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Reviewed By: hieisdragonsblood On: November 24, 2008 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz finish the story its so awesome and thats an evil cliff hanger
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Reviewed By: little crazy head otaku On: November 25, 2006 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASE Update soon?!?!?!?! Your killing me, killing me!! All I wanted was you....er I mean your fic. (embarassed because he branced off into a song that he loves) Well any dont forget about me or us of your Awsome fic.
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I've reviewed before but it's been a year now and there's been no update! What's happened? Frankly I'm more into the Ryou and Yugi angst but I need some closure! AHHH it's driving me nuts I just want to slap Malik in the face!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. In fact I think ALL your fics are brill and original. Keep up the good work and update soon please?
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Reviewed By: Chitoko Kanzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This CANNOT be complet yet!!!! Malik hasn't been returened (can't spell worth shit today) to Baku yet!! *shakes angry fist* I can't wait till you update this again. Please don't just drop this here
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Reviewed By: S. Chensu (of S. Chensu and Luff from the ff.net realm) On: August 31, 2005 15:22 CDT
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.I haven't reviewed this for a little while but...WOW! There aren't many stories around that make me want to hurt the person who's being so nasty to the characters. Your portrayal of what's going on is so powerful, I feel so angry at what's happening and I want it to be better. I was actually screaming at the screen when Malik found out Boshi was lying and telling Malik what to do to get him out of the situation. Of course I am perfectly sane... I was reading so fast in fact that the words were just a blur. That just shows how great your writing is 'cause it's got me all mad! Just make sure everything works out ok because if it doesn't... *Reaches for her "author eating gerbil of doom"* Go my pretty! *Coughs* Sorry, I'm feeling a bit odd tonight. At any rate, please make things better and put in some more lemons and not rapes! Please? S. Chensu xxx.
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: August 22, 2005 02:17 CDT
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Evil Boshi! Evil!!! Must kill! Must hurt! Must torture! Must die! I'm sad for Malik-chan. *huggles* I'm glad he disillusioned from Boshi's lies though. I just hope he'll be he'll be alright again after such trauma. Also glad Jou talked -some- sense in him, even if it didn't immediately take affect. I continue to be impressed by your plot, awesome work! Hope you don't leave us hanging too long. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Andyouthinkimcrazy? On: August 12, 2005 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BAD BOSHI! T_T Turning Malik against Ryou! ... ^_^ I bet Malik looked like a sexy little kitty though... Mmmm... sexy kitty Malik *drool*
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 05:01 CDT
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It's a amazing how a little depression and some words can make a person deny what he knows is true and to doubt himself and his feelings. Poor Malik, I hope Bakura goes and kicks Boshi's ass soon. Please don't leave us hanging update soon.
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Title: *BEATS SOMETHING*
Reviewed By: Wicabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 04:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
ARG! Dammit, Malik! Go back home with Ryou and the others! Boshi is a fucking asshole!!! >.<
*cough* Had to get that out of my system.
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: July 10, 2005 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boshi is evil, how can he say that to Malik?!?! Poor guy, hope someone or something can talk some sense back into Malik so can leave that creep. Lots of angst, but despite that the dress thing was a bit humorous. Heh, Ryou is cute in a dress, I've seen a couple piccies of him. lol. The plot never fails to capture my attention, can't wait for more. Till then. ^_~
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Reviewed By: KuramaandHiei4ever (too lazy to login) On: July 09, 2005 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still loving it!! Can't wait for the next one ^^
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Title: Of S. Chensu and Luff of the ff.net Realm
Reviewed By: S. Chensu On: June 05, 2005 16:44 CDT
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Hey, I haven't reviewed this before, although I've been keeping an eye on it for a while now. Well, if your aim is to frustrate the reader and make them want to give Malik a reality slap then you've definitely suceeded! I can't believe he's staying with Boshi, willingly, and that he doesn't realise how much everyone else cares for him. But now I wonder what you can do to make them find Malik again. They will, won't they? Please don't tell me your're going to leave Malik with Boshi... I love the way the story has moved on since the whole Ryou and Yugi incident but I wonder if you will ever let the characters be happy. Not to mean that in a bad way or anything but sometimes I think it's wise to make sure the characters have some sort of happiness or it's just a case of throwing every bad thing that can happen to a person, just so you can provoke a reaction from your reader. But apart from that, I like the way the story is going. However, your grammar and spelling could be improved, Boshi's name changed to Bush quite a few times and the fact that one of your chapters was one long paragraph made it very hard to read. I feel a bit bad now, because it seems to me I haven't said many nice things so far. It's good to see the recent developments with Malik, a lot of depth has been added to his character and you portray his desperation very well. Well, I hope this is review is long enough to make up for the fact I've never reviewed before! S. Chensu xxx.
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: May 14, 2005 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, the plot certainly gets twisty and fun. ^_^ Every new character is always suspicious in my opinion. lol. I knew that Boshi person was evil, evil! ok not that evil, but still. lol. Youko is suspicious sounding, and Yui is interesting in a way. So everything is weaved together in some way shape or form, Ryou knows Yui, Yui is with Youko who is a friend of Boshi who has Malik who Ryou and co. are looking for. Awesome chapters, lots of action. I apologize for the late review, I won't bother you with excuses. ^_^ Hope to read more soon. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: April 30, 2005 15:27 CDT
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The plot thickens, will Malik totally lose it and start screaming Bakura's name or something? I really like Yui, he's cute even if he does have some personal pride issues(they all do) and I think his relationship with his owner is sweet and wrong but still sweet and better than Malik's and Boshi's. Die Boshi! How will Boshi punish Malik? You would think it would be something humiliating like walking around naked with a cock ring and something shoved in him. Once again Boshi is creepy! Love how it's going and I bet Marik gets mad when like Yui's owner kisses or gropes Ryou. That'll blow their cover pretty fast. Can't wait to see how it turns out! Thank You. DK;)
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