| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 11:40 EST
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Wah! Cliffie! Okay, great action setup, tension climbing, and all, I hope you update soon 'cause I have a feeling things are going to get very hot! Hope nothing happens to the baby (or 'Mom'). On tenterhooks...
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Reviewed By: DuoXHeero all the way On: January 31, 2004 17:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I like this story, but I'm not sure about the last bit with the fetus having feelings... Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 31, 2004 17:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story and this chapter and look forward to reading more of both... Pleas update soon...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 31, 2004 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I just love this lemon and can't wait to read more...Please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 01:52 EST
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eshh...dang Moran..you are a moron...he is gona get his jewl's chopped off..by verry angry Heero i bet..Keep writing babe!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 29, 2004 19:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That guy Moran ,What a prick Duo just needs to kill him ...Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 13:45 EST
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OMG!!! Your SOOOOOOOOOOOO EVIL!!!!!!!!!! *GROWLS* That stupid MORON better watch his back, cuz if Shinigami doesn't finish him off . . . **Foams at mouth** I will!! **Heaves for a few minutes** I'm okay. Heeeeee! ^_________^ Update soon PEEEEEEEEEEZ!!! ~Wanders off to pounce on Moron~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 13:01 EST
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This moron is gonna die. THe only question is, will it be quickly, now, via Shinigami, or slow, later, if Heero finds out about this...*evil snicker* 'Avon lady', bwhahahaha! Still loving it. Still reading it. Still hoping for a next chapter soon (though you are really grinding them out these days, kudos)
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 11:10 EST
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This just gets sweeter and sweeter as it continues. Hee! Hee! I loved how Duo was all nervous about da niku-jaga. **Glomps over-protective Heero** Dat was sooo cute. lol, gotta love Wuffles reactions!! *bounces* Update soon!! ~Wanders off to tease Wuffles~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 27, 2004 17:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great please keep going and update again soon
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Reviewed By: Devona On: January 27, 2004 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* so sad... it takes pregnancy for duo to realize the glory of chocolate... that is indeed a travesty... but alas! the awesomeness of the story more than makes up for it! update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Fire of phoenix On: January 25, 2004 14:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kept clicking and clicking but there were no more chapters...what happened to all the pretty chapters..?
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 23:11 EST
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OH NO!!!! Stupid MORON!! How dare he!! I hope nuttin serious happens!! I LUV Hee-chan in dis fic. He is just soooooo sweet. **Glomps Heero** Update Soon!!! ~Wanders off biting nails and worrying over Duo**
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 24, 2004 11:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Duo, I hope that stuped jerk dose not make him loose the baby....
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 10:15 EST
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I'm already in awe at the speed with which you write, but is it okay for me to still ask you to update even faster? *whimper* now we're getting into a beautiful little plot, with our pregnant Duo smack in the middle of it, and tension is growing. Agh! I'll just nibble my nails until you update again...
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