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Reviewed By: Amreld [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nah. I was just being sarcastic. ^^ I hope you update soon! Oh, can you check ut my side story that I posted here? It's called, 'Pet: A side story to Two mikos and a heart of ice' And my penname is 'Stolen Death' Pleeeeeez? I feel really bad because only one person reviewed it, evne though it's been visited 50 times. Ja ne!!
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Title: bear witness
Reviewed By: whit On: February 21, 2004 18:35 CST
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wow great two chapters you have done cant wait to read the end and hope sesshou gets his head out of his ass or I'll do it for him phew well now as always great job overall rating:10
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Title: Still lovin' it
Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story I can't seem to stop reading it unless of course i'm telling my friends about. My favorite part so for is the whole milkshake thing that was just to funny. I'm now on chappie 32 and i hope it never ends.
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Title: So Cool
Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories I've read most of them already. I'm only on Chappie 3 of this one but I already love it and Kag's B-day (mostly because it's only 2days after mine ^__^).
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: February 15, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I am one of those people who does not know what Kudzu is, so THANK YOU for explaning. Second, it took me for every to get this website to load the link for Ch 33. I don't know what is wrong with it, but it only happens on my stupd-ass computer. I can not wait until I get a new one. Anywho, great chapter. Love the whole eye changing thing. Sesshoumaru would be drop dead gorgeous, not that he is not drop dead gorgeous already. A little upset that Sesshy is still being an ass. I mean for pete sakes, Kagome basically was ready to die for the demon and still he can't open up a little. Emotionless till the end, uh? Great chapter, will be counting the days down util next chapter. Though I have a question, will Ch 34 be the final chapter. I'll be sad if it is.
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry *throws backpack at computer* On: February 14, 2004 01:31 CST
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I was lazy last chapter, and didn't review for a while. sorry! my favorite part last chapter was the part about Rin's shoe. ^-^ hehe, shoes make great weapons. I throw them all them time at my dad, who's finally back from Hawaii. this chapter and last chapter, both good chapters, as always. *lower lip trembles* am I stupid since didn't know what a kudzu plant was? I mean, I don't know that type of thing! but now I do. I'm not even in school right now, because of break, but I learned something new! hehe ^-^ I loved the changes between Kagome and Midoriko! cool cool. ok, totally random thought, but Naraku is kinda like Gollum. you know, both obsessed with some object that everyone wants for its power. I noiced that when you had Naraku laughing evilly over the Shikon. *laughs* Katrina is able to zap Inu, just like you. ^-^ *is paleing* that was just a LOVELY description of Fluffy melting mokeyboy' arm off. -_-, later ^-^
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 12:59 CST
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Kudzu is evil. It covers everything here...fences, houses, animals... Thank you Japan! Thank you for the evil kudzu! *coughs* Anyway, nice chapter! I don't think I've reviewed lately...addlebrained, you know. I enjoyed reading about Naraku's death, though I did spare a moment to mourn the loss of the great demon. Poor Sesshoumaru...he still doesn't realize how much he loves Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 (not loged in) On: February 12, 2004 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG THIS IS SOOO GOOOOOOD PLz UPDATE ASAP ok
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 21:24 CST
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Ohohohoho a surprise you say? Somehow I think it has to do with Kagome. Maybe she isn't what she thinks she is or something. GREAT CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: nan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 20:58 CST
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wow that was a great chappy! i love this story so much. but you really worried me when kag was falling, i thought fluffy wasn't going to try to save her. i felt so bad for her until he took the plunge. whew! i'm so glad he did. she woulda been really pissed if he didn't. Well thanks for another great chappy. see ya soon.
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Reviewed By: 1 On: February 10, 2004 19:35 CST
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: February 08, 2004 23:18 CST
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I don't get it. Why are you laughing? I guess I'm as dense as Inuyasha is on this one. Amreld the sky elf
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: February 08, 2004 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooh. I get it now. ^^ Nevermind. Yeah, for some reason I don't think I would have minded all to much if you ade this an I/K pairing, but now thta he's nicer, I'm much happier. but god, her life being in danger none of her buisiness? Jeez. Talk about an unobservant idiot. ^^ Well! I must read your next chappy!!! Ja ne!! Amreld the sky elf
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Reviewed By: 1 On: February 08, 2004 19:32 CST
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Title: about what Narau said about kagome
Reviewed By: Misery On: February 08, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome does not have a *Flat-ass*..LOL....besides..I thought Naraku wanted her..or sumthing
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