| "Children of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I seem to think i started reading this a long time ago, but... nevermind, it's veeeeeery good! Gifts! To all except for Tea! Daggers for all to shoot and stab Tea with! Everyone gets a Tea voodoo doll kit, which includes pins, and a package of matches and a single Magic Weapon that turns in to your weapon of choice; Magic Bishie Plushies to all(they turn in to the bishouen of your choice) and, for Tenshi, silver claw sheaths, milk, and a Tea tracking collar! Enjoy and Keep UP THE GOOD WORK! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Joey that bad guy and good.
"she like to confuse everyone" Ka mumbles. hits Ka.
"be nice." I whispers.
it was another good chapter can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: dum dum dum!!! On: June 17, 2003 15:08 CDT
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Give us more dammit. |
Reviewed By: Amethyst On: June 12, 2003 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amethyst: I love this story. I really hope you put a new chapter up really soon. ^_^ I love Chibi Seto, he's so cute.
Kitty: She's being awfle calm considering she just read three or four cliffy chapter and now your killing Joey.
Amethyst: Well there's nothing I can do abaout it, and it'll be fixed soon. Well hope you update Really soon. Well I got to go, bye byez Ja ne.
~ Amethyst and Kitty ~
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Reviewed By: Balis On: June 18, 2003 11:09 CDT
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I love it! Keep going! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: June 07, 2003 15:22 CDT
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Ryou/Malik were quite interesting, suddenly getting abilities, only to not have them later. ^-^;; But then, they shouldn't have assumed that they would.
Jeez, I definately wasn't expecting Serenity to appear. oO; It's nice that you're giving Joey the lead, his new abilities are unexpected, since he's not a yami/hikari.
Aw, chibi Seto! ^-^
Suspenseful story, what with all your EVIL cliffhangers. Well written and capivating though. Waiting for your next chapters are both good and bad; good 'cause there's more, bad 'cause chances are, it's another cliffie. XD |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did not just leave me to hang. ugh that's unfair.
"Why you do it all the time. leaving your story in place making people wait." Ka grumbles.
so that me. ugh update update update soon. |
Reviewed By: Yugi's Angel On: May 15, 2003 21:55 CDT
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OOOh, love how this story is coming, I also love yugi/yami pairing, they totally look so cute together. Well bye for now hope to see more of this great story updated soon laters. |
Reviewed By: PreventerPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 20:10 CDT
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i can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Phoenix On: May 14, 2003 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How cruel of you to make us wait for a Seto/Joey Yaoi!!!!
But, considering how amazing this story is, I'm willing to make an exception!!
Please Hurry With he next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Clam Goodness On: July 23, 2003 02:29 CDT
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W00t!!! I'M #100!!!!!!! SHWING!!!! |
Reviewed By: u don't wanna noe On: May 14, 2003 05:00 CDT
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AWESOME FICCY!!!!! I love it to bits!! WOOHOO!!! Keep writing, please! Oh, and about Isis's eyes...they're blue, not violet, just so you know in the future, okey-day? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 18:22 CDT
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Karen: Wow, two chapters in two days. You must love us!
LD: Very Awesome! It is pretty cool, the powers that the hikari and Joey had... so what is that about?
Karen: Please update again soon and fill us in! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay another good chapter.
"OSmeone always picking on one of us Kaiba brothers" Ka mumbles. "There all so mean" Ka mumbles. I sighed. "Here we go again." I mumble
can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Kat & Rose On: May 13, 2003 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
K: ARG!!! TEA SUCKS ASS, SHE SHOULD DIE, AND WHAT SHE DID TO YUGI...AND ... I ..... STRANGLE .... ahhhh!!!!!
R: i think what my aibou means is she wish tea to die in this ficy
K: SHES GOING TO STEAL THEM FROM ME!!!!
R: *wispers* Ryou, Yugi, Malik, thier yamis, and kaiba
K: plz plz plz get some yaioness in there, im going insane with tea being a bitch and all..... YAIO!!! YAIO!!! YAIO!! YUGI MUST STAY ALIVE |
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