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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 18:57 CST
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*shakes head* Katrina got Sesshoumaru naked. What would Kagome think? What would Inuyasha think. What? It wasn't a love scene? And I thought his death threats were his way of showing affection *laughs* Cheers for Kagome, who is going against the law to save Sesshoumaru. What a blow to his ego, that a mere mortal much save his furry hide. Why hasn't he killed Naraku? Scratch that...he shouldn't kill Naraku. Naraku is a nice guy...really (>_>) Your poor sister...do you want to scar her for life?? *grins* No, no, the funky chicken is a good thing *slowly steps away from SF*
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Reviewed By: Inu-Amacatisia On: January 21, 2004 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!! Ok, I'll say this first. Your story is awesome...but, YOU DIDN"T PAIR KAGOME WITH INUYASHA!!!!!You should have. I'm not telling you how to write your story but it would have been way cooler with that pairing. But anyway good story.
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry *mm.org hates me, I just know it!* On: January 21, 2004 18:26 CST
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*is jumping up and down* hey! isn't that...thing...from Kagome's dream?! when she was dreaming of Sesshomaru before whe knew about him, and he ended up in the..thing..in her dream?!^-^ *looks at Naraku* *in a sarcastic voice* gee...I wonder WHY no one understands you. *looks at Shippo* poor Shippo, always inder appreciated. *gives Shippo a hug* *looks confused* it was THAT bad of a cliffie. *looks at Sliver* I beg to differ about sex being able to solve anything. anyways, later ^-^
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Reviewed By: Phoebemoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:11 CST
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you cant kill kagome!! that would be too cruel. but that whole sword coming from her and coming back to her when her heart gets broken thing worries me. .. hmm i wonder what you have planned for that?
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Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hiss* evil, evil I say... *sigh* why must you do this to us? I'm not saying I'm not grateful for the fact that you've got long chapters and you've been pretty good at updating regularly, but seriously. One of these times you need to end on something other than a cliffie. anywho, this was another excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next *dreamy sigh* i love wednesdays
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Reviewed By: SessKagForever On: January 21, 2004 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOHOO! NEW CHAPTER! A great chapter, if I do say so myself ^_^ SESS/KAG is the best pairing ever... please update again soon for if you do otherwise... it may be dangerous to mine and many other people's health! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: January 21, 2004 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dawns mad sciencist costume* He's alive! Alive! Always wanted to say that. Poor Inu and Sesshy, their going to get the youkai sucked right out of them. Well, maybe our favorite miko can stop that from happening. The whole thing with Naraku posing as Katrina's father remains me of Star Wars. *Naraku appears as Katrina's father* "Karina, I am your father" *shivers at the thought of Naraku being a daddy* Really good chapter, glad Sango is awake. One question: What does her nickname for Miroku mean? I know very little Japanese. And another thing, Kagome just jumped out of the heliocopter with nothing, leaving everyone else to stare in wonder? Boy, she really does want him back. Hope she's fully charged. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Blazingnymph7* On: January 21, 2004 00:49 CST
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Ok, i normally HATE cliffies, but this one was actually well written! Loved the chapter. Ummm, do you think Sesshy will ever use the supper cool swords??? What about Yashy and the regenerator??? Oh, what will Kagome's reaction when she finds sesshy naked and tied? will she tell the real Sesshy from Naraku?please answer
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 22:18 CST
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Reviewed By: Nan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! another great chappy! loved it my dear, loved it.
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Reviewed By: (blazingnymph7) On: January 15, 2004 03:39 CST
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ohhh, what ever happenned to the swords? will kag-chan forgive sesshou-kun? And what king of youkai is Katrina? to many questions,too many questions...Ahhhh!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: January 14, 2004 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my gosh, this has become such an tightly woven story of secrets and everything has been revealed in one chapter. There are things in this chapter that I forgot about (the necklace) that are a key part of the story. By the way have I mention that you have an excellent way of writing a complex story and keeping the readers also coming back. Love the sence between Kagome and Sesshoumaru when he tries to wake her. I was beginning to think, finally they can get over their fighting and the once cold-hearted youkai would listen to the voice inside his head. But oh NO, he has to give her the last piece of the key and act like her life wouldn't be in danger. Sometimes I wonder if Sesshoumaru has a brain. Great chapter, looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: January 14, 2004 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man this story is getting depressing...so let me see it will be like in her dream where he is in the glass tube and naraku is sucking the youkai out of him, she has to save him, hmmm what about that sword she made for him. is it still working or did he break her heart and made it stop? thanks for updating. it is good. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 13:58 CST
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YAY! You just made my day! ^-^ I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!! I'm trying to get my sister to read it too, but she's stubborn. So happy you updated, and no I am most certainly not pissed... right now I'm just really curious to see how Sesshou and Kagome get out of this one. As long as neither of them dies in the end, I'll be just fine! ^-^
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: You're very welcome. *smacks her forehead* Sesshoumaru is my favorite character, and let's face it, I'm pretty much in love with him, but sometimes he is sooo stupid. Like Kagome said, she had the key to the free world around her neck, and Sesshoumaru said it was none of her business. *sigh* Three strikes you're out Sessy. But on other notes, this was very long, and very good. ^__^ Inuyasha: O.O You're in love with Sesshoumaru? Isis: *blushes* Um, yeah, pretty much. Kagome: Aww, how cute! Isis: But shhh! He's the only one who doesn't know it! So you can't tell Sesshou anything! Sesshoumaru: What can't you tell me? Isis: O.O *gulp* Never mind. Update soon please SF.
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