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Title: One of my favorites!
Reviewed By: Emmi_Bubbles On: August 26, 2006 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story! It's very different from other Sessh/Kag stories I've read and it has so far kept me very entertained!! I cannot wait to read more!!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 03:04 EDT
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Your story is wonderfull! And I love the sense of humor you use to convey your story with. I have been laughing all day! That is when I am not crying over the depair you put into your story. But the only thing I can think of is Sessy being dyed PINK! The poor thing! Keep up the good work and write more chapters soon!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 12:53 EDT
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OMG i love the new chap!!!!!!!!and poor fluffy...pink...LMFAO loves it...anyways u HAVE 2 update soon...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Hecubus Cat-Head On: August 12, 2006 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a small thing - a Jew, in WWII, would not be eating pork. Dietary laws and all of that, you know? On another note - I am dearly enjoying the continued dismemeberment of Kikyou. Particularly the bit with the lung and the frying pan. ;D
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Reviewed By: GoodGirlJay On: August 10, 2006 08:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love ur story. i hope you contiune. it is really great. i can't believe sesshoumaru is pink. how could they mix that up. by the way who would want there dog pink.lol anyway its still a very good story. can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: mikoyami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have been through alot im only 17 and ive been to 2 different children shelthers in the last year im back at my moms but i want to be at my dads when i was at the shelter they said my case didnt call for a gaurdian ad litum so i wasnt granted one with all of the court dates im still stuck at my moms and i have to stay here til im 18.i am glad atleast you work and try to help minors with the problems they face i wish there was more people like you
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: inulover_14 On: August 09, 2006 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you gonna keep writing? It is sooooo Awesome! I loved this chapter! Soo who is Kagome gonna take to Sango's Wedding?? Please keep writing? Update Soon.
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Title: AMAZING!
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, you really have got this story rolling, cant wait for the next chapter this is my favorite of favorites thought you might like to know!
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Title: AMAZING!
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, you really have got this story rolling, cant wait for the next chapter this is my favorite of favorites thought you might like to know!
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 not logged in On: July 31, 2006 13:35 EDT
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part of me thinks that sesshomaru will not like to et his hair cut but then again taht is just me. hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy to know that you updated this story and I cannot wait for the next chapter >
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 29, 2006 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you are continuing with this story. It's one of my favorites. But I do love all of your stories. They are all very well written. You take time developing the plot and characterizations and it shows. I do, however, think I caught an error in the latest chapter. At one point you said Souta's girlfriend was Kirara. Then a couple of paragraphs later you said her name was Ana. Please update as soon as you can. I really want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 12:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter; it was a good filler. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of Sesshomaru's past. Although, at the rate things are going, it would seem that his curse will never be lifted. There's nothing going on in the way of the development of Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship, other than when he is in human form. I think he should start being slightly more affectionate while in dog form. I'm not talking about anything along the lines of bestiality, but he's so distant.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 12:33 EDT
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Thanks for updating....Great chapter...Can't wait to read about Sess's past. UPdate soon...
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Reviewed By: ficfan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 12:23 EDT
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nice chapter, thanks for updating!
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