....regardless of what she does...Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Chaos-chan ^_^ On: March 21, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow... he blew.. poor Yami!! Poor yugi!! Destroy Anzu!! Cruel evil bitch!!
I never liked her :P
Good job writing the story!! I like it ^_^. No keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: Kitty On: March 21, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. ^.^ This is one of your best stories, next to My Fair Yami which was also as well. ^.^ I really hope you update this really soon. please, oh pretty please with sugar on top. ^.^ Well I got to book it. Bye byez Ja ne. |
Reviewed By: sakura hikaru On: March 21, 2003 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
konnichiwa!
I luv this ficcie! it is superlative! I enjoy how it suggests that yuugi had magical abilities and expierience in magic before meeting up with the millenium items. I also like th yuugi angst; what can I say? I am a hopeless angst addict-the kind who is only satisfied by an angsty ficlet with a happy ending [hint, hint].
please update soon! arigatou!
Ja,
sakura hikaru |
Reviewed By: Amethyst On: March 19, 2003 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is really good so far and I hope the next chapter is up really soon. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! PLEASE UPDATE! |
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