| "Children of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. go Yugi. another great chapter. can't wait for the next. |
Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: June 30, 2003 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: Oooh so many twists and turns and coolness anf fluff and adventure all over. Well, I like it. Muy bien!
Wufei: Oh boy, she's switching languages again.
Vega: Hush up! Anyway, I can't wait til the next chapter. This is SO cool! Honto!
Wufei: *bows his head in defeat* I bet she doesn't even know what she's saying...
Vega: I know what I'm saying, mi amor. Lle maa quel, A'maelamin *winks*
Wufei: *blinks* Uh... whatever that was, ignore it. Update soon so she will stop scaring me. |
Reviewed By: Mei Neko On: June 26, 2003 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you keep getting better and better.
The last chapter was nice, even though it really doesn't show much of the plot. But it's nice to sit back and see how's everyone doing.
WAHAHAHAHAAHAAA!!! Revenge is so sweet!!! |
Reviewed By: Super Bitch On: June 25, 2003 22:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
O_______O NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!! *cries and prays that you are able to have an EXCELLENT internet connection* |
Reviewed By: Ru-chan On: June 25, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. You still have problems with the spacing, but I know why so it's ok. I liked the parts about Seto watching Jou...are they going to be a pairing? Because I really like that pairing. ^_^ There are still some slight grammar issues, but it's nothing serious. Keep writing. I like this story. |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 11:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Continue Please. Also the charcter bantering at the end was cute. Now get working on the next chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: spellhorn On: June 21, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll review. I think your story's wonderful. Keep going ^_________________^ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 18:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really interesting so far. Sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters. I really like the story! Please post more soon! I want to see who Yin's reincarnation is. Is it Yuugi? And what's going to happen with Gabriel and his goons? Please post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Ru-chan On: June 18, 2003 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job! I really like this fic so far. The idea you had about Joey being the evil guy and the good guy was very original and unexpected. There is a slight issue about paragraphs. Sometimes they're just too big, and sometimes you don't change paragraphs when different people talk. That's important to avoid confusion. Your story is very good. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: PreventerPixie On: June 18, 2003 13:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was a good chapter...for having no motivation. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mei Neko On: June 18, 2003 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Love it!!
Love the way you added in the sister thing! Way better then I thought I could ever imagine! Fufufu...you have great taste in men for her!!!
Man, Joey has some major problems here! I can't believe it!
Anyway, keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ya know for someone who claims to be a genius Seto can be pretty f---king stupid at times.
How the HELL could JOU be responsible for his parents? When I last checked Jou,Seto, Yugi, etc were all around 14-16 years old.
So unless Jou was an Evil Mastermind at age 5 he couldn't possibly have ANYTHING to do with with Seto's parents.
And more YamixYugi fluff!
Icz |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts On: June 17, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You go!!! I love this story!!! |
Reviewed By: kt On: June 17, 2003 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, the part about Kaiba likin' that THING doin' STUFF to him really pissed me off. I'm talkin' really pissed off. And if you continue this, DON'T put Kaiba with Joey or anyone else (you know what I mean!!!) |
Reviewed By: Jadejj On: June 17, 2003 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man will Jou live or die at lease he going down fighting |
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