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| "To Bear Witness" Reviews/Comments [ 370 ] | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: .........i have no idea wat to put here...^-^
Reviewed By: Yuki-chan aka sesshous mate On: July 05, 2004 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic, its overall one of the best ive ever read. Yeah im not gunna explain the rating thingy cuz im lazy and its 5:00 im the mornin.^-^ I really liked ur fight scenes too...... :thinks of kanna dying: ....still can't imagin her with a gun.....I really really really hope u write a sequal..unless u already hav and i havent got the memo..now im going bak to sleep^-^
| Title: to bear witness
Reviewed By: whit On: June 23, 2004 20:22 CDT
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!! That was the best fanfic i ever read in my life and it was great. i guess it is the end but i hope that you write another story as good as this one. Everything is a 10
| Title: hehe ^^;;;
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is about time I actually finish reading this story >.> .... i can be so lazy at times... _ _; well anyways AMAZING fic.... just like the others ^.^ well i must be off now... time to go read your other fics now...hehehe ja ne ~sess @~~~
| Reviewed By: Mira the neko youkai On: May 21, 2004 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did i see the word sequal?! ( or something lik that...) well im keepin my hopes up for it!
| Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hola! I loved the ending although ya worried me for a minute there with the Kagome thing but you know not to kill Kaggie. I like Inu's new power and Rin's wedding that was cute! Sequel sounds very good to me but that's up to you, later!
| Reviewed By: nan (ladihouki) On: May 11, 2004 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its over? really? sequel? wahhhhhhh this was such a great story! i can't believe it's over. You did such an excellent job but I must say for the finale it was kinda lame! I mean I loved it & all but had I not bothered to read your commentary I would never had known that was it! Well I'll be looking for the sequel then. Good job!
| Reviewed By: Sylvianna On: April 29, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I feel like crying. It was so good and I can't believe that it's finally over. I feel like there's a hole in my life now! Anyways, congratulations! You did an excelent job and if you did own Inuyasha I'm sure you could print this and sell millions of copies! I think a sequel would be amazing!
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 12:32 CDT
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A SEQUEL!!!! YAY!! If you need some ideas or beta-ing I'll be glad to help! This story was the BEST! I LOVE it so much! ^-^ AMAZING JOB!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Teru04 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 23:46 CDT
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OMG!!!! YOU HAVE TO DO A SEQUAL!!!! I will love you always if you do! Sessy and Kag deserve kids...Yeah...So...Can't wait! Thanks a lot! This story rocked...now if I could only get pass MY writer's block and finish my story...Writer's block sucks...Well, I really hope I see your sequal soon...Thanks again!
| Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: April 23, 2004 21:36 CDT
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WOw...the story...is...ended...*sniff* I don't get what happened to Kagome though. I knew he was crying. At first, I thought it was blood, but you said that it wasn't blood. So I was like...SESSHY IS CRYING!?=D Well, I loved your story till the very end, and I hope you write another story soon. Or update your other stories. That'd be nice. Byes. ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)
| Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ending. But did you forget the lemon scene in the last chapter or did you do that on purpose. For what I have read of you fics you usually put a + sign before the mention of a lemon to let he audience know that one is coming up. Either nice story. I think a sequel will be good.
| Title: Amreld
Reviewed By: Stolen Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffsniff* *cry* I can't figure out how to get to your bio pages. ;_; Oh well. Sorry about my picture. I drew another one. I picture of a 16 year old sesshy. just his head and shoulders though. I'll upload it to mm.org and then you can look at it. ^^ And the story was wonderful! One of my all time favorites! IU can't wait for a sequel. Speaking of a sequel. I was wondering if I could give you an idea? And maybne a summary to go with it? You don't have to use it of course, but, I mean, ^^, maybe it could give you ideas? okay, here it is, it's kinda long though......................................Kagome and Sesshoumaru haven't exactly "settled down", but they are just like any other youkai and miko couple owning a multi-million dollar business. Still traveling due to Sesshoumaru's line of "work" and The occasional mission from Kaede, things are never boring. But how could they with Inuyasha and Miroku around? O.o....Well. Kaede calls desperate for Kagome, Sango, and Miroku to take on another mission; only because none of the other Marshals are, well, equipped, to take on this type of mission. In Egypt, a museum owned by the U.S.A is robbed. And only one thing is stolen. A black urn was taken from a display case, puzzling everyone as to why something worth more was not taken. But slowly, as an investigation goes on, people begin to get...sick, in a way. And, as fatalities set in, the bodies vanish! As the sands of Egypt begin to turn black, people flee for their lives. And worse, mummies in museums all over the world are disappearing! What the HELL is going on!? And what are these weird snake things crawling all over the place? And what does Katrina know that she's not telling anyone... things are going to get interesting for Sesshoumaru, his family, and all their friends. Because of course if Kagome, Sango and Miroku are going to go on a mission everyone else is going to follow them! ^_~ As you can see, I've left many things about the story to you. You can sculpt the bad giuy to your own whims, and bend, mold, or break anyhting to you liking. Even throw things out or put shit it. What I was getting at with the snakes was, the snakes, mimions of the 'evil thing without a name' Crawl into the bodies of the mummies or people who have been killed by the 'poison' it's not a disease, they've been poisoned, and posses them, making them kinda like zombies. But, the don't walk, they vanish in a cloud of black sand. ^^ Just a little thing off the top of my head that you might want to consider. And you can have fun with it too. Well, I hope it isn't too confusing.....or too deep. ^^ Maybe it gives you a good idea of where you want the sequel to go? And, I know you probably want it to be original from your own mind work, so I won't be offended if you don't take up the idea. and you kind of provoked the Epyptian god vibe with Katrina and all that stuff with her family, so I hope you know where I'm coming from with the concept of the Egyptian things I'm rambling about. And no. I did not get any of my ideas from 'The Mummy'. Nothing that I'm thinking of goes along the lines of that. If you are confused in any way. E-mail me and ask me questions! I'm all ears! My e-mail address is........ My_mind_is_laughing_at_mne_4_1@hotmail.com. Ja ne! Actually, I;m goign to e-mail this to you too. Just so you get it sooner.
| Reviewed By: Amreld [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The side story or the whole story? Caus ei'll give you both. the side story, for mm.org, is....... http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/54094/..........and the one for my whole story, which is only on ff.net right now, is............. http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1502075&chapter=3........... it sucks so bad at the beginning that it makes me want to vomit. Also, my chapters are out of wack until about the 8th or 9th chappy. So you'll have to lookn at the beginning of them before you read. And yes, I made some mistakes in a few of the chapters that make them confusing. -_-' So don't hurt me. Bye bye.
| Reviewed By: Amreld On: April 23, 2004 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't find me? Weird....I couldn't find a different author io was looking for. Mediaminer is so weird. And a bit undependable iof you ask me. -_- Well, this was a reeeeeally cool chapter. Weird, but cool. Weepy too. But still awesome. Oh, and a weird thing happend. Mediaminer did something to my pic, so I havce to RE-UPLOAD IT. Damn. Stupid site.
| Reviewed By: (fireash) On: April 23, 2004 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great ending. when i first started to read it i didn't think i'd like it. not the business type and all. but i really loved it and thought it turned out well. thanks for sharing and always completing your fics. i will still be reading your others.
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