| "Children of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: July 24, 2003 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: Hell no this isn't predictable!
Wufei: Well, maybe the love scenes and the pairings...
Vega: *smacks him* Who asked you? Looky here, this fic has put me through more twists and turns than a roller coaster; I love it! I am so glad you updating regularly, if you weren't I don't know what I'd do with myself.
Wufei: *rubs his head and mutters* Probably find another fic to occupy her time... not like she doesn't anything useful...
Vega: Why I oughta... *shakes her fist at him* Anyway I'll be keeping an eye out for you and make sure you don't get all predictable like, okies? |
Reviewed By: Yami Kitsune56 On: July 24, 2003 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! It took me ALL night to read the whole thing! But I did it...and I would have to say....I LOVE THIS FIC!!! ^_^ It was a bit confusing at frist, but then I really got into it. I was up until dawn reading...got in trouble for staying up all night! But it was worth it!! Please update again as soon as you can!! |
Reviewed By: QueenOfGames On: July 22, 2003 22:48 CDT
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hmmmm Queen Of Games... blonde.... sounds like someone put their favorite reader in the story! ::grin wink:: Juuuuuuust kidding..... AWWW With the fluffy!!! ::dances:: well I'm off to Nevada soo yea if you don't update by the time I get back... well yea I'll make the Shadow Realm look like paradise!
The * Queen Of Games * |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 15:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fluff! Yay! How cute! Update soon!
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Super Bitch On: July 22, 2003 13:38 CDT
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Well, I don't know about predictable. ^_^
However, you should know that Yami's dad was called Akunanukmom (sp?) not... umm... well, you get the idea. (I read the recent Shounen Jump, which is in the Memory World. Go to Jenniyah's site for the scans.) |
Reviewed By: Ru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. Your story really is quite good. I have to agree with you though...the originality it showed before is waning now. Your romances (with the exception of the Seto/Jou storyline) are becoming predictable. I still enjoy what you've written though. Keep it up. I would like to see this story be completed. |
Reviewed By: Mei Neko On: July 19, 2003 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care what everyone else thinks, this fic is awesome! And don't worry about it being short. It's fine the way it is.
I'm so happy that you posted out two chapters! Can't wait for more!
Love the cliffhangers! I want to know the mystery with Joey! Want to know!! Hee HEe
Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Daughter of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
add new chapter |
Reviewed By: *QueenOfGames* On: July 17, 2003 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHH SHEN IS UNCLE!!!! lol Hmmmmm verdy interesting! I think Joey is the 'chosen one' and I choose him to get freaky with Mr Sexy Seto! ::evil grin:: hint hint miss author! ::gets scared:: Gabriel is freaky! chop chop update soon!
The * Queen Of Games * |
Reviewed By: Crazy Assed Person On: July 17, 2003 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE DAMMIT!!!! I wanna know if there will be more candy!!! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 09:19 CDT
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WOW I'm nearly on the way into my 100 reviews on this story!!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!!!! THANK YOU ALL THAT HAVE REVIEWED!!!! |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 03:05 CDT
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VERY VERY VEWY VEWY GOOD!!! Perfectly realistic, and it keeps getting better! I think I forgot to tell you in my last review that the tracking collar for Tenshi has a special torture feature. Tea can be frozen and terrorized by Tenshi at will (which, for the terrorization and torturing is why you'd want to track Tea.) Keep up the magnificent, beautiful, delicious, suspenseful, wonderful work! |
Reviewed By: Ru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Please update again! Please! It was Joey who saved them wasn't it? I thought it was. Was it? ^_^ I love this fic! WAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh... yes.... finally, I the great Pepino((Cucumber)) review....
Yugi: Youa ren't great at all.
Me: Whatever, Yugi. You're linked to some weird junk now. I can't be hanging out with you. Now... I must hang out with Katsuya!!! ^O^ Mwahahahaha! He's some f---ed s--- there, man! Hahahaha! He's my new best buddy now!
Joey: -_-0
Me: And what's wrong with the Seahorse man being with Woofie?! Well?! I think someone's jealous....
Jealousy monster: Well, duh, that is my name.
Everyone else: O.o;;;
Me: -_-0 Other than that, continue onward, Sam-chan! May the Force of the Cucumbers be with you!
Yugi: That's a pickle you're holding....
Me: *looks at thing she's holding* Oh... I obviously knew that. I was just testing the Jealousy monster. That's all. -_-0 |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Ruby On: July 07, 2003 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me: hai!!! at last!!! all and all, THIS CHAPTER ROCKS!!! GIVE YOURSELF A HAND!!! -^_^- you wanna know why, ne? here they are:
1. WOOHOO!!! GO YUGI!!! he finally slapped that ****ing ***** (the despised tea) and knocked her to her senses! and when Yugi sang! that was so cool!!! he must have rocked!!!
2. YUGI AND YAMI FLUFFY MOMENT AT THE END OF THE CHAPPIE!!!! -^______________^- need i say more?
3. when Yugi, Ryou, Joey, and Malik went to perform!!! yet again, i say that IT WAS ONE OF THE COOLEST MOMENTS THERE!!! ^_~
4. FLUFFY MOMENTS BETWEEN THE YAMIS AND HIKARIS!!! I LOVE FLUFF!!! ^______^ YAY!!
5. EVERY PART OF THIS CHAPPIE WAS GREAT!!! ^_____^ MAJOR PROPS TO YOU!!! KEEP UP THE FLUFFY TALENT!!! WOOHOO!!! ^_~
me: this fic is so great, i will give you some gifts too!!!
For Yugi: Yami plushie and candy!
For Yami: Yugi plushie and candy!
For Joey: GIGANTIC DOUNUT!!! (me: ^_^;) and Seto plushie!!!
For Seto: head ache pills (me: you REALLY need 'em!) and...er...do you like candy? if you don't too bad cuz here they are for you! ph plus a Joey plushie!!!
For Mokuba: video games, and of course, CANDY!!!
For Ryou: Bakura plushie and candy!
For Bakura: Ryou plushie and candy!
For Malik: Ishtar plushie and candy!
For Ishtar: Malik plushie and candy!
For Tristan: a new helmet for your motorcycle and candy!
For Serenity: a new laptop and candy!
For Tenshi: a gallon of milk, and a medal for being one of the smartest cats ever!!! ^_^
For You!: major props, a sword for whatever reason you want (me: *coughbashingteacough*), candy, and a medal for being one of the best fan fic writers!!!
me: now a gift for Yugi, Yami, Joey, Seto, Mokuba, Serenity, Ryou, Bakura, Malik, Ishtar, Tristan, and You!!! here it is: flamethrowers to bash a certain ***** or any other annoying person you like!!! and a mini one for Tenshi!!! okay now! keep updating! ^_~ |
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