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Reviewed By: Mitsukai no shouten On: October 29, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....*Amreld bursts into tears* WAAHAHAHAHA!!! N-no m-more -ch-chappys to r-read. *sniffle* I'm listening to Linkin Parks 'session' while writing this so i'm typing to a beat. it's really fun to do that you know...LOVED THE COOMENT ABOUT KEANU REEVES! He is SO hot! The only thing to describe him would be eye-candy. *drools* Box under the bed hot! That's him! Along with Sesshy-kun and Naraku-kun. Yeah, without his pelt the bishie is total hotness. *drools again* Okay, gotta go now! GET A LEMON IN THERE OR ELSE! ^-^ Onegai? Mitsukai no shouten a.k.a Amreld the sky elf A fanfiction.net author
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Reviewed By: Crimson demon On: October 29, 2003 19:50 CST
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Hah! You are alive! I knew it! Write more please!
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: October 29, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You think 'Faint' is a kissing song? O~.^O Strange, although, FINALLY WE GET A GOOD FIGHT SCENE! You need justr a little bit more detail in those. Sadly, I suck at writing fluff, but I rock at writing fighting or battle scenes. I STILL need to work on my fluffing things up. *pouts* ^-^ Wellm we're in the same boat time wise, for fluff and romance anyway, I have 25 chappy's in my story on ff.net and they've only kissed ONCE!!! I have seen some stories that have ten chapters, a hell of a lot of fluff, LEMONS, AND THEY MADE IT BELIEVABLE AND ENJOYABLE TOO!!!! Why must I be curesd with a broken muse? Pearl: HEY! I am not broken! I just use my battle inspirationing more than my fluff part. Max: Suuurrrre you do. I am her general/humor muse and I do round the clock work! Do you know how hard it is to inspire her into stringing fluff, battle, and humor together?! I didn't think so! Spike: *bouncing around in circles in place* Amreld: -_-' My god, my muses and my hyper/evil half never stop arguing. Love the story! Awesome! ^_______^ ^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^ ^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~^-~ JA NE! Amreld the sky elf a.k.a Mitsukai no shouten an author on fanfiction.net
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 00:17 CST
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yea! great chapter! couldn't stop laughing at the end. love the dream sequence. very detailed. oh and i am updating tonight.
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Title: 3
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 12:53 CST
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: October 27, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks*....*bursts out laughing* Honestly! Ghandi?! I had to watch a movie on him in social studies at the beginning of the year, and after that, ever time someone in my class would see a middle eastern or indian or one time even confucious, the called him Ghandi, it was soooo irrritationg. Can you imagine sitting in class for a week and a half, taking notes on a movie called 'Ghandi' God, I evenhad to learn the name of his wife, and I remeber it too. "Kasturba" *shudder* Torture....I swear the teachers want to kill me before I get to highschool. -_-'' Great story! I am making an AU fic that is sort of like 'Andromeda' I got the idea for it after watching a documentary on super massive black holes, (yes I like to watch stuff like that. it was about two hours long ^-^) I decided to use that as a way to destroy the earth and Kaggy would be the captain of a space ship! ^-^ It would be sess/kag of course...^^ LONG review...sorry about that! ^^ Read your stories on ff.net! ^^ Love 'em! Ja ne! Amreld the sky elf
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i just decided that since i loved your other ones i would give this one a chance. since i really am not into business type things. but as usual you have blown me away. it took me a while to get caught up though. love the story.
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Title: hiyaku_de_mon@sesshoumaru.zzn.com
Reviewed By: tessa3 On: October 23, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**bows profusely** Thank you thank you thank you...for the email letting me know that you have posted yet another chapter...**sighs** I luv you to death ...but now you have me wondering how sessho is going to find out that Kag is dreaming about him...is she finally going to tell him about the dream **gasps** finally....neways thanks again for the email and let me know when you get the next chappie.....
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Title: 4
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 12:17 CDT
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Title: great
Reviewed By: arch_angel On: October 22, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic.....sooo original....I cant wait til' u get to the musshy part...lol keep updating ....ur doing a great job
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 08:40 CDT
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Loved it, as usual. But my poor molars are being ground to a nub waith all of this dancing around the main romance issue!!! I need fluff! I need waff!! I need Kagome to pounce on Sess like a golden retriever on a juicy bone and...ahem. Well. You get the idea. So, carry on with the...*gestures vaguely with hand* Yeah. Keep it up!
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Title: you make me look forward to tuesdays
Reviewed By: VampirePrincessMiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're such a gifted writer who pays attn to details. i love the way you portray the characters..their thoughts, facial expression, etc. you bring them to life. your dialog has purpose and i like how you draw back on previous dialog. it's like the characters themselves have a running memory of what is said and how that makes them feel. it amazes me how you keep track of each character's different personality and manage to keep them "in character." although your story is much longer than most fics, there's never a dull moment. thankyou for the long chapters. i wish i could get a new chapter each day, but i realize quality work takes time. i can't express enough how much i love this story. and that says a lot considering sess/kag isn't my favorite pair and i generally avoid AU like the plague. much respect, miyu =0)
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 20:43 CDT
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Another great chapter. Cute. I'm too tired and irritated to write more *laughs*
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!!! must...have...more!!! this story is sooooo good! and fluffy is sooo cute! lol! even if he is acting like a arse 'ole... hehe! wow! a shirtless fluffy... ::drooling:: ::coming back to earth:: please update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! ^_^
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Title: It's me again! Just... not logged in.
Reviewed By: Inverse Laina On: October 21, 2003 19:11 CDT
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Hmm... *smirks* Someone needs a cold shower, neh? *runs away from an anrgy Sesshou-maru laughing her head off.* Nyah nyaah! :p ^__^
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