| "To Bear Witness" Reviews/Comments [ 370 ] |
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Title: 4
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 16:27 CST
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Reviewed By: Phoebemoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 08:36 CST
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This is going to end bad when she finds out he's playing her .. then it will be sad .. but i love the story love it love it .. i started reading it here but i was reading it on ff.net. Give us a response too !! Or hey you can write me an email .. rorey22@aol.com jennie
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Reviewed By: lilyflower On: November 21, 2003 00:01 CST
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*laughs* Funny!! And thank Rin too!!! ON TAPE!!! Yeah, Miroku will sure as hell sell it all over the globe - won't be very long for Kaede and Shippou to actually SEE it real-life too!!!! ^-^ But gotta admit, Sess's dreams are more than kinda wet....lol Please continue!!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: November 20, 2003 16:43 CST
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Yow, it's so much more fun to read these things on mediaminer. No wonder Fluffy was so twitchy. Kudos to your muse on that scene. I await with bated breath kagome finding out the brothers are youkai...
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Title: Milkshake
Reviewed By: NoLabel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 13:12 CST
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SF!!!!! HOW LONG ARE YOU GOING TO WAIT?!?! AAHHHHH!! I CAN'T STAND THE SUSPENSE!! I mean, I've been following your story for who knows how long, and you still haven't gotten to the most important parts!!! ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGG!!! But anywayz, I loved the chapter! I thought it was sooooo cute for Rin to do that to Sesshou! ^-^ *big, mischevious grin* And of course, he absolutely just LOVED the lap dance, ne? But the dream was absolutely great! Oh, and Silver Fox? You are a god in my eyes! Great job! But back to the story. WHEN IS SESSHOU GONNA REVEAL HIS SECRET?! And when is he gonna realize that he actually does love Kagome? And WHEN'S KAGOME GONNA QUIT RUNNING AND GROW UP?! I mean, I don't wanna be rude or anything, but she knows that she loves him, and she now knows that he "loves" her, so why can't she accept it? I mean, yes, I realize there's protocol, but... Well, gotta go. Another great job on this, guys! Keep it up! (p.s., I loved the part of the lemon when Kagome was hiding under the covers... lol *grin* Ja ne!)
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: November 20, 2003 08:19 CST
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*waves hand to cool off* Uh, Silver? I'll take two of those *wink, wink*, to go, please! Just charge it to my tab, k? *laughs* Poor, frustrated, scheming, sneaky Sess! *growls* He gets every unfulfilled fantasy "Ag" sends his way! And *bows humbly* I'm so sorry about not updating, but I've got a really, really good reason! I've been kept hopping going for tests and whatnot. It seems I have to have some surgery done in the near future, and they have to figure out how extensive they need to be with it. *mutters* More like the doctors have to calculate how much the mortage payment on their beach house is for the next six months, and charge insurance accordingly. But soon, I swear! As usual, another superb chapter---and I absolutely loved the "milkshake"! ROTFL
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Title: PLease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Shuu On: November 20, 2003 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your stories, all of them actually... but i really have to say, When will Sess get a taste of revenge? what i mean is, he has a plan that possibly... ok, very much hurt kag... when does he get hurt? like jealous.... really jealous... for a few chappies... you know what i mean right?
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: November 19, 2003 23:30 CST
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hmm ignore the game stuff. i went blonde and forgot which game we were talking about hehe. oh well. i am going to beat the one i am working on now then play ff8. my bad. hehe.
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: November 19, 2003 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the new chapter as always. enjoyed the lemon. hmmm i wonder when sess will figure out he really does love her? thanks for updating. hmmm my kingdom hearts game only has one disk. i am to the point where i have beaten the ice titan. sora is level 67. i can probably beat ansem but i am trying to get level 100 so i can beat sephiroth and get the cool movie sequence at the end. if you need help on your game i can give you some advice. that is all for now.
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Reviewed By: Mistress Fluffy(nto signed in) On: November 19, 2003 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything great as usual. So who cares if Sess was a tad bit OOC he was great while during it...I woudln't mind hearing him sing. {::sighs as dreamy look comes into eyes::} Um yeah great chapter cannot wait, like usual, for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 22:04 CST
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*snickers* I've not laughed so hard at a fic in a while! The tears! They won't stop! *falls out of chair laughing* Just *snickers* picturing *giggles* Sesshoumaru *snorts* trying to act suave...'hearing' his thoughts as he makes his moves on Kagome... Okay, okay, enough! Hahahahaha This is one of my favorite of your more recent chapters. The imagery!
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 17:59 CST
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yum... cake... who cares if the roses are fruity? as long as they taste good! ::grin:: ouuu! this chappie rocked! hehe! naughty naughty sess... having dreams like that... ^_________^ where did you get that song? the 'milkshake' one? whose it by? lol! i havn't heard it yet... but then again i live in the middle of nowhere so we do tend to get things slow... can u belive that my public library has only 1 magna and no anime?! and the 1 magna is yu-gi-oh!? ::cries:: anways! plz update soon! ::cough earlier then next wed cough::
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Title: 7
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 14:52 CST
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Title: 8
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 23:46 CST
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: November 16, 2003 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappy as always! ^-^ I can't wait for the next chappy. Sesshy seems so horribly mean to Kagome, you know, where he like, fake cried, and al;l the little talks with his concience, Grrrr... he always seems to be an ass in one way or another in some stories. ._. I gotta go, Ja ne. Oh! And another song you should use is, 'It's been awhile' by Staind.........."It's been awhile, since I could, hold my head up high, and it's been awhile, since I first saw you...." ^-^ Ja! Amreld
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