| "To Bear Witness" Reviews/Comments [ 370 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2003 14:20 CDT
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*snickers* I like Kagome's reply to Kouga (about sexual harassment). I also enjoyed the bit with Sango and Inuyasha...after all, who could work for him and not argue? Haha |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 08:41 CDT
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Nice work ^^ Oh! I almost forgot to ask...did you mean for there to be another driver when Mir, San, and Inu left (since Kag said something about Mir driving). I do stuff like that all the time in mine (forget who is doing what and where *laughs*), but I wasn't sure if yours was intentional or not ^^
So, now Sesshoumaru thinks Kagome might make a good ally? I wonder if he'll start having nightmares about purification *laughs* Oh, I liked the bit about the Taiyoukai...where it is mentioned that Kagome sees his actions as self-defense against the mikos ^^ |
Reviewed By: smiley On: August 01, 2003 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No kikyo! But anyways, this is a very interesting fic, I don't think I've read one like it. I really like the sess/kag interaction and I can't wait to read more. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: smiley On: August 01, 2003 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No kikyo! But anyways, this is a very interesting fic, I don't think I've read one like it. I really like the sess/kag interaction and I can't wait to read more. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: smiley On: August 01, 2003 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No kikyo! But anyways, this is a very interesting fic, I don't think I've read one like it. I really like the sess/kag interaction and I can't wait to read more. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 22:03 CDT
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That last line from Sesshoumaru got me *laughs* Extremely well written. The dialogue is good, the description is good...I hate leaving lame reviews for fics I really like, but as usual...what can I really say? ^^ I get tired of saying "great fic" over and over again, but it's the truth. |
Reviewed By: blankis On: July 31, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're a very talented writer and this story is very good. Update soon please. Oh, and no kikyo, keep the bitch dead. |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: July 31, 2003 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woh. i'm still wondering who
was the one, sesshoumaru or kagome, made the last statement in chapter three. it's so easy to
figure out, it's hard. keep updating and keep on trucking.
this story just gets more fascinating.^-^ |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 31, 2003 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! what a great way to end that chapter. haha. sleeping in the nude! hahaha |
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP GOIN DO I HAVE TO TELL U TWICE? fine! keep going! is that enought times? cuz god help me i'll keep goin til' u litteraly KEEP goin. lol. sry little agressive there, been hanging out wit my big bro wayyy to much to much wrestleing oh well! plz plz plz plz wow this is extermaly unlike me-hmmm i must be getting softie again time to hang out wit my big bro again! u will hear from me again when i read ur next chappie. -HOPFULLY SOON *puppy face* |
Reviewed By: makumba-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 00:16 CDT
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i love it u have to right soon cause i can't wait!!!!!!!!! if u can could u send the next chappie to me at tuff_gal@cybergal.com for me? if u can THANK U!!!!!!!!!! keep righting!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: amanda On: July 23, 2003 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I just found this fic today, and I'd have to say it's really good! Can't wait to see what happens when the boys meet Kag. Can't say I would like for Kikyou to caome back, that would be just sooo unoriginal!! She just ruins the story for me. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 10:41 CDT
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Gah, I got send happy on the review. I think it would be interesting if Kikyou came back ^^ |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 10:38 CDT
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Very interesting! I think what you have written so far is great, it has really captured my interest (^_^) You have a great writing style, I like the way you're sneaking in things like the Tenseiga, and I thought the gumball part with Miroku was quite funny. |
Reviewed By: hyperchica On: July 19, 2003 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
it seems like it's a pretty good start!
please continue! |
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