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Reviewed By: Rikainiel On: February 16, 2004 04:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I saw it of AFF.net, but then it was gone on ff.net when I looked. I'm so glad I found it again! I hope somebody finds poor Yugi and helps him out soon!Kill Yuugis dad!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: shinigami_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 01:36 CST
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Soooo Eric has returned! And Poor Yugi-kun! His father is eeeevil! *adds him to the list of evil people* No one knows where they are!? Ryou and Yugi are trapped! (yay!) I must see more torture ^^ please update soon!
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Reviewed By: al On: February 13, 2004 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hikari torture!.. it begins.. yuugi has a VERY good memory. he must relive them in his dreams.
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 02:11 CST
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*stares blankly* MM erased half of my apology. o_o ANYhoo...YOU are a genius, aswell as bakurasgirl, I had just written her a review and the name was stuck in my brain. ~_~
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 02:09 CST
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*slaps self* Sorry, sorry, sorry! >_
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 02:07 CST
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*screams and runs away* ... *crawls back through the shadows* So much pain and angstyness! *lurves it to death* Yeeeees...my two fave hikaris in an angst fest! ^___^ I love this fic, keep up the good work. *bows to the genius that is bakurasgirl*
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 23:15 CST
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Stoopid FFNet!!!! Whatever, this way I only have to review in one place *rolls eyes* When will it end?! Poor Ryou and Yugi! *strangles Eric and Yugi's dad*
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Title: Ooooh!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 20:43 CST
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Oh, no! Ryou! Yugi! Oh, no! I bet Yami is beating himself up! And that they don't know where Ryou went to? So sad! How are the hikari's going to get out now?! Oh! Is Kaiba going to help?!? Oh! He should! That'll be redeeming, ne?
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Title: Poor Yugi and Ryou...*ch.15*
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel(too lazy to log in) On: February 11, 2004 17:34 CST
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*sniffles* That's so sad...wow, great work, maybe check for typos, but other than that you've got a good story on hand.
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Title: weastsdtga
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 16:17 CST
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damnit..! pretty good chappie,.. BUT IT WAS STILL VERY BORING! well, not as boring, but kinda, X.x wow, thats mean, sowwie.. i jus wanna kno wa gun happen tah that jak of a father yugi has.. XD
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Reviewed By: Mimiheart9 On: February 11, 2004 08:47 CST
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!! This is so good. I'm glad I've been reading it over here. May I ask why you aren't using AFF any more?
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 09, 2004 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
POOR Yugi!
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Title: WHEEE!!
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Awesome work once again! I really wish my webcam program was working right now.. Poor, poor yugi!
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Reviewed By: shinigami_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 22:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Agh!!! Fanfiction.net is EEEEVIL!!! *kicks evil people* .....ummm update soon!
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: ImpishPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry this one got kicked off to.
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