| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 19:16 CST
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OMG, youre from texas!? I was born there! i was born in Sherman Texas. Any where close to that? Now i live in crappy Wisconsin. Long way from texas.
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Title: flamers
Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 14:09 CST
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Hey, this is Yoko again. I read over all the reviews for this story, and I noticed some really nasty flames. Look, people! We are supposed to encourage our fellow writers! There is a fine line between contructive critism and being Hell bound! And another thing, I don't appriciate when people read a story and then flat out insults it! Not only are you insulting the writer, but you are also insulting the intelligence of the people who read and enjoy the story. The culprits behind these meaningless flames should be cast into Hell, where you can iceskate with Naraku, Koga, Kikyo, Hojo, and Jaken (because according to this writer, Hell froze over several times...)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 26, 2005 17:27 CST
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Glad to see you're back, that was a really excellent chapter. I have to admit it's been a long time since I read chapter one so it almost feels like I'm reading it for the first time again. I really love how the both of them kept blaming the other one, neither one willing to back down. It's ironic that they both decided to see the other at the same time although I am sure Inuyasha being drunk is going to cause no end of problems... Well, I've watched a whole lot more Inuyasha since last time and even travelled around the world (well Canada and Japan anyways), I look forwards to seeing what you have in store this time. Sorry if the reviews are going to medium length for the time being, big project on so time is limited. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 14:52 CST
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Hey, palm_tree! this author emailed me and said she was fixing the grammar, so don't get your knickers in a knot!!! And the fact that the plot was overdone is what makes the story so damn great!
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Title: uhhh. . . .
Reviewed By: palm_tree On: January 26, 2005 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea, that's my rating - and I think I'm being kind. Um, I don't mean to be harsh but I just don't understand why all these reviwers LOVE this story. Yea it might have an enjoyable, if a little overdone, plotline (Kagome gets with Inu, they have lil' kiddies *yeay*) but it's just painful to read with all the bad characterization and spelling/grammatical errors - near impossible. You can't get around to enjoying the story. I read half a chapter of the first chapter and then a later chapter because I read in the reviews they got better (btw...they didn't)and couldn't take it anymore. What kinda stories are people reading that they think this is the best it can get!? Let me recommend one that's one of my personal faves - "The Lucky Ones" by Terri Botta -> now that's a fanfic worthy of being called 'the best'. I suggest y'all read it and then maybe get an idea of what a good story should be.
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Title: crazyyyy
Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Possibly the greatest fan ficcie of all time. This is possibly because you have a really smart friend to help you with the grammar! heh, heh, heh. Just kidding. You are either very talented or very crazy. Then again, all geniuses are crazy...crap. I'm not crazy. @_@
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Title: Oh! Okay
Reviewed By: Hanyou Slave [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 00:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaah! I see. I read down your reviews and discovered that the later chapters were in better condition, so I checked one out. Much better! Please go back and edit the earlier ones. Pleeeeze. If you do, I promise to write a review after each chapter, and they will definitely be excellent reviews. I will go out of my way to make them very long. Thanks
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Title: Do It For Me
Reviewed By: Hanyou Slave [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing style and this looked like a good story, at least for lemons. You have what it takes, you just need a beta reader. The words you use, though many are misspelled, are excellent. I couldn't get past the first couple of paragraphs because it took such an effort to get through the inordinate amount of errors. Many of the errors are preventable using Microsoft Word. Just turn on the spelling and grammar checker under 'tools' in your toolbar. I would beta for you, but I simply do not have the time. Go to the forum. I'm sure you will find a beta reader there. I would like to see you clean this up because your writing is great. You're welcome to e-mail me and let me know once it has been beta'd. Keep working at it. Thanks
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Title: I like pieeeee
Reviewed By: cowlickspooooooo! On: October 26, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great and you need to keep writing.Good lucks with the baby and dealing with a husband their pains in the ass's and I would love to kill mine (shots him in the head) there done hes dead :) no need to get streesed out anymore and one more thing I LIKE PIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Title: luv the story
Reviewed By: budunkadunk On: October 26, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont u listen to what those basterds say about your writing I think your a fucking awesome writer and the story is fucking awesome!the duesche bag who says that shit about your story sucking needs to go get laid and chill out because you dont say that kind of shit and I porsonaly like the way you put all the little sayings about unison and stuff it makes the story better. So good luck with the child and peace out from the SORTH side (YES SORTH its my word fu's)
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Title: eck
Reviewed By: storysucks On: September 09, 2004 18:09 CDT
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okay... i personally think you're an elementary level writer. i mean, im not trying to be mean but your story is full of undeniable spelling mistakes, and there's no plot to this "story". i dunno how people can read your story without ignoring the stupid mistakes. maybe you should edit THEN post?? please think of people who have higher literacy levels than yourself.
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Reviewed By: Hiei81 On: August 31, 2004 20:09 CDT
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This fic is SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed threw out this whole fucked up story (I mean that in a good way... Is there even a good way to say "Fucked up"?... *shrugges* who cares) I like it an all, but it's too long. No ofence(sp?). And don't blame me if any thing is misspelled. I'm only 14 and suck at spelling. k? ja ne!
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Reviewed By: feilo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 15:24 CDT
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i think da cat's name is Buyo...or sth...can't spell...but it sounds like dat...n oh ya great chapter...just one thing though...rn't da babies still supposed 2 b half-demon??? cuz they're both half-demons...n it's only 3/4 demon if a half-demon n a human mate isn't it???...so their children r half-demons right???...oh well...ya...great chapter ar...
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 14:29 CDT
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full time mother now i no the feeling some of my friends r full time mothers now as well!! children take up alot of time!! i just wish u luck with raising ur son!! much love!! never forget the love!! and good luck!!!
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Reviewed By: feilo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 23:30 CDT
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hey...nice chapter...but i think sry in jap is gomen...not gome...and i'm sure it's Hojo-kun, not Hojo-chan...but besides from that, it's pretty good...
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