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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Size 12 shoe? @_@ That explains why SF wants to keep Sessy all to herself. I thought the reference to chocolate was hilarious!Boy, these two really do need help hooking up. Thank goodness for Yasha and Rin. TTFN!
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Reviewed By: Red_Dragon210 On: November 05, 2003 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo this story really RoCKS I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON!!! RED
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Reviewed By: Red_Dragon210 On: November 05, 2003 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo this story reslly RoCKS I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON!!! RED
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Title: hiyaku_de_mon@sesshoumaru.zzn.com
Reviewed By: tessa3 On: November 05, 2003 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello hello sf-chan...it is I tessa kyoshi: idiot... i think she knows this already tessa:**twitching** idiot?! just shut up allright...SF-chan i just love this chapter that you wrote...and the offit that sessho had on **drools** it was to die for...not to mention my brother plays final fantasy and I just watch so i knew who he was going as kyoshi: **claps hands, rolls eyes** give the girl a cookie tessa: **glares** kiss ass ky-chan...neways...i was wondering did you get any ideas from the matrix because Kagome be kicking some major ass...**taps brain** hmm is there anything else i could think of....hmmmm nope not really so i guess i will go..... oh one more thing...Silver Fox get on the ball...we know you have school and all but you started something that needs to be finish...and I will say no more b/c it will just get plain dirty **smiles innocently** ja ne
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 07:51 CST
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I can so totally picture Sess doing Neo's moves!! *tries jumping around like Trinity, but falls flat on face* Ugh. So, I'm not the most athletic person...or the most coordinated. But Sess kicked some serious youkai ass!!! Whoohoo! And I can't wait to find out what Rin's evil plan entails...
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 06:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story please update soon bye
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Reviewed By: Starry Dragon Knights [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 00:30 CST
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Great! Great! Totally GREAT!! Can't wait till u update!! A Fan and Author, Starry Dragon Knights
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 19:09 CST
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Title: 3
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 12:10 CST
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: October 30, 2003 08:46 CST
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*huffs* I agree with Siver Fox. About bleeping time we found out just what has Kagome so upset every night. But, damn! Could you be any more cryptic about it? *waves hands* No! No, don't take that as a challenge to make it so---just a rhetorical complaint! Ignore it! *pouts* But couldn't you have added just a little more gratutiousness in here? I mean, for the fangirls, that is. *laughs* But I loved the whole matador bit. Thanks you for the fluff!!! It was sooo appreciated! *sighs blissfully* Ah, Sess being playful...*shudders* Actually, it's kind of scary, in a feel-good sort of way. Ooh! But, I love it! Ack. The drugs have made me rattle on, so I'll be going now. Yeah. Now. Now.
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Reviewed By: Mitsukai no shouten On: October 29, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....*Amreld bursts into tears* WAAHAHAHAHA!!! N-no m-more -ch-chappys to r-read. *sniffle* I'm listening to Linkin Parks 'session' while writing this so i'm typing to a beat. it's really fun to do that you know...LOVED THE COOMENT ABOUT KEANU REEVES! He is SO hot! The only thing to describe him would be eye-candy. *drools* Box under the bed hot! That's him! Along with Sesshy-kun and Naraku-kun. Yeah, without his pelt the bishie is total hotness. *drools again* Okay, gotta go now! GET A LEMON IN THERE OR ELSE! ^-^ Onegai? Mitsukai no shouten a.k.a Amreld the sky elf A fanfiction.net author
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Reviewed By: Crimson demon On: October 29, 2003 19:50 CST
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Hah! You are alive! I knew it! Write more please!
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: October 29, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You think 'Faint' is a kissing song? O~.^O Strange, although, FINALLY WE GET A GOOD FIGHT SCENE! You need justr a little bit more detail in those. Sadly, I suck at writing fluff, but I rock at writing fighting or battle scenes. I STILL need to work on my fluffing things up. *pouts* ^-^ Wellm we're in the same boat time wise, for fluff and romance anyway, I have 25 chappy's in my story on ff.net and they've only kissed ONCE!!! I have seen some stories that have ten chapters, a hell of a lot of fluff, LEMONS, AND THEY MADE IT BELIEVABLE AND ENJOYABLE TOO!!!! Why must I be curesd with a broken muse? Pearl: HEY! I am not broken! I just use my battle inspirationing more than my fluff part. Max: Suuurrrre you do. I am her general/humor muse and I do round the clock work! Do you know how hard it is to inspire her into stringing fluff, battle, and humor together?! I didn't think so! Spike: *bouncing around in circles in place* Amreld: -_-' My god, my muses and my hyper/evil half never stop arguing. Love the story! Awesome! ^_______^ ^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^ ^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~ JA NE! Amreld the sky elf a.k.a Mitsukai no shouten an author on fanfiction.net
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 00:17 CST
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yea! great chapter! couldn't stop laughing at the end. love the dream sequence. very detailed. oh and i am updating tonight.
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Title: 3
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 12:53 CST
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