| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: jink On: June 14, 2004 00:09 CDT
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All in all I like this fic..hehe I think it's funny that you've called sessy "fluff butt" I almost fell out of my chair laughing at some of the antics you've put them through. I look forward to reading more.
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Title: Kim2090
Reviewed By: Kim20021990 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 19:58 CDT
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OMG LOL, this story is hilarious. I now started reading it and your little refrences makes me laugh. In this chapter I liked the part bout Naraku going to hell and Making a last note to himself. ( Who would do that. lol)
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: May 10, 2004 09:08 CDT
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I'm glad you like the reviews you are getting but I think I need to take a break for a little while. I have a ten page research report due for a class and I no where near finihed. I also have to start paying attention in my other classes if I hope to pass and graduate this year. I liked the chapter and the one before. Your writing is getting much better. Keep up the good work. Love Miss Nikki
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Reviewed By: Greg Selm-Orr On: May 06, 2004 23:19 CDT
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This is one of the best fics I have ever read. Although, Kikyo and Naraku's fate was a bit disappointing.
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Reviewed By: a fan On: May 04, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on your baby. You're a good writer, and your spelling and grammar is getting much better as you write. Seeing as you cant stay in front of a comp for long maybe you could get a ghost writer.
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Title: Darn I forgot to sign out!! *growls*
Reviewed By: Miss Nikki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 16:27 CDT
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Okay...Your writing is getting much better. I can't believe it. Your a fast learner. I liked the last chapter and this one is even better. I have a ten page research paper due and I only have the outline and title page done. I'm wayyyy behind. So this review with be short and sweet. Thanks for writing a story with all my favorite things in it. Not that your story couldn't stand a little more Homo bashing. Tyemka: That's Hojo bashing!! MissNikki: Whatever!! Well thanks and have to go. Oh yeah and mistakes women is plural. Singular is woman. Just Thought I'd Let you know. Love MN
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Reviewed By: no one On: May 02, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur writting is gettin betta keep at it
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay you up-dated and can't wait till you do it again and really really really really really really really really really great chappy^_^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 20:14 CDT
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this is great a fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 28, 2004 17:54 CDT
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Another truely beautiful chapter! Sorry to hear that you are unable to use the computer a lot at the moment, but in a way it's a good thing as you most likely need the rest. Don't worry about updates for now, we'll all be here when you come back, or at least I will even if no-one else is ^_^ Sorry that this isn't the longest review I've done but life is a little hectic at the moment and I'm a bit muddled with my words...sorry again, too much information. Thank you for writing this, it truely has been a joy to read. Please once more accept my words of good luck and best wishes, I look forwards to your return. Till then take care and the best of luck, Hououza
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Title: Love the story
Reviewed By: HeeroYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. It's wonderfully written with a lot of love, humor, and fun (can't forget the lemons either ^_^). I've been reading your story for the past month or so (mainly looking for the updates), and this is the first time I've reviewed it. I want to hear more of this story, so I'm hoping that my review (as well as many others) will motivate you to continue the story. I'm looking forward to further updates. I don't mind the spelling errors either. No one is expected to speak in perfect English and having errors makes it seem more "believable" (don't know if it's the right word to use, but it seemed fitting). btw, I hope your marriage and child-bearing go very well and without incident.
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Reviewed By: Kikisuteru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 00:52 CDT
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I love your disfunctional family!!! Can I be part of it? If not, I'll settle for Miroku. I also like how you made Sessy...umm...soft? I would say whimpy but that doesn't quiet fit. It's also cute how you made the child of all time (Inuyasha) so mature. You always make me laugh. And next time your union peoples attack, send them my way, too. >^.^< Anyways... Have a nice day!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww this is soo cute
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwww
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Title: email me and I'll be your beta reader... Sweet_T_Cocoa_86@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: April 22, 2004 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm the 211th review so as I see it you already owe us a big surprise. I'll be waiting. And congrats on your marriage. I feel like I know you personally already and we've only been talking through the reviews and story. We'll I'm glad your back and I hope your honey-moon was a thing to be enjoyed greatly. Hey! what did you bring me back? *sniff* it better be good. I'm so glad your back to updating I've been waiting since you left.... I feel Like I'm forgetting something. You know ever since I've submitted that long review my review haven't been the same since. I just don't feel the need to write long ass reviews anymore and you deserve them. Maybe you should give me some motivation, you know an incentive,...hint hint...if you don't get the hint I'm talking about a bribe!!! Since I'm already in the story what else can you give me to write you another long chapter...and I see Phoenix's reviews haven't been the same either. We need a big incentive. I think I could manage to write you a page long review if I got to witness some of my powers as a fox hanyou *wink wink* Hey I'm not saying I'll stop reviewing I just you know....oh who am I kidding? I don't know what I want I just wanna babble...and babble and then babble some more. Well I can't think of anything more to say. I didn't read the chapter I have other stuff to do so I'm printing out all 14 sheets so I can read it at home in bed. I'll get back to you with the corrections and mistakes over view. You know the creative critism. I love you and I'll see you on Monday...That's when I'll be printing the next page of your story out. Love MissNikki....
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