| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: kesarou On: November 11, 2003 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bows to the all great fan fic writer* cant wait for next chapter! keep it up!! ^^
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 17:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the first story that i read every day because its such a good story well please update soon thank you for writing such a good story , have to go bye-bye
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 12:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love how good you write , like Naraku the way you write him it creeps me out , i can picture how big sesshoumaru is , because i have a Great dane ,man i just love you story ,well please update soon bye-bye
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 11:51 EST
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"Stumbling around like the village drunk" *snorts* That was priceless! Thanks for the potential ammunition. Now, to figure out a way I can use it on my husband...
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Title: please continue!!
Reviewed By: princessann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 01:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please continue ill be waiting and please e-mail me when you do its:acyoung28@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000 On: November 08, 2003 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This so gooood when is sessou going to turn into his human form???????
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Eyes On: November 08, 2003 21:45 EST
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I can't rate yet. For I have not finished. Though what you say on the law of raping is just plain stupid. No matter what age they are (those getting raped) should have the same satisfaction as older people do when thier culprits gets life in prison. That's what I think. I can't wait to see how it all turns out.
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Title: i like
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 13:40 EST
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I don't know if i have reviewed before sorry if i have but here is mine now. I really like your story it is very original to me. I think you have sessys attitude right and i like him and i can't wait till he turns human. I also cant wait to know what happens to naraku something bad i hope. well anyways please keep up the great job. BUH-BYE
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 13:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know you updated yesterday but i just fell in love with the story i hope you update soon LIKE TOMORROW ..just joking but i will love you if you update with in a couple of days ill even love you if you update in a week my point is update SOOOON please .....i love the story sooo much i will review every day so you can have the most reviews... well any way please update soon talk to you tomorrow : ) bye-bye
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 02:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soo i love it please please update soon
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Reviewed By: bl On: November 08, 2003 00:31 EST
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its fireash...thanks for updating. really enjoyed the chapter. can't wait to read more. thanks for updating.
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Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 00:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I love your fics! And this is one of my fav's. Personally, I'm glad your updating habits aren't like mine, or I'd have next to nothing good to read when I got on (not that everyone else sucks, but sess/kags are getting harder and harder to find)... so anywho... update soon, I'll be checking in (well, checking my mail, you're on my favs)
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 22:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shippo is really a kid after my heart in this latest chapter! Go kid, I'll be right in that shark tank with him! As always, an awesome job done!
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Reviewed By: Rain Of Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww come on SF! *puppy eyes* You could let Sesshou have just a wee little bite out of creepy-creepy-CREEPY Naraku can't you?? *evil glint as strangles imaginary evil Naraku* Maybe just a small morsel...or an arm or two...^_~ Kinda surprised you made Kago's neighbors say he's a creep too; i thought you'd make him that guy that every girl swoons for ( *blushes* I do too...*drools* What can i say; i can't resist the bad ass...*waterfall of drool* Especially if he's majorly hot!! ^^) and would never think of him doing anything to hurt anybody. But i guess not! ^^ I guess you decided to make them smart and realize how much Sesshou needs to rip off his scary smile...*shudders* I feel so bad! *shoulders slump in shame* I'm so lazy that i don't think i reviewed the last chappy. *pulls hair then latches onto Sesshou* WHAT KIND OF FANGIRL AM I??! Sesshou: An annoying one. Rain: HEY!! *huffs* Anywho!! ^^ Enough talk about scary guys! *claps hands jumping around in anticipation* AHHHHH!! ^^ I can't wait till Sesshou turns human!!! Sesshou: *huffs* Well this Sesshoumaru can, wench!! *turns to SF* Take your time ,woman! this Sesshoumaru does not favor being a human. Rain: Oh come on! Quit lying!! You know you miss your opposable thumbs! *winks as Sesshou sighs rolling his eyes* Lol! But i'm guessing that Naraku is gonna try and break into Kago's house so Sesshou will try and bite him--and maybe he will!!--and she'll have to get rid of Sesshou because he was 'roaming' around without his owner or his leash and attacked a person...@_@ Or am i just rambling on about how much i want Naraku to get his again?! O_o Oh boy, confusing myself, AGAIN!! ^^ But yeah, for the last chapter; that is so wrong how that works out doesn't it!? People are just ignorant to not notice how horrible it is for these kids and yet nothing is trully done about it!! *huffs* Very glad that you brought that out in the open though. People need to know more about it!! *nod nod* Well, i think that's enough rambling for now! K's! Buh byes!! *huggles* ^^
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Reviewed By: RED HAT On: November 07, 2003 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on Let Chance/Sess bite Naraku on the A$$!! It would make all renters feel better (BWAHAHAHA)
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