| "Business Hours" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Title: whee!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So much tension .. X__x At least Seto was true to his word and did such a good deed for Malik. So sweet ^^ Now we just need Ryou to stop moping and then some lemons! Heh heh..
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Title: Yay for update!
Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 15:11 CDT
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*jumps around* Yay! Seto helping out! 'Bout time he became less bastardized! The Yami/Yugi Bakura/Malik and Marik/Ryou fluff was cute, too.
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 16:44 CDT
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Yay! I'm so happy that Yugi and Ryou are out of that horrible place. Bastards... I'm glad Yugi's dad and Eric got thier asses kicked. I wonder what Jounouchi will say if he finds out. Ooohh! Update please! I can't wait to know what will happen!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat On: August 24, 2004 00:40 CDT
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...Whoa. You really know how to write a great fic, you know that? Love, angst, torture...I've used up an entire box of tissues from crying so much...and yet I couldn't make myself stop reading it! I'm hooked on this fic! Can't wait for an update! Keep it up, this is one superb fic!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: August 23, 2004 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!im so stoked, ryou, can he fianlly be back with us? im so happy that bakrua nad marik beat up yugi's dad and Eric! Now THAT was good times! i was like screaming otu loud when all the bad things hapened and like yelled yay and my friend in my room looked at me funny but thats okay! this rocked me socks!
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 14:30 CDT
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Oh... I got all watery eyed. The sweetness... It was so evily sweet. Ah! Damned time someone beat the crap out of Eric and Yugi's father. But... Did they just leave them there? Did they turn them over to the police? What about the photographer? Surely a simple beating is neigh irrelivant compared to the torture those two should go through! At least let them go to jail for life and get raped by everyone in there! I mean, it's kiddnapping, rape, assault, you name it! Give them their just dessert, ne! And let Ryou get better soon! Oh, and what about Kaiba and Jounouchi? What happened to them? Oh! The story is almost over! Or is it? Dum-dum-DUM!!
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Title: fweeee
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 16:57 CDT
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PSYCHOLOGICAL DRAMA!!!! Sorry to hear that the chapters will be shorter.. but that's ok, at least we get something, lol. Thanks, and update again soon.
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (2 lazy 2 login) On: August 21, 2004 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sorry to hear that you won't be able to make longer chapters. but it was a chapter nonetheless and i LOVED it!!! T_T I wish it were longer and I hope you update soon, I really do!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rayvenfire On: August 21, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!!!
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Title: YEAH!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! FINALLY.. this story is getting back on track. Wow.. I didn't think Ryou would escape. And now he's going to go through all this psychological drama.. ick. Anyway, ABOUT DAMN TIME MARIK AND BAKURA GOT TO DO SOME SERIOUS ASS KICKING.. xD Lol... I could just imagine the two of them beating the living daylights out or Eric and umm, Yugi's dad.. (Mister No Name.. xD). Anyway.. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel(too lazy to log on) On: July 28, 2004 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee! They've been rescued! ^_^ Great chappie, and although you still need to watch your punctuation there, you're doing well and you've improved a lot.
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Title: YEA! an update.
Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: July 27, 2004 19:48 CDT
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Yea! The yamis finally got to rescue them. And I'm so glad Ryou got out, but he's definitly traumatized still. I hope he's alright. :/
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Title: *happy*
Reviewed By: Wicabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 18:36 CDT
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I'm so glad Yugi and Ryou were rescued. I've been enjoying your stories very much. Please don't make an ending like the original 'Mother, Father, Lover' though! ;.; I cried for hours after I finished it and still didn't feel better after I read the alternate ending. But, other than that, I really love your stories.
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Title: AN UPDATE AT LAST!!!
Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I checked here everyday, looked at my email everyday for alerts, and I was just looking at two new messages in my inbox and it said you update Business Hours and I literally was squealing because I was so happy. They're finally rescued! I really can't wait for the next chapter! This one was really long and I'm really happy about that! You never dissappoint in your stories! Okay, so I hope that you keep writing and update as soon as you can! I'll just read it over and over again until you do.
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Reviewed By: Shaded Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:08 CDT
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Please update soon! Poor Ryou T^T...I REAALLLY hope he doesn't break...because...well just beause! It seems like he always suffers, even when it's Yugi's problem~ Poor Yugi...Poor everybody! *sniffles*
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