| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Title: Chapter 28 was good
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero2 On: February 08, 2004 13:50 EST
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Chapter 28 was good n sad... I just wish u didn't stop there!! Ne ways update soon!! I wanna know what Sally says about her *little* discovery about Duo now. Ne ways ya. TTFN (ta ta for now >tiger
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 08, 2004 13:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is geting so good ..I hate that you stoper there...I want to here more ..Please update again soon...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 09:58 EST
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I'm afraid Heero's not at the end of his shocks for today! Sally's going to have a surprise as well *chuckles* Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: coldsiren On: February 06, 2004 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! but shit shit i thought im going to die because of that cliffhanger.. but please? dont let anyone die snif specially the baby.. please? Arigatou! cant wait for the next chapter.. ahhh..
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 22:14 EST
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! **gasps for air** AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!*gasp* AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! ***HEAVES*** OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! *clears now sore throat* Ahem, on a more useful note. . . The organization of this chapter was absolutely BRILLIANT. It takes A LOT of talent and work in order to get a chapter, that keeps u hanging off every word like this one does. Had just a few details been in a different order it would of ruined the entire effect of the chapter. AWESOME JOB. Peez oh peez!! PEEZ update soooooooooonnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!! ~Wanders off spazzing out from the adrenaline high brought on by the story~
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 17:39 EST
Comment/Review:
why would u stop there!!!!!!!!!!!! that is ssooooooooooooo mean
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Reviewed By: Devona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 17:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kick ass story, still lovin it, thanks for the update! getting that little email that says there's a new chap of your story, just makes me bounce off the walls! hehe! keep up the good work!
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Title: YOU CAN'T JUST END IT LIKE THAT!
Reviewed By: lalallalaal On: February 05, 2004 16:53 EST
Comment/Review:
Okay. I'm trying to stay sane but with you teasing me it's not the easiest thing to do. I love what you've done so far and I can't wait to know what's comoing. I can tell you this though...if he loses the baby I will hunt you down! I can't stand the thought of him losing it after all we've gone through...it's just too vindictive! Have mercy on us soft hearted readers and give us what we want...and soon too!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 14:04 EST
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Oh, not good, Duo is injured. Will Sally find out that Duo is pregnant now? I'm afraid Moran is going to regret being born really soon. Oh, you have to update soon.
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: laini1482 On: February 05, 2004 14:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wanted to give you 11 out of 10 but i cant... that was amazing yay more more more
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 05, 2004 12:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you left it there... You should have rote more ... since your having trouble with the url...I need to know what happens next ...Pleas hurry up and update ..Please......
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 11:48 EST
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...so...You got Duo shot (I suppose this is where a doctor is gonna find out something interesting), and Moran is still alive (for another three milliseconds and then Heero is gonna stomp him) and then you go and tell us the next part is gonna be awhile...I see...well, since it's RL and you can't compromise with that, I'll just finish the review first before screaming my head off. Sigh...*whimper*
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Title: Worry
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: February 04, 2004 02:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Hey once again wonderfull chapter... but... please tell me that you are not planning in and abortion, i think maybe Duo will get injured and in the medical atention they find the baby ne? i hope the both are well.. love from Terry
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 21:51 EST
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**Nervously Chews Fingernails** OMG! OMG! This is soooo nerve wrackng!! I hope everything turns out okay!!! **Huggles Heero & Duo IMMENSELY** PEEZ!! OOHH!! PEEZZ!! Update soon!!! ~Wanders away worrying about the mission~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 03, 2004 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't let Duo loose the baby...!!! Come on you can't be that cruel? I hope not...I know you are a good person and will let the baby live!!! Please update soon Please...I just love this story...TTFN
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