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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: January 28, 2004 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just stopped! Not your most seat gripping cliff hanger, but a good one. I understand what the funky scarf is; the piece of cloth that she brought back from her dream, am I right? I am a little confused about the name changes for Katrina, she's Anut, her father is Ra (both Egyptian origin?) and if so who is Shu? The questions will never stop. Good chapter, though the reunion between Kagome and Sesshy was too short. Where's the romantic fluffy puff stuff? Try saying that three times fast.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 12:44 CST
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I GOT MY SIS TO READ IT! HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!! Now she's addicted too! :) I think her name's SilentStalker66 or something like that. WOW! Katrina's form was AWESOME! I loved the description for her eyes! Ohohoho I can't wait for the fight with her brother! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 28, 2004 09:54 CST
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Love this fic! one of my favorites! Adios!
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 00:54 CST
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*is frowning thoughtfully* isn't Ra the name of the Sun god in ancient Egypt? ..maybe it's something else... ya know, it almost seems like Katrina and Sutaasafaia had the whole thing planned out.. or maybe I'm still braindrained from finals and am thinking too much still. you know what's even more evil than finals? having to give an oral presentation. *hides face in hands* I HATE those. I hate them with a passion! grrr... anyways, heh, I love how Inu got Rin up. (finalsamdou know what's even more evil than finals? having to give an oral presentation. *hides face in hands* I HATE those. I hate them with a passion! anyways, I love how you had Inu wake Rin up. *looks thoughtful again* didn't Kagome's dream have Sesshomaru somehow end up in a tube thingy..? maybe thus explaining the sense of deja vu both of them felt... I've noticed, that in most fics, you can't have Kagura and not have Kanna...ok, I think I'm thinking too hard.. *laughs* that was mean what you did you Inu at the end, but it was too funny that he didn't seem to get it. that just helps prove how clueless that guy is. *chocks* Silver gave you that idea at BREAKFAST?!? *wrinkles her nose* Naraku AIR DRIES after taking a shower?! EWWWW!!!! *sighs and looks at Silver* just another typical male.
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Reviewed By: (blazingnymph7) On: January 28, 2004 00:16 CST
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Yay!Fuffy is back in action! I know yashy is going to kick maten's ass but does Rin get to use the few movesthat Kagomre Taught her?and what are shippo and sonia doing in the meantime? please update soon
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Title: 12
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 20:39 CST
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Title: Grr
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 19:22 CST
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{:: everybody is already on stage and ready::} CiCi: {::puffs out breath::} ok then... Sango: what's wrong? CiCi: i feel like yelling at some one... {::every one points to sessho::} sessho: oh shit. CiCi: {::evil grin::} hehehhehe you here now! {::CiCi drags sessho into a seperate room and yelling can be heard.::} inuyasha: yea i think she's pissed that sessho won't tell kagome how he feels... kagome: {::blushes::} CiCi: {::comes back out::} NOW THEN! lets get to work! {::every one starts to reherse::} CiCi: ok then. so hows life? Kagome: CICI! you little bitch! you didn't have this in the script! CiCi: ah heh. looks like i'm in trouble. {::turns back to you::} why couldn't she stay pissed at you? {::sees kago is coming after her::} uh...yea i gotta go!
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Title: speechless
Reviewed By: Fluffy'slova4life(to damn friggin lazy) On: January 25, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome: {::comes stomping past::} SF! where the hell are you!? CiCi: {::reading wake boarding mag::} oi! keep it down! jesus... kagome: {::looks at CiCi::} CiCi: {::slams mag shut and walks off stage::} there! {::sits on one of the seats::} much better! now where was i... Sango: {::comes slamming in::} i'm here! sorry i'm late! i had to kick some kitsune ass for going through my purse! CiCi: {::slams mag shut again and rips it to shreds::} sango: what'd you that for? i thought you loved wake boarding? CiCi: i do. but i can't find any good boards to buy when people yell all the friggin time! Miroku: wow your watching your language. {::looks around::} wheres JD? CiCi: HEY! your late! i have noooooooooo idea where the heck she went... Kagome: {::comes stomping on other direction of stage::} SF! where the HELL ARE YOU? Miroku: but as we all see she never watchs her language even when JD is around... CiCi: {::throughs hands up::} yea well lets hope she stays pissed at SF and not me for chappy 18 and 19... Sango: why what are you planning? CiCi: heh heh heh Miroku/sango: oh shit. CiCi: but enough of that- kagome:{::comes to front of stage::} {::yells at the top of lungs::} SF WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU!? I KNOW YOUR FUCKING HERE NOW WHERE ARE YOU,DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CiCi: {::covers ears::} ok now thats it! {::runs after kago::} Sango: {::shakes head::} i hope JD didn't hear that... Miroku: you know she did, shes an inu-youkai duh. sango: anyway CiCi meant to say she enjoyed the latest chappys very very very much! Miroku: laterz. {::turns to sango::} ready to go get our asses whipped for being late? Sango: yup...
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Reviewed By: Kizna Kyouru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 12:04 CST
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YAY Sango is awake! ohh but she doesn't get to help save the day...and the brothers. Will Katrina's father get saved? Well its not really like i care about him so thats not important but the only question i have is: did Kagome have a parachute when she jumped out of the plane? if soo i missed that part ^_^;;
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: January 24, 2004 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffle* I see the name......b-b-b-but, WHEWRE'S THE SONG?!?!?!?!!? OoO I don't see the words!!!!!!!!! >O< Where are they!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?! v.v Well, even if you didn't have the WORDS! it was a good chappy. My god Sesshy is such an evil conniving bastard. You have just notched him down on my list of likableness for the time being! Amreld
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: January 24, 2004 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, heh,.....O.o *sweatdrop* Well, DON'T FORGET TO USE STAIND!!!!!!!!!!! And, maybe if you even got the chance.....LINKIN PARK!!! or, Disturbed, or Metallica, or Staitc X, or MARILYN MANSON!!!!! Sorry, I know he's a freakish transvestite, but he's cool!!!!! ^^' Ja ne!!! Amreld
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: January 23, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I am soooo sorry for not reviewing lately! I ahve completely forgotten about this fic and this site while things have gotten so hecticv on ff.net. v.v IT realy sucked for a whiule over there, buit now things are getting bett, on ff.nrt, ot your story. ^^ DON'T FORGET ABOUT STAIND!!!!!!! JA ne!!! Amreld
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Reviewed By: ladihouki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! Another great chappy as expected! As for the cliffy, I love cliffy's! Knock 'em dead! Nan
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:24 CST
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Whoops! I meant to say Katrina not Kira, heh heh heh been reading to many MARS's
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:24 CST
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THEY'D BOTH WISHED THEY'D DIE!!! Nooooo that doesn't sound anywhere near a happy ending! Oh well. Sonia's cool! What type of music does she listen to? Oh dear, Kira is just sooo mixed up! I love her, but I hate her too! Ugh. Oh well! I've been pestering my sister to read this fic, but she's being stubborn. I'll get her yet! ^_~
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