| "To Bear Witness" Reviews/Comments [ 370 ] |
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Title: why?
Reviewed By: Mis On: October 05, 2003 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its very good.. but I'm upset about one thing... why do u have to make Kagome soooo short... why can't u make her 5'5" or 5'6" or sumthing... because 5'2" is just too damn short I think so why?? :P
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 15:04 CDT
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*grins* I'm trying to confuse you by skipping between ff.net and mm.org as I review ;p Actually, I just go ahead and read whichever works... Hairwashing scene...cute. Umm...Oh! The fight and aftermath, interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, and her squeamishness over the blood in his hair...lovely. I'm actually rather low on words right now, low on brain function in fact, and now I have to go move stuff, so *swishes out*
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: October 01, 2003 08:05 CDT
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Yay! Kagome finally let on that she understands at least some of what Sess has been saying to other people. *sigh* That man really needs to get a clue and realize that Kagome isn't as obvious as she seems. Honestly. Oh, and hello! What is with his hair?! It is cosmically unfair for a man to look better than any woman---and still look like a man (sort of). It's a conspiracy, I tell you. And we fanfic authors are perptuating the myth! But I can't seem to stop myself! And yay for the fluff. You may lament about no angst, but a girl can only take so much of that before she wants to go kerbonkers. I love the way you draw out tension in romantic relationships. It gives the readers something to bite their nails over, worry over, speculate about, laugh about, and generally keeps us coming back time and again. So, go SF!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 01, 2003 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wonder what Kagome's reaction will be ... just hope that Sesshou won't fuck up too much on this things.. girls are very sensitive with thing like this you know . Just hope you will make him suffer a bit ::LOL:: after all he does sorta deserve it . . . playing with a female feeling is one of the most horrendous crime to commit.
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Reviewed By: MysticalAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 14:58 CDT
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Ff.net won't let me on, so I'm reading it here, at mm.org. All I have to say about the flashback is INU IS SO DAMN KAWAII! You make Inu so adoriable in your fic when he is a pup. ^^ Oh and the cliffy is just so mean. Now I have to wait till the next chappie is out. *Pout* Ja ne!
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Title: bitch
Reviewed By: Niamha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
could you BE any meaner? NO god that was the worst thing ever!!!! *whines* how could you? Anyway i REALLY cant wait till next chapter. This story is so great!
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Reviewed By: Golden Skies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! They can't take him! You must update!! i must know what happens!! especially after you pulled that trick with Unexpected Allies part 3, that was just evil!
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Reviewed By: Helen On: September 24, 2003 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maa, you really have an early death wish don't you SF? First, it was that misleading chapter for "Trial," now you leave us with a cliffhanger. What next? Anyway, just wanted to say that this chapter was awesome. Love the whole chase scene with Sesshoumaru and Kagome. That was so kawaii. Well, update soon. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Crimson demon On: September 24, 2003 20:58 CDT
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Wow! Great chapter, and i cant wait for the next part. Sheesh, Sesshoumaru needs to stop being such a girl, and kiss her... *sigh* poor fooslish man... er... demon...
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: September 24, 2003 20:49 CDT
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Ah, yes. Let the flaming commence! How could you leave it there?!?! This is becoming a bad habit with you, you know. First with "unexpected Alles", and now this! Unbelievable!As if I'm not anxious enough for the next chapters as it is! *huffs* Fine. You're the author, so it's your call, but you're evil. Evil! *smiles* And I love it!
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Title: !!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: filialunae618 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 20:25 CDT
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ooooooo!!!!! omg that's made me so happy!!::wipes tears away:: ur one of the very few ppl who have said happy bday (besides my police officer friends that i made last nite... O_0)!!! lol and ive said this b4 ive read the chapter so ill have 2 go back but im sure it's up 2 ur awesome standard! so now that ive had a slightly better bday... im g2 go read. we should talk sumtime bc ur like my new online best friend! thanx! ~aya
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF On: September 22, 2003 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally got a chance to read your story, and I must say this is a real-stay-put story. I'm glad I waited to read it because I got to read so many chapters at once. So HURRY UPDATE!!!!!!
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Title: blah
Reviewed By: meow-chan On: September 18, 2003 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no!!!! but i kinda felt it comin. ah well. |
Title: heehee.......
Reviewed By: meow-chan On: September 18, 2003 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooohhhhhhhh :-) I like this. ^_________^ ::smiles mischievously:: |
Reviewed By: lunabelle On: September 18, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. Keep them coming. I like that teasing Kagome does to Sesshoumaru by taking his stuff. (she is sooooo flirting). |
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