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Reviewed By: Amreld On: October 27, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks*....*bursts out laughing* Honestly! Ghandi?! I had to watch a movie on him in social studies at the beginning of the year, and after that, ever time someone in my class would see a middle eastern or indian or one time even confucious, the called him Ghandi, it was soooo irrritationg. Can you imagine sitting in class for a week and a half, taking notes on a movie called 'Ghandi' God, I evenhad to learn the name of his wife, and I remeber it too. "Kasturba" *shudder* Torture....I swear the teachers want to kill me before I get to highschool. -_-'' Great story! I am making an AU fic that is sort of like 'Andromeda' I got the idea for it after watching a documentary on super massive black holes, (yes I like to watch stuff like that. it was about two hours long ^-^) I decided to use that as a way to destroy the earth and Kaggy would be the captain of a space ship! ^-^ It would be sess/kag of course...^^ LONG review...sorry about that! ^^ Read your stories on ff.net! ^^ Love 'em! Ja ne! Amreld the sky elf
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i just decided that since i loved your other ones i would give this one a chance. since i really am not into business type things. but as usual you have blown me away. it took me a while to get caught up though. love the story.
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Title: hiyaku_de_mon@sesshoumaru.zzn.com
Reviewed By: tessa3 On: October 23, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**bows profusely** Thank you thank you thank you...for the email letting me know that you have posted yet another chapter...**sighs** I luv you to death ...but now you have me wondering how sessho is going to find out that Kag is dreaming about him...is she finally going to tell him about the dream **gasps** finally....neways thanks again for the email and let me know when you get the next chappie.....
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Title: 4
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 12:17 CDT
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Title: great
Reviewed By: arch_angel On: October 22, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic.....sooo original....I cant wait til' u get to the musshy part...lol keep updating ....ur doing a great job
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 08:40 CDT
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Loved it, as usual. But my poor molars are being ground to a nub waith all of this dancing around the main romance issue!!! I need fluff! I need waff!! I need Kagome to pounce on Sess like a golden retriever on a juicy bone and...ahem. Well. You get the idea. So, carry on with the...*gestures vaguely with hand* Yeah. Keep it up!
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Title: you make me look forward to tuesdays
Reviewed By: VampirePrincessMiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're such a gifted writer who pays attn to details. i love the way you portray the characters..their thoughts, facial expression, etc. you bring them to life. your dialog has purpose and i like how you draw back on previous dialog. it's like the characters themselves have a running memory of what is said and how that makes them feel. it amazes me how you keep track of each character's different personality and manage to keep them "in character." although your story is much longer than most fics, there's never a dull moment. thankyou for the long chapters. i wish i could get a new chapter each day, but i realize quality work takes time. i can't express enough how much i love this story. and that says a lot considering sess/kag isn't my favorite pair and i generally avoid AU like the plague. much respect, miyu =0)
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 20:43 CDT
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Another great chapter. Cute. I'm too tired and irritated to write more *laughs*
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!!! must...have...more!!! this story is sooooo good! and fluffy is sooo cute! lol! even if he is acting like a arse 'ole... hehe! wow! a shirtless fluffy... ::drooling:: ::coming back to earth:: please update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! ^_^
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Title: It's me again! Just... not logged in.
Reviewed By: Inverse Laina On: October 21, 2003 19:11 CDT
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Hmm... *smirks* Someone needs a cold shower, neh? *runs away from an anrgy Sesshou-maru laughing her head off.* Nyah nyaah! :p ^__^
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Reviewed By: 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 18:43 CDT
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 14:46 CDT
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UPDATE PLEASE I LUV THIS STORY AND IF U DONT UPDATE I WILL SEND INUYASHA AND FLUFFY TO MAKE U WRITE MORE.....OH DID I FORGET PLEASE
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Reviewed By: kistune princess On: October 18, 2003 15:16 CDT
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finally i can review the story just keeps gettin' better. I love how your devoleping sesshy's character and i noe this is supossed to be like just seshy and kagome but could included some s/m keep up the great job
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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 14:42 CDT
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CiCi: {:: bolts up doors::}eh.... ok yea...whew! now what was i saying? ah yea! hehe wet sessho *drool* ans shirtless would be even better...*drool* oh hell yea... *BAM!!!* CiCi: ah shit! sessho: hey! NO! get back here! {inu-chan no where to be seen} CiCi: uh no! sessho: {::trys to grab cici but misses::} CiCi: eek!-- whoa! WAIT! i'm a freakin inu yokia what the f*ck is up with that? kagome: for young minds i choose to take the camera out at this time....ehhh {::pokes head back in room::} uh yea its not safe at the moment...
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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 14:35 CDT
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{cici and the inu-cast go through MANY MANY security checkpoints to get to SF's main office} CiCi: OK! {::turns to kagome::} when they go for a cavity scan thats when i draw the line! kagome: {::laughs::} the inu brothers still having a fight w/ security gaurds. finally get up to sf's office/stage thingy~ CiCi: youwhoooo?SF?? SF: oh hi! CiCi: HI! oh and thanks for putting me in the chappy! YAY! i happy! tigereyes: what? did i miss some thin white-cunning-dog? CiCi: uhhh....eh heh heh....that would be my friend amy, don't ask about how i got that nickname or er how she gave it to me- {::inu brothers barge in::} inu-chan: damn SF, since when did you have such uptight security?- sessho: yea and arrogant ones at that... CiCi: oh shut up! both inu brothers glare CiCi: oh shit... and the battle goes down in history......
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