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Reviewed By: zoey hellmaster On: June 14, 2004 07:10 CDT
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when are you going to update your fic? I LOVE IT! ^0^
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Reviewed By: mLoIiLmFeOrNzG On: June 02, 2004 00:24 CDT
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it was gr8...plz update soon! too bad its not still on fanfiction tho...i luv ur story!
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Reviewed By: Figment of Your Imagination On: May 15, 2004 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wondering, are you EVER going to update? This is an awesome story, and you said in the chapter updated on March 28th that you'd update that Friday, but I have yet to see anything new. The writing style is really captivating and the characterization is really strong.
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Reviewed By: Uchi no Bakura to Ryou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAI! THIS FIC IS SO GOOD! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! ONEGAI! UPDATE! *^^*
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Reviewed By: slitheringsnake0 On: April 20, 2004 00:26 CDT
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i liked it! more soon plz!! :)
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Title: DMG/H from ff.net
Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good story. I like the torture. Glad it's not too bad. Ryou and Yugi seems to be the center of torture fics. I wonder what'll happen next. Well UD soon. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 05, 2004 21:39 CDT
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*in some shock* NOOOOOOOO omfg! so cruel..yet so well...written...must ahve them found! update soon *worships*
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Reviewed By: Female half - breed On: March 31, 2004 23:46 CST
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I really like it and hope u continue it soon. :}
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Title: LilMizTake63@aol.com
Reviewed By: Debs xxx On: March 31, 2004 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooo!!! You updated!!! LOVING THIS STORY!!!! I wasnt sure if you were going to update again, but now....IM SO HAPPY!!!! ^___^ I love this soooo much and the plot is amazing!!! I hope you update again soon huni! Ill be waiting here patiently for you to! hehe!!! Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
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Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel (too lazy to log in) On: March 30, 2004 09:09 CST
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o.o Meep! Poor Yugi and Ryou! MAKE HAPPY TIME FOR HIKARIS NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: shinigami_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, this is the best torture fic I've ever read. It's awesome! Woo! More angst and suffering! muahahahhaha!!! It seems Bakura found the picture, *pats Bakura* I wonder if he's going to find Ryou and Yugi with that? Hehe, I'm still loving this! Please continue ^^
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 22:58 CST
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Gods, that's horrible! Poor Yugi and Ryou! Yugi can't stop apologizing and Ryou keeps getting beaten! Bakura breaking and entering?! Does that mean the torture will end? Please say it'll end... How are they going to be saved? Ryoko wants to know! While I was reading this fic I was listening to this KoRn song called Beat It Upright... Yeah, that was odd... Update please!
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 22:49 CST
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Oh, no! Yugi! Ryou!! Oh, no!! Bakura will take the pic and... I don't know, somehow save them, along with Malik, Marik and Yami! Right!?! Ah! They need Kaiba's help! Malik could ask Kaiba! I mean, it's bad and all, but... Ah! Think of the hikaris!! Ooh! I'm on the edge of my rolly chair! Your fic is awesome!
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 22:46 CST
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grrr.... poor bishies. I personally hope that Bakura chops off all of the evil guys heads before the end of this! >_
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Title: ASFSf
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 10:41 CST
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-.- ... evilness.. shyt, at least bakura came in ^^;
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