| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Title: Cute
Reviewed By: Phantomangel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story alot and I love the little puppies (hehe) I can't wait for the next chapter so I hope you have a nice honey moon but I hope you can write the next chapter fast when you get back!! Hope oo read it soon! ~Jessica Metz~ aka ~Phantomangel17~
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 03, 2004 10:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey congratulations on another great chapter and your upcoming marriage. I hope he's as good to you as you are to us. So if you don't update for months at a time I hope he's keeping you busy for that time and I hope you have a little girl so her middle name can be Nikki or a little boy so his middle name can be Nicholas I like the name obviously and i have to go so see you later!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha I love it I love it I love it
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 01, 2004 14:38 CST
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Congratulations! Oh and congratulations for the chapter as well, it was really good! Can't stay long this time, still busy...*grumble*work*grumble* Good luck & best wishes to the both of you and good luck & best wishes with the story! Hououza
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny as always and i'm really gald u up-dated and can't wait to read more^_^
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Title: I'm back- ->for a while.
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: February 25, 2004 07:57 CST
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hey. It's me again. You haven't Updated in awhile, but that's okay because I haven't read it in a while. I thinks that's so cute. Nikki and Shippo are going to be the death of GG but that's ok. I still think InuYasha's the best and i hope your feeling better. I just got the computer fixed for the second time in less then a week. Trust me dell sucks ass. So the internet is not up yet. Matter of fact the computer's not on, we're scared that if we start using it again it'll die on us again so we'll wait and use other computer's it's easier that way. Which reminds me i have to update. I'll do it on Thursday, Well I love you and see you next time you update.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaah i love it but needs another lemon
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Reviewed By: oops! On: February 22, 2004 17:50 CST
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sorry i sent the last message twice ^-^' o and im ganna end this on with some faces you can always ues:-D -_-' ^-^ !_! ^_~ *-* and i have alot more but im not goin to send them so to bad P
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Title: go you! go you! go you!
Reviewed By: kira/sarah On: February 22, 2004 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! O MY GOD! O MY GOD! O MY GOD! THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! i mean...i think about it at school at dinner with my friends and i even dream about what i think is goin to happen next! os i have to say that this story is the all time greatest story in the world! o and i hope that you dont have the flu and that you live a long happy life with your fionce (just so you know i cant spell either). if you ever drop this story i will hunt you down and stab you...with.....*thinks long and hard*.... hmmmmmmm....how about i stab you with a pencil *getts evil grin* im such a hentai! so hes the deal, ill give you aleast one review for every chappie and not stap you with a pencal *gets perverted grin* ok i got to stop bein a hentai but um.....ya back to the agreement...*cough cough* if you keep updateing. and i could give you some japanese songs online to anyone who reads this reviwe but you have to IM me. my AIM name is kira the neko. o and i got the name kira from a fanfiction i read. its second best know that iv read this one!but kiras a aruyo neko demoness and for all the people that dont know what that means then it means aruyo cat demoness.aruyo is a type of neko that can talk to people using her mind so they dont have to talk if their in danger or as in the fanfiction i read being controlled. ok. i think thats long enough dont you? lol ok im dont. ~Ja, Ne~ ps. you can call me kira
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Title: go you! go you! go you!
Reviewed By: sarah/kira On: February 22, 2004 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! O MY GOD! O MY GOD! O MY GOD! THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! i mean...i think about it at school at dinner with my friends and i even dream about what i think is goin to happen next! os i have to say that this story is the all time greatest story in the world! o and i hope that you dont have the flu and that you live a long happy life with your fionce (just so you know i cant spell either). if you ever drop this story i will hunt you down and stab you...with.....*thinks long and hard*.... hmmmmmmm....how about i stab you with a pencil *getts evil grin* im such a hentai! so hes the deal, ill give you aleast one review for every chappie and not stap you with a pencal *gets perverted grin* ok i got to stop bein a hentai but um.....ya back to the agreement...*cough cough* if you keep updateing. and i could give you some japanese songs online to anyone who reads this reviwe but you have to IM me. my AIM name is kira the neko. o and i got the name kira from a fanfiction i read. its second best know that iv read this one!but kiras a aruyo neko demoness and for all the people that dont know what that means then it means aruyo cat demoness.aruyo is a type of neko that can talk to people using her mind so they dont have to talk if their in danger or as in the fanfiction i read being controlled. ok. i think thats long enough dont you? lol ok im dont. ~Ja, Ne~ ps. you can call me kira
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the ending to that chappy it's so funny and glad u up-dated can't wait till u do it again^_^
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor GG! LOL ^_^ please update soon! I love your story!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 16, 2004 17:06 CST
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Sorry, it's going to be another short one. Seems I'm a little lost for words of late...too many things going on. That was beautiful, another excellent chapter. Really enjoyed the moment with the starring contest...strangly reminds me of me...I always used to try and out stare people...damn good at it too! The bit with GG was hillarious! I can't wait to see what the oldest two will be asking him next! Until next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: opps
Reviewed By: scuzzle butt On: February 14, 2004 03:38 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i realized in my review i cracked on your spelling when mine was terrible. please dont hurt me!
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Title: UNISON!!!!!!
Reviewed By: scuzzlebutt On: February 14, 2004 03:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked chapter 17 wene Kikyo was coughing because shes allergic o herself. And "unison" is a cool freakin world and you dont spell does "dose" you did that alote during the story but besides that it was kick ass. ^_^
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