| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: firelord On: February 13, 2004 03:29 CST
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i am glad to hear that it is not over and that you are writing again i was beginning to think you where just going to leave it like that
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: February 12, 2004 11:00 CST
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i like your story and i've been printing it out to read that's why i haven't been updating...btw how old will my character be at the end of the story....??? I don't care as long as you don't kill me all or deprive me of all my attention from mommy and daddy!!! Okay love you!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Fan On: February 07, 2004 08:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, but like the rating shows I think you need a beta reader because I don't mean to be mean but your spelling is terrible.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 22:26 CST
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yaaaa its not over yet
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Reviewed By: Jillian On: February 05, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY KEEP GOIN PLZ I NEED MORE OR ILL DIE :( PLZ MORE MORE MORE I BEG OF YOU I LOVE ALL YOUR WORKS AND YOUR NAME IS AWSOME...I ALSO WANT INU BUT LUCKILY MY BFS PET NAME IS INU SORRY FOR ALL THE CAPS BUT MY BUTTON IS STUCK...YOUR STORIES ARE VERY CREATIVE BUT PLZ NO MORE ADOPTIVE CHILDREN THATS KINDA DUMB...NEWAYS YA I LOVE THE CASTLE WHAT A SHOCKER! HEHE THIS IS MY 1st POST FOR YOU AND YOU ROCK KAGOME BECKY PERSON! I HOPE U AND UR BF HAVE A WONDERFUL HANYOU WEDDING IT WOULD BE REAL CUTE IF YOU HAD CUTE DOGGY EARS IN YOUR VEIL! HEHE NEWAYS THATS ALL JUST PlZ WRITE A NeW CHAPTER :(
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Reviewed By: Um........ On: February 05, 2004 08:18 CST
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*pauses* I think the author's notes from your fiance were funny due to the fact that he seemed to be uncomfortable with it. Please keep writing no matter who does it. I like the story or I never would have read this far..... You could definately use a beta.
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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: February 04, 2004 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished and i loved it.this is a great story.a sequal would be nice to have and i would defently read it. i won't coment on grammer since i no the reason.
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Reviewed By: nice guy On: February 04, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have realy enjoyed this fic I have read all 37 chapters in 2 days and I hope there will be more
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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: February 02, 2004 18:56 CST
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i have not read this all yet but i have to get off soon and i wanted to review first so here it goes ilove this story its cool. it is funny and really cool . i am only on chapter 3 and i am hooked.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 02, 2004 17:18 CST
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I won't say much this time, I don't think I can find the words. Please congratulate her on a truely beautiful chapter. That was the best so far and is one that I doubt I will forget... Please pass on my best wishes and a get well soon not to mention my regards and best wishes to the both of you for the future. Finally allow me to say thank you for the choice and use of my name...it seems that the words spoken ring true, even if it was not known at the time...thank you for that honour. Good luck and best wishes to you both, Hououza
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Reviewed By: tgyf On: February 02, 2004 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome update soon and oh i'm so sorry your sick
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 22:54 CST
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great chappy and can't wait till u up-date again....................and 2 humor u i wish Kagome the best of luck taking care of all her kids and Inuyasha^_^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the one review below has the wrong ratings this one has the right rating were all happy now
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappy can't wait till u up-date again
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