| "Children of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: randomasdf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! The suspense is definitely killing me! Please update soon! I like the plot a lot and your writing style makes it all the better! Keep up the GREAT work! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 19:22 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good so far. I hope you add another chapter. I feel really sorry for Yugi. Who's the guy in the red cloak? Please post again soon?! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first bit with the duel monsters fighting I thought was a bit confusing but excellant apart from that |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 18:29 CST
Comment/Review:
This is interesting so far. I hope you do post more, and soon! |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 18:10 CST
Comment/Review:
WWWHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! *cries and cries*
THAT WAS SO SAAADDDDDDDD!!! OMG BUT PLEASE CONTINUE!!! *continues to cry* |
Reviewed By: vmr On: February 24, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Keep on writing.:) |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 13:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting story. However enough with the Authors Notes! AN should be used sparringly. You don't need to give us excuses for you're scenes. Let the readers interupt things in their own way.
Icz |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 13:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, you've piqued my interest. Interesting AU. |
Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 21:09 CST
Comment/Review:
DLS: ^__^ that was soooooo sad!!!!!! grandpa can't kick Yami out!! he's not allowed too!!! *cries* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Ryou: eh ...
DLS: WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS ISN'T RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!
Ryou: eh ....
DLS: STOP 'EH'ING!!!!!!!!!
Ryou: uh....
DLS: WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! UR SUPPOSED TO COMFORT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ryou: *sigh* she's not allowed to read anymore ...
DLS:*sniffle* make everything happy soon k? |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: OMG!! I LOVE THIS STORY! LOVE LOVE LOVE!! *glomps seto and joey* ^__^!!!
Evil Yami Inga: 0__\\!! oh no.. she's glomping bishonen again!! *gets a firehose and turns it on his light*
Evil Inga: AAAAHHHH!!! *runs away with seto and joey* IM GONNA GET YOU FOR THAT YAMI INGA!!
Evil Yami Inga: HAHAH!! i dont think so! |
Reviewed By: Sorceress of the Nile On: July 16, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! i'm gonna keep this short...update onegai!! ja ne!!! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Ruby On: July 16, 2003 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me: HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII-*coughs*-IIIIIIII!!!! ^___________________^ TWO NEW CHAPPIEEEEEEES!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! er...ahem...gomen for the stretched out vowels in this review...it's just....TWO NEW CHAPPIES!!!!! -^_^- WAHH!!!! TWO NEW CHAPPIEEEES!!!!! I LOVE IT WHEN YOU UPDATE!!! *starry eyes* more updations!!!
Gifts:
me: *takes deep breath* For Yugi, Yami, Ryou, Bakura, Malik, Ishtar, Joey, Seto, Mokauba, Isis, Serenity, Tristan, Tenshi, and You: a bow and arrow set for each person!!! ^_^ have fun! sayonara!!! this is Amethyst Ruby, over and out!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 18:09 CST
Comment/Review:
WHY, WHY WHY???? Why did you stop there?! I can't believe you! You're EVIL! (hehe, I really love this story and can't stand the suspense!)
Hurry and update!
Oh, and please don't let Grandpa stay mad at Yami, pretty please?! |
Reviewed By: Jadejj On: June 17, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I take it this fic is going to China to find out the truth but the question is what going to happen to Joey and Seto will it change their lives forever... or will they remain the same? |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That had to be the msot romantic thing i have ever read!! Touching although I got kinda confused but still good. And I don't think it's predictable ^^ Is this the end or is there more?? |
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