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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (too lazy to login) On: April 29, 2005 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooooo Youko sounds suspicious...what's gonna happen with Ryou? :( and Yugi and Bakura? Hrmmmmm? And oh, Malik :'( I don't things are going to get any better for him soon...update please!!
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Title: Update!!! Yay
Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (too lazy to login) On: April 25, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. Sure is getting weird though, lol. It's nice to see Malik getting some action, even if there was no Yami, Bakura, or Yugi in this chapter. Update as soon as you can please :)
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this very much I just discovered it a few days ago. I hope you update this soon. I just read the whole thing in 3 days.I wnat to see them escape from the lilfe and soon. I want them to find love and Joey to find seto!
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Reviewed By: Beysie, not logged in On: April 17, 2005 20:10 CDT
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I just wanted to let you know that there' something wrong with the format... Chap 24 is all one paragraph and I can't read it like that, it's too jumbled! I hope you can fix it!
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (too lazy to login) On: April 17, 2005 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter too!! I'm so happy that you've updated!!! Poor Malik though T.T I hope Ryou, Yami, and Bakura find him soon!!! I don't trust that Boshi...
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: April 17, 2005 03:41 CDT
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Interesting ch, and a nice semi-plot twist. That guy is suspicious sounding, very suspicious. lol. So happy you updated again! Wonder what else you have planned, can't wait for more. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: April 13, 2005 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So happy you updated! ^_^ Aww, poor Malik-kun! *hugs* Hope he's alright, can't wait for more. See ya. ^_~ P.S. Thanks for the extension! ^_^
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Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (too lazy to login...) On: April 13, 2005 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated!!! ^^ I was waiting forever!! I really can't wait for another update. Poor Malik-chan T.T hoping for some Ryou action next chapter...update soon! Loving it!
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: April 12, 2005 19:17 CDT
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Okay please continue this! I you need any help on emotional stuff or insparation read any chapter fics of Dragondreamer Yami Dragon. I highly recommend 'Friends & Lovers'. It's not really that fic but it's sequal 'Stronger than Before' that has a situation similar to yours. Anything of theirs is gold and I love this fic! I really also like Teach me Pleasure. Please update something!
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Reviewed By: Zoey On: September 23, 2004 13:00 CDT
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Finally! The boys are safe!!! .;^-^:.
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Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel (too lazy to login) On: September 19, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Very nice job, I like how you portrayed Seto especially.
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 22:23 CDT
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What a relief to see things are getting nback on track! And Kaiiba is being sane! Omhg its a miracle I like swear! it was a chapter worth waiting for and dont worry take your time and dont worry about us, cant wait to see how this shall turn out!
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: September 18, 2004 15:42 CDT
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That's a really nice thing Kaiba's doing, glad he's not that bad after all. Really good chapter for a really good story. Too bad for school though. *groans at the thought* Well, ud when u can. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 01:40 CDT
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Well, it's about time they tried to quite working for Otogi. I'm so glad that Kaiba was able to help them! See, Kaiba isn't /to/ bad a person... Deep down inside... Once you get past the evil pompus jack ass bastard that he sometimes acts like. Heh. Ah, luck in school and all that. I know what you mean about updating. Yea, school: always getting in the way of yaoi writing. How rude and annoying, ne. Well, I'll eagerly await the next chapter. I'm really interested in seeing where this goes! Write as soon as ya' can, ne!
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (2 lazy 2 login) On: September 17, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another great chapter. I think it might be good for you to take a break. Don't just force out chapters. I know from experience how hard that is to do. Anyways, I hope for an update as soon as you get the time and I continue to enjoy this fic. No dialogue for Ryou or Marik (who seemed to disappear) this chapter, but still very good (as always). Keep up the great work! ^_^
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