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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just going to review again because I can't stop reading this!!! I'm starting to make up my own next chapter in my head to stop from going crazy waiting for an update. Please update soon!!! And I know you said you haven't had good experiences with betas, but the offer remains *shrugs* PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!You updated here but not on aff. I'm so glad I found it though. I really hope you update soon!!! Come on, Yamis; save them already!!! ;_;
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Reviewed By: heiwa On: July 14, 2004 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope ryou and yugi can get out of that...situation hopefully marik or someone will find out where they are. ^^ it's still a good fic, update!
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Title: Oh, no!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 00:37 CDT
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Ryou isn't actually going to break is he?! Oh, he can't! He simply can't! It'd be... Whore-able if he did! Ack! That was a whore-id pun... Bleh. I'm so dismayed! When are the yamis gonna save them!! Why can't the hikaris every get any breaks! I'm serious, they should all just move in together and be heppy! *sigh* Damned Eric and Yugi's father. Does he have a name by the way? I would like a name to loath along with the title of disgusting father. Grrrr... Aw!! Poor Ryou!! I'm so sad! Please save them yamis!! And where's Kaiba?!?! Why isn't he helping?!?! And Jounouchi?!?! Ahhh!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (too lazy to log in) On: July 12, 2004 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I saw this update! ^_^ Great story, but horrible things. ^_^' Lol. I hope they get rescued soon. Those bastards need to be taught a lesson, one that involves very slow and agonizing deaths. *grins manically* Till next time then, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: shinigami_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, I'm still enjoying every moment of this fic! I love the torture! (not everyone agrees with me here tho ^^;) You're doing a lovely job^^ Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Title: agh...
Reviewed By: LadyEos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 18:13 CDT
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This is still a good fic, and still making me feel sick. I really hope you get those two rescued soon...
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Title: Ugh...
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 19:47 CDT
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I get sick to my stomach reading about those two sick fucks torturing Ryou like that. You really have a knack for writing this kind of stuff. Well, at least it's not Yugi torture.. ick. Anyway, continue, I wanna see those fucktards die a horrible, painful death at the hands of Bakura, Marik and, Yami. Wow, such a long story.. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 16:20 CDT
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Update soon so that the evil bastards can die a bloody death!! ^^
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: LadyEos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this story nearly makes me sick to my stomach...reminds me too much of my life...I'm going to read this story until the end, and I'm hoping that things will get better...Please update soon-it is a great story...
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Reviewed By: shinigami_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! More torture! Will they ever be saved? .......only after I see more Ryou torture first! Hehe, you're doing a great job as ever!^^
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, it's finally updated! ^_^ *jumps up and down* oh no, Yugi torture, poor hikaris. I hope Ryou's ok. Though I love to read Ryou torture even though I hate Ryou getting tortured. Ok, that didn't really make any sense. *shrugs* Evil bastards, they must suffer in hell! The yamis must make them PAY! *hugs Ryou and Yugi virtual plushies* I don't have any real ones, I wish I did though. Wow, I'm ranting again, I better stop that. Well, ud soon. Ja ne!
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Title: uwgfruAHUWht!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!! Nasty, stupid Yugi torture.. how boring. Oh well, I guess I just have to wait and endure the nastiness if I want anything better. At least Ryou wasn't hurt. PLEASE LET MARIK, BAKURA, YAMI, AND MALIK FIND THEM SOON! Update soon.. ^^ Save the hikaris!
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 09:12 CDT
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Oh! No! Please may it be over soon! I actually feel sick for them too!... Or maybe I'm just hungry? Haven't eaten yet... I mean *cough* How terrible! Yami and Bakura'll come to the rescue, right?! Oh! You could have Marik meet up with Erik in a dark alley... Heh. You know, and MAKE HIM PAY!!! Ahhh!!! I want the hikari's safe! Poor Yugi! Poor Ryou! Eh? What's happening to Ryou while all this is going on? I really don't believe that those bastards would just leave him alone... Ah! They're jerks! Eeeee!!! Save the hikaris! Please, save them, yamis! Great chapter! I'd almost thought you'd given up the fic. It's awesome to see you're still writting! Keep going! And I understand about not having time, and all. I've got classes too.. Ah! And finals are next week! Eek! Damned major essay I still have to write... I'll do it later.. Uh.. Tomorrow... Maybe.. *sweatdrop* Anyway, kick ass fic! I'm completly looking forwards to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: beepbeepsheep On: June 23, 2004 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey cool story, please update.
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