| "Children of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: Phoenix On: May 13, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love This Story!!
Please Continue!!!
PLEASE!!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you can't leave us to wait lo. Wait I do that all the time haha. great chapter can't wait for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: tenshineechan On: May 12, 2003 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!
I just loved how you've written the story. It has just the right amount of suspense, mystery and action in it so far. You're plot is not a cliche or overused one and your writing just flowed.
Keep up the good work and please update soon. |
Reviewed By: wierdo On: May 11, 2003 20:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fic |
Reviewed By: Nicky On: April 27, 2003 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good idea. It's original and I love it. keep writing ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 26, 2003 12:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
AH!, it's a cliffhanger... ;_;
I can't wait for the upcoming scenes. Rescuing all around and there should be action and drama and all that good stuff. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
(cackles insanely) I LOVE IT! It's just like what I used to watch when I was four!!!
Bakura: O.o Your parents actually let you watch that stuff?
(grins) Okassan Always drags me to watch those evil romance stories and there's a lot of nuts and killing! And my onni-sama lets me watch the gory ANIME!!! ONNI-SAMA IS THE BOMB!!!!!
Mokuba: ^__^ Onni-sama rocks!
Seto: (sighs) How did I get stuck with an authoress that likes all brother like anime characters?
(Smirks and glomps Seto) Because my onni-sama is evil and kawaii too! (cackles)
Hiei: o.O You're saying your brother is a bishounen?
YUP!!! He's pretty! (gets smacked in the head my her onni-sama and dragged off to the doctor)
Cm's Onni-sama: That's enough for you! Off you the mental hospital.
(pouts and waves) I'll see you in a few months!!! (gets dragged off while the anime characters laughs) |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: April 16, 2003 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yami!!, Please find Yugi before it's to late!! Who knows what they might do to him.
Please hang on Grandpa!! Yugi needs you!!
Please Hurry with the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Sage Of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic awighty? Hurry and update! OR I KILL YOU! Wait..worse...I'll dangle a Yami plushie in front of you and not let you get it until I see an update. Great so far though! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooh, I not sure if I should be happy Solomon's dead,4 making Yami leave, or sad since he went back 2 being nice @.@
Daisuke: Lives so confusing 4 ur tiny mind
Shadow: Stop picking on my hikari!
-.- here more prezzies
Yugi: 100 kiss-o-grams and a flamethrower 2 kill Tea
Tenshi: A new cute collar (cats 2 wear them not just not dog, I proved my friend wrong) with a tiny millenium puzzle on it
Yami: a motorbike and a machine gun 2 kill Tea
Sam: Cibifying spray and a bomb 2 kill Tea with
Joey: 100 glomp-o-grams (since he's my second fav Yu-Gi-Oh bishie) and Tea seeking missles |
Reviewed By: manga mochi On: April 11, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhhhh, Tea got told!!!!!!!!!(SQUEE!) this chappie was awesome!As you can tell by the ratings I gave ^___^U. |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first off, this rant isn't directly at you Sam. I am really enjoying this story but allow me to rant a bit about Yugi's so called 'freinds'.
tea for one should be gutted like a fish, skinned alive with a VERY dull and rusty item, every bone in her twisted body should be shattered into fine powder, her black heart should be burned until nothing remains but through it all she should live to experience this pain over and over.
yami... I jsut want to slap him until his face gets so swollen he'll look like a tri-colored puffer fish. Yeah so he found out the truth, but to late!! That... That... I can't even think of a good enough insult!! Only way he can make it up if he gets on his hands and knees, crawls abck to Yugi and BEG for forgiveness like the cur he is. I'm harsh but hey! I would never do something like that!! I'd slit my wrists for ignoring him!!
Joey and Tristen. Freinds? Freinds?! *fairly shrieks* Friends do not forget birthdays nor do they ignore you jsut becasue your other half may be slightly better in looks, personallity, and attitude!! They should have all their bones jsut snapped in half (not the neck. As much as I want to no one should be restricted to a wheelchair for hte remainder of their life and feel nothing from neck down) and then be beaten. In fact let me do it! I need a good pair of punching bags!! *cracks knuckles*
And Yugi... I jsut want to hold him and keep him safe from all those idiots he calls freinds. If I were Solomon forget chasing them witht he broom! give me a aluminum bat and I will cahse the damn fools out of japan myself! Jsut please!! Save him!!
Sam... very good story ^^ I really hope you update soon. Again this flame is not directed at you! I am so into the story can you beleive I'm so tempted to draw bloody images of beating hte shit out of those idiots (espcieally tea and the 'bitches' who think their princess. yeah *snorts* bitch princess in freaking heat). Pklease update soon but I really do enjoy this fic. Again this rant is NOT direscted at you. Just he characters *weak hug* Gonn hit the hay. Laterz... *stumbles to bed* |
Reviewed By: Tsuki-Chan(not logged in) On: April 08, 2003 15:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, interesting story!! I"m enjoying it. =D |
Reviewed By: Daughter of Death On: April 07, 2003 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
update |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 05, 2003 14:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooo, can't wait to see what happens. |
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