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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: February 29, 2004 14:17 CST
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::sigh:: I've returned from the Denile. Have you ever been there? its so nice! Perfect 70 degree weather, a nice warm breeze, not a cloud in sight to mar the blue skies... But alas, it cannot last. Not reading that last chapter doesn't cahnge the fact that its over. ...you wouldn't happen to have a surprise for me in the end, like say, the title to a continuation does it? Bah, okay, my review for this chapter: Its horrid! Can I bash his head into the wall now? (BTW, I'm reviewing here cuz ff is being a bitch. But the new formating is nice,no?) I feel so bad for kags! I almost can wish for Sesshou not to get the girl here. How much can you hurt one person? I'm adding him to my A-list.
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Reviewed By: lady scorpio On: February 28, 2004 22:10 CST
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this story was so freakin awesome! i hope to kami that you update soon. how could sesshou be that much of a dumb ass? you are very talented. keep up the amazing work. i can hardly wait to see how sesshou tries to get kagome back. although, he doesn't deserve her now....
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: February 28, 2004 14:29 CST
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WAAAAAAAAGH!! SESSHY NO BAKA!!! How could you!? Sometimes you can be so insensitive, you know...Why do you always have to be so icy and have that stupid bossiness crap. Geez, I can't believe he told her he never loved her. I would be frying him or try to get away as far as possible if I were Kagome! Well, SF, please update soon because I really really want to find out what will happen. And Sesshy better do some serious apologizing soon or I will personally kick his ass!! *takes out staff and fangs grow longer* Neheheh...
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: February 28, 2004 14:27 CST
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WAAAAAAAAGH!! SESSHY NO BAKA!!! How could you!? Sometimes you can be so insensitive, you know...Why do you always have to be so icy and have that stupid bossiness crap. Geez, I can't believe he told her he never loved her. I would be frying him or try to get away as far as possible if I were Kagome! Well, SF, please update soon because I really really want to find out what will happen. And Sesshy better do some serious apologizing soon or I will personally kick his ass!! *takes out staff and fangs grow longer* Neheheh...
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 21:38 CST
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THAT JERK!!!!!!!!!!!!! *starts pacing back and forth* How could he do that to her!! What did he think he could accomplish by acting that way!! And he had the nerve to hit her!! And he called her a concubine after he took her virginity!!!!! Men are so STUPID!!! He just decided to lock her up in the damn room with no clothes!! Son of a dog!!! literally!!! If I were Kagome I do either two things; kick his ass or get as far away from as possible to keep myself from kicking his ass!!!! Why didn't the all powerful demon lord with his keen senses smell the blood while they were having sex!!!! SF I want you break him!!! Snap him like a twig, squeeze him like a bug!! I want you to turn him into mince meat and I don't even know what mince meat is!!!!!!!!!!!!! *two large men come in and carry InusDemoness off kicking and screaming* I will be back and he had better say he's sorry and his hands and knees!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 21:16 CST
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SESSHOUMARU NO BAKA YAROU! OMG WHAT THE HELL WAS HE THINKING? HE LOVES her! GEEZ! WHAT A PRICK! Oh well, now that was not a crummy suprise my friend! It will definetly add a new twist! ^-^ AWESOME chappy! Sesshou you baka. grr.
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Title: Bad Sessy
Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! Good job on the lemon. I had a feeling Sessy was gonna do somethin' bad and it's good ta know he regrets it...if he didn't I would have ta hurt him. I feel sorry for Kagome...I hope Sessy does some serious apologizing in the next chappie and they get back together but he should suffer a bit 1st cause that was pretty mean. Hope ya update soon. Conqueror_Kagome out
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Reviewed By: forever_faded On: February 26, 2004 18:24 CST
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one more thing.. Have u thought of J E A L O U S Y and R E V E N G E ???? dats the best pair in the world!! ^^ update soon stricking falcon-sama!!!
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Reviewed By: forever_faded On: February 26, 2004 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!!! i gave u all 10s wow.. anyways i read your fic on fanfiction.net and u didnt post the lemon on it.. sooo by which i had to come here...... oh wellz anywayz it was worth it because i got to read this wonderful chapter!! how can sesshomaru think kagome was some kind of toy!! thats soo sad and i thought guys would notice when girls are virgins!! poor kagome she said she loved him but how he treated her... damn if i was her I'd be long gone.. come on... she risked her life for him and gave him her purity. And he treats her like some kind of whore.... *sniffles* i hope he regrets it bad when he sees kagome again... and PLEASE TELL MEEH THERE's Gonnna be J E A L O U S Y !!!! IF they're gonna get back together make him be the inu-dog he is and beg on his knees but what makes the whole thing more interesting is that i know there's gonna be another youkai wanting kagome right?? whats his name joroumaru or something.. There's a picture of him on www.inuyashaworld.com soo check him out for the jealousy role ^.~....HE's as strong as sesshomaru and is even more evil then naraku.. not to mention just ass sexie as seshomaru... make up a club scene too please!! u know i thought the story was going to end when naraku was defeated but i guess not!! And the lemon u write was great!! Your good at it even if u dont like it!! THANX 4 continuing and picking my interest again with the same story!! wellz update soon!! ja ne~ faded out~
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Title: alsome
Reviewed By: darkangel_4520 On: February 26, 2004 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is by far one of the best stories i've ever read. i do hope you don't leave us hanging and finish it...if you do please e-mail me at darkangel_4520@yahoo.com also if you have any other stories i would like to read them. thanks
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Reviewed By: Phoebemoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 17:32 CST
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that was a good lemon .. very quick and to the point .. but wow what he did .. jeesh! MEan mean makes me wonder if they will get back together. I am still wondering what you have planned for the sword and what sango said in an earlier chappie .. hmm .. cant wait!
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Reviewed By: *Tenshi* On: February 26, 2004 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story. But I still dislike Sesshoumaru for his bossyness. What if he didn't find out that Kagome was a virgin, would he realize that he loved her? I can't believe how cruel he was to her.
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Title: Chapter 34
Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 26, 2004 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, even the lemon. Sesshoumaru was the only one that messed it up. I don't think I can add anything that the reviewers before me haven't said, except Sesshoumaru deserves to be castrated after this last chapter. I hope Silver feels better. ~_~ jschu25
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Title: NUUUU!
Reviewed By: Corisu Li [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 12:27 CST
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*bursts into hysterical tears* SESSHOU!!!! GRRRR.... *suddenly smiles serenely* Hmph. Well, SF, nice chapter. I had to book it over here from FF.net, but ah, well. 'Tis the price we must pay for good fanfiction. And there's no point in being mad at Sesshou... I mean, he's going to somehow make it all better, right? RIGHT? Hmph... *wiggles nose and Sesshou is suddenly suspended over a vat of Rabid Fangirls* REPENT!!! Eheh. But... great job, SF-sama! Can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Avonnalay-Ariemay On: February 26, 2004 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I just got done reading this version of the story (I caught ff.net's first) and I just have to tell ya, that I feel like sticking Sesshy in the middle of a pit of vipers right now!! How could he do that?! **Holds up my pet snake and dangles it over Sesshy's head -who is for the moment conveninetly tied to a chair-** MEN!!! UGH!!! I SWEAR THEY ARE THE MOST APATHETIC, UNCARING, EGOTISTICAL, SELF CENTERED, DEVIOUS CREATURES THAT WE HAVE THE UNFORTUNATE JOB TO DEAL WITH ON PLANET EARTH!! (Oh, and sorry to any guys that might be reading this. **blushes profusely** Ya'll aren't all alike, but it's guys who have a mindset like Sesshy that I would just love to throw off a cliff somewhere!) Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry, you've got me in an immense amount of anticipation. Later, A.A.
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