| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 27, 2004 18:47 CDT
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Congratulations! Good luck with everything, don't worry about the time it takes, I wills till be here no matter how long. Good luck & best wishes to all three of you, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 13:23 CDT
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congatz on the baby^_^
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Reviewed By: JackieChan Dragonfly On: August 27, 2004 08:58 CDT
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Congratulations! And you take all the time you need. I don't mind waiting for something as good as this!
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Title: ~_^
Reviewed By: Heyy On: August 27, 2004 03:51 CDT
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You know what, not EVERYONE'S damn writing is fucking EXCELLENT!!! And I'm glad you at least tried your best in writing this story. I think you should continue in doing whatever the hell you want because if you don't work at things, you'll never progress. So, for the asshole that had the nerve to come up in here and insult your writing abilities and disabilities...FUCK OFF!! This is a PERSON you're talking to who has FEELINGS!! You don't just straight up tell someone their writing is horrible...that's just messed up. I'm glad you tried and did what you did, because I know impressing a crowd is hard. But it seems to me you've got everything else down, as to paragraph structure and what not. Keep writing though, and dont let fuckers like that EVER make you do otherwise okay hun?? Welp, I've got 2 go, but I hope to see more from you. And the abusive email person w/e bitch complainer...just go fuck yourself and let people do what they wanna do without you bitching cause that's all that damn review was...a bitching statement!!! iight 1 out yall pe@ce
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Reviewed By: Jillian On: August 26, 2004 17:05 CDT
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did u have the baby?! IM DYIGN FOR AN UPDATE! i check back once a week to see if u did...and ive done alot of checkin that means....its been so long...i hope the labor went ok if u had it...unless ur dead...that would be sad....neways still a fanbut itchin for an update! -Jillian-
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Reviewed By: hilome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 05:21 CDT
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so did you get the name for chapter 5 from the song "Puff the magic dragon" 'cuz if you did I love that song, my dad used to sing it to me off key every night when I was little. I really love this story, but I won't be able to finish it tonight. It's 5:20 in the morning and I've been up all night got to get some sleep. nabikitendo@email.com
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Title: Look the bitch doesn't give up
Reviewed By: We_Flame_You_Read [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 14:04 CDT
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I can't belive your still writing this shit Haven't you had enough. You have a pretty pathetic life and the story sucked from what I read. I'm not longer reading the story but now I figure that your a suck ass person to go along with it. And when I get the chance to check my email in between duties I'm goning to make you life a living hell but I'm not going to be mean about it so I'm only going to do it through email. I just thought I'd let you noe here since well personally your concieded and love other dumbass ppl to praise you! Oh and my favorite person to flame loves you so this one is for her to..the dumbass missnikki should noe better. How dumbcan she be first she writes shitty stories worth reading, doesn't update, complains about other ppl not updating then add on chapters that are shitty and complains that they are short...stick to what you noe best bitch and that your poetry on fictionpress atleast poems don't have chapters and you, lynette or becky or whoever the fuck your refering to yourself as now a days shouldl just sit in bed and look after whats best for your baby because your suck ass stories aren't going to help...love me or hate me but remember it's a two way street! WFYR
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Title: good
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad, but not great.
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Title: cool...O.o
Reviewed By: Kausagi Moonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude...i think that you are writing this, even with dislexia is so totally cool! I wouldn't be ble to, I know, because i don't really like writing all that much, and if i had it i really wouldn't want to show it. I'm glad that you are still writing, even though you have dislexia. It makes me feel Like i should do more, even though I have a thyroid problem, and Diabetes! Thank you!
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Title: why do you waste your time?
Reviewed By: We_Flame_You_Read [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 08:30 CDT
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Your writing sucks ass. This story has no plot. It's like your writing just to be writing. what exactly is the point to all this babbling. oh, and while I'm at it why does everyone shout everything they say? Usually when a sentence has a exclaimation mark on the end. Like this, you fucking dumb ass! now that's how you do it.
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really really really reallly really really really really glad you up-dated this story is so funny.............o i hope your pergencey works out good and plz up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 17, 2004 15:56 CDT
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Hi! Glad to see you're back even if it is only for a little while! Glad to hear all is well, loved the chapter! Give me a mo and I'll outline my favorite bits... Sesshomaru getting pulled along by his ear, that was marvelous, the image it conjours is too funny to describe! The little scene in the hut...I know yes, I always like it when my name skae does something but it always seems to hit so close to hime I can't help but be entranced by it! Having the little ones ask Miroku and Sango about condoms was evil, especially now that they intend to tell them...I wonder if they still call Miroku a pervert afterwards... To be honest I'll let you in on a secret. When I'm writing I generally fdon't know what comes next either. Most of the time write the ending first, then the negining and try and draw a line between the two! ^_^; Ok, best be off. Good luck to you both! Oh and one last thing, I'm off to Canada next week so if you do update I won't be able to review till I get back, sorry. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 08:57 CDT
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that was great!!! i can not wait for the next update!!! plz make it soon!! but since u r pregnant i guess u should not try to work so hard!! o well do what u can while u r still free!!! have fun with the baby!!! much love u should never forget the love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 23:49 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Jillian On: June 16, 2004 18:35 CDT
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wow ...u really need to update...im sure other fans would agree...because im gettin kinda pissy that u havent updated in like 3 months...because im a loyal reader...and i love it...im not insulting u and im sure u have a life...but i am kinda scared...did ya die or something? it doesnt even need to be a story update...just to kno how ya are and stuff...alright well great fic...little bored because u havent updated in so long...so stop bein so reviewer hungry...cause if ya havent noticed its usually the same people...i think if others dont post...i think i might put multiple ones...thanx for makin a great fic...UPDATE...bye
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