| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 15:09 EDT
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There really are times when Sessho is a bit dense! You'd think with his and Kagome's coonnection while in his Chance form that he'd have figured her out better than he has. Or is that maybe what the memory of Mai was leading up to? Ah well ^_^ we'll see right?
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Title: hissori yume
Reviewed By: sess's demonic tenshii On: May 01, 2004 23:20 EDT
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u no the only thing i dislike bout this story is that it takes u oh i dunno about ALMOST 4 FREAKIN WEEKS TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i truly love ur stories iv read all of from FF.NET but that site wont let me review for shit so im stuck here but i love u r writing so much AU: how to train a youkai part1, was the best an i would love it dearly if u were to update Second Chance sooner cuz i love wat u do with sess in ur stories an i cant wait for u to update an i dont really like handin out death threats *gives innocent face* (cof cof yea right cof cof) but i really really really cant wait for ur update so please please hurry an update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: May 01, 2004 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe good as always! hmmm how would i like her to die? have you tried decapitation yet? it is a rather interesting way to go. or maybe this...have you seen the movie x? the girl on the cross with strings wrapped around her. rather gruesome when they tightened and she fell into several pieces maybe sess can do something like that with his whip. anyway thanks for updating and can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: May 01, 2004 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story !! i cant wait till kagome finds out !! cant wait till their first kiss!!! lord!!! mad props !!good story!!!! cant wait till the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: paige89^_^ On: May 01, 2004 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWE! this is by far the sweatest chapter yet!
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Reviewed By: medatsu-chan On: May 01, 2004 11:55 EDT
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nice update... And a great flashback...
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Title: jazzylady
Reviewed By: jazzylady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 02:42 EDT
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Oh, I almost forgot! Congrads on your award winnings on the A Single Spark site.
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Reviewed By: jazzylady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is up with this? The stupid site won't let me log in. Anyways, I loved your chapter! The Queer Eye part was hilarious! I love that show! My dad hates it, though. He leaves the room whenever any of my sisters or I watch it. Anyways, please update soon!
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Title: im first
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 00:27 EDT
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yay im the first to read your new chapter. maybe because im the fool up at 12:23 am. of well that just mean that i got the first look at the story. I swear everyone is updating tonight your like the third person tonight. This was a great chapter and i liked the story with mai i thought that was really cute. Is inuyasha going to have a bigger part and will he paired if he does? yeah san/mir are getting married can't wait. Please please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Title: ARGH!
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK! the overall rating is supposed to be a 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so there!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
CiCi: hehehehehe Sessho: oh god. CiCi: {::grinning as she tucks her tongue in her cheek [something i do when about to tease some one...don't ask]::} Ooo sessie, why don't you wear that more {::chimes::} often! Sessho: because you would drool to much. CiCi: hmpf. i was trying to compliment you but i guess it's too low of you to except a compliment from a female. anyway. YES! i liked this chapter alot. i would rather me be in kagome's place. hehe, early said comment about what he was wearing when she opened the door. hehe. Sessho: {::mutters::} if you ask me her enjoyment factor was way over ten if you get what i mean, CiCi: -_-*. sessho.... you are-as of now- no longer aloud to hang out with silver or miroku any more Miroku: what'd i do? CiCi: you turned him into a perverted jackass! well, .::sighs::. not that he wasn't one anyway. but that's besides the point .::pushes every one out off stage::. ok, no more interuptions. m'kay, i like how you make sesshomaru sarcastic and the way he's OOC is HALARIOUS! like this secene for example, Sesshoumaru merely stood and watched the microwave, intent on ignoring the offensive girl until she touched his ears. 'It's not fair,' he sighed blissfully, his ears swiveling toward her fingers encouragingly. 'I should have some sort of power over her. She should not get off so easy.' that cracked my up so bad. and like the little comments sessie makes are halariously funny.
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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CiCi: you go girl! your 100% correcto! people should know about this stuff, {::shouts to peoples reading fic::} she's doing this for you ya know! any when, i liked this alot. i happened to like all the chapters so far. your very... what's the phrase? 'in depth'? yes, i think that's what i'm looking for. i was exposed to these years ago. I WASN'T raped but a friend of mine was. I had to testify. so, in a way, i think your doing thousands of people that are reading your fic, a really BIG favor. because i also had to work with a Social Service's officer when my dad was going through chemo and radiation and what not. horrible times, but yes your, again, 100% correct these people work hard and aren't paid nearly enough. Ja Ne!
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 01:18 EDT
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so sorry i haven't reviewed in a while im being scattered brained lately. Those where relly good chapters. I really liked the fact that they trapped those two in a hotel room that was funny and i have a feeling that kags gonna be hearing alot more of sessys thoughts. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: SilverFangedTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 18:47 EDT
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JD: sessho said shit! sessho said shit! Ooo MY GOD SOME BODY CALL RIPLEYS!!! Sessho: shut it pup. JD: hmpf this IS my review so you shut it! i like this very much. it's funny how sessho goes alittle out of chara but still stays with in bounderies Sessho: you haven't gotten past to chapter 3 yet...how would you know? JD: HMPF! well i will!
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: April 14, 2004 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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May I just say that the image of Sesshoumaru answering the door was *drool-drool* Need I say more? Very good chapter, lots of fluffy stuff to make the hopeless romantic in me swoon. In fact, she's still swooning and rather excited that you are updating twice this month. *looks at her hopless romantic 'Stop that already'* Looking forward to the next chapter.
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