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 Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 30, 2004 00:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Updateupdateupdate!!! ^_______^
 Title: gdgy
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2004 23:22 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
whoa... good chappie, worth the wait ^^ WATS GUN HAPPEN TAH YUGI??! AHHH HELP ;_; im scared, lol
 Title: Oh! The meaning!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2004 22:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh! The turn in events made me just see a 360 degree turn!... Wait, that made no sense. But who cares, 'cause your fic is awesome! Oh! I can't wait to see what happens next! It's sad, but fic updates are now one of the main reasons why I actually bother checking my mail. Congratulations! You give meaning to my pointless life! So! Keep writing! Give me meaning! Give me fics! Give me the next chapter! Pleeease! Hee! I can't wait! You're awesome!
 Reviewed By: Mimiheart9  On: January 29, 2004 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
MORE!!!! You can't leave it like that! ARG!!!! More...more...GAH!
 Title: Yugi and his cute-ness!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2004 15:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah... Yugi and Yami are together at last! The world is perfect! If by perfect you mean really screwed up, then, yeeeeeah! Oh! What will become of all three!? Of course, I'm guessing that Marik and Bakura will tell Yami about Yugi's job, ne? Hm... What about Jounouchi and Ryou? And Kaiba?! Not to mention Ryou's uncle, and father, and Otogi?!? And Yugi's father!?! Oh, no! Is he going to come back too?! So much, too quick! Brain hurt! Overload! Overload! Pleeeease write another chapter, and release me of my sufacating questions! "Only you can say no to forest fires!" Heh.
 Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 24, 2004 23:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Update soon! ^__^
 Reviewed By: al  On: January 24, 2004 21:37 CST
Comment/Review:
oooooo. i think this is my favorite pairing for this fic.
 Title: fsdfgf
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 24, 2004 18:08 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awww yes, good chappie, mmmm ^^ VEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRY good, very good indeed, and it was nice n long ^^ neways.. UPDATE SOOON YUH BUMS! lol jp, XD
 Reviewed By: Mimiheart9  On: January 24, 2004 15:56 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love Yugi angst! Thanks for getting back to that story line!!!! Keep writing.
 Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: malikbunny  On: January 20, 2004 01:32 CST
Comment/Review:
that has got to be one of the best chapters so far!! it even made me cry!! poor malik :( i hope that one day he'll tell everyone about his past or at least bakura, since bakura seems to care for him a lot. well keep up the good work and the malik angst, it's great and very emotional. update soon!!
 Title: Waiiiii. *sigh*
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2004 02:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah.... That's so sweet... Malik can feel now! Oh! I can't wait to see what happens to everyone now! The only ones left are Yugi and Yami now! Oh! The anticipation!
 Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2004 23:18 CST
Comment/Review:
That's totally sweet! I love how, even though the characters have such similar situations and attitudes towards love, they have very different personalities and problems. They each have a different feel to them. Now I really want to know what Yugi goes through! Please do update soon! By the way, you posted up chapter 12 to Regret instead of Business Hours up on ff.net. Just so ya know! ^__^
 Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2004 21:56 CST
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm still wondering what the deal is with Seto, Yami, Yugi, and Joey. I suppose I have to wait until next chapter. -_- Great lemon anyhow. Lemony goodness all around! Yahoo!
 Title: .....
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2004 21:48 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
dude.. lottsa lemon, lol uppie date soooooooon ^^
 Reviewed By: al  On: January 17, 2004 12:49 CST
Comment/Review:
that was very.. unexpected. THE AWKWARDNESS! yugi and yami! such an adorable pair.
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