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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 00:59 CST
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Okay, you know the deal! Already reviewed on ffnet! Still lovin' the story! Still angstin' over Ryou! He can come live at my house! Though he'll have to sleep on the couch. But it's better than at the evil uncle from hell's house! Please update soon! ^____^
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Title: Oh! Ryou-kun!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 21:27 CST
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Oh! Poor Ryou! How horrible! What kind of self respecting girl would have only skirts and dresses (and super short shorts)?! Man... She probably turned out to be a whore too. Oh... Ryou... What ever will he do it that place?! And as for Kaiba... Being the rich ass bastard that he is, couldn't he just... Ask all three of them to move in with him? I mean... He lives in a freakishly large mansion. What's a guest or three? Plus, it'll be an excuse to get closer to Malik, eh? /And/ if Bakura's father/uncle try anything, well, Kaiba is all powerful. He can easily have them threatened/hurt/killed/obliterated? Oh! Think of the possibilities! Just... Man, those three need a brake from their crappy life. It's so sad! Poor Yugi! Poor Malik! Poor Ryou! Oh, the saddness! It is to much!
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Reviewed By: animelova On: November 30, 2003 15:52 CST
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Ahh...Seto is so evil! I hope you make him good later on in the story. and Joey seems like such a nice person. I feel so sorry for Ryou and Yugi! They're hiding Dark Secrets, and once again, SETO IS EVIL FOR USING IT! lolz
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 16:38 CST
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As usual, love the story, and just here to put up my second review! Ja ne ^_^
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Title: wee woo
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 14:56 CST
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I want Kura, and Marik *starts crying* meeean! well, hurry up n get to the yami part, and the malik part... lol ^^ okie, i luv u, bye bye
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 11:09 CST
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This story is so amazing! It's been a long time since I had a story that I really wait for to be updated. I don't know what I would do if I was in Ryou's position. I suppose that his friends would be able to understand him. I mean, compared to what Seto is doing to all of them, Ryou is an absolute angel. I guess I do feel that he's being selfish, though. Well, I really hate to see Yugi hurt, but he's pretty strong, I mean, he sacrificed himself for Joey and Tristan in the manga, to that bully. Oh well, I'm sure that something happy will happen *glares* to all of them in the end. Oh, yeah, and will there be more Kura and crew in the next chappie? (Specially Marik, he's funny!) Kay, well, ja ne, and please update soon!
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Title: AHHHHHHHHH!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO! NO EBIL NASTY YUGI TORTURE! its laaaame man... lol and where are them yamis????! grrrrrrrr
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Title: pwp
Reviewed By: cecila On: November 25, 2003 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well first of all, i just wanna say that i love this story, and please hurry and write more i can't wait to see what happens. keep up the good work. also, pwp means 'Plot? What Plot?' it's basically a story where all they do is have sex, no plot needed, just sex anyhoo, keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Nyamo-chan On: November 23, 2003 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I really love it PWP means something along the lones of 'Plot? What Plot?'
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Title: nastier and nastier...!!
Reviewed By: JennyNemesis On: November 18, 2003 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch!! Can Seto POSSIBLY get any more evil? He's already Evil with a capital E. (Ooh, I like him that way.) But poor Ryou can never get a break. The suspense is closing in... & I can't wait to find out how/if little Ryou can wriggle out of this one. Leave me hangin'!! The neighbors are great. Extra points for having Marik the Stoner. He's funny on drugs. :D ps... PWP means "Plot? What Plot?" & it's when you write a lemon with nothing but the yummy bits. No need to come up with a story, just strip down and get into to it! Personally, my favorite kind. ;)
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Do people bother reading other peoples reviews? Three times your question was answered. Not to mention I am sure you got one or two e-mails... Huh? Am I suppose to review? I guess I will... DON'T TORTURE YUGI FOR THE LOVE OF GAWD!
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 23:37 CST
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OMG Poor Ryou!!!! God even I'm not that mean to him!!! You must kill Seto!! He must die! I'm not kidding!!! And I'm already feeling sorry for poor Yugi. You have to take them out of this hellhole! And get them together with the darks! For a nice happy ending!!! God it was good to get all of that yelling out of my system. Of course, after all of that, I have to say that I love this story, because the plot is so gripping, and of course the characters. I wonder if I've added it to my favorites? Well, I will. PWP stands for porn without plot, which is usually just a one shot lemon type thing, well, exactly what the name says it is. At least, if I'm right about it.
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Reviewed By: al On: November 17, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I always wondered what PWP meant.. by the way i used to think that the rubric was 7=ok 8=good 9=great 10=wow so thats how i still grade. i'm confused about the pairings but i'll take it as a good thing. O yeah, I think that you have a habit of typing 'a she' instead of 'as he'.
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Reviewed By: dark selene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PWP means plot? what plot? it also means porn without plot. WHY RYOU??? >_< He's too cute to suffer!!
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 16:44 CST
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PWP means plot what plot... its kinda like one shot, or jus straight lemon.. heh... anyways... AINT NO ONE WANNA SEE NO YUGI ANGST! SHIT! lol... update soon pwease... and leaf ryou alone, the poor babie >
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