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Reviewed By: Mononoke Not logged in cuz mediaminer's a butthead. On: March 10, 2004 06:23 CST
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HI! I like this, and the way that yuugi is so broken and will do anything to keep his friend safe, because nothing in this world would keep him from not doing so. I think that were I him, I'd have drowned myself in the tub/shower. It only takes three inches of water...
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Reviewed By: al On: March 09, 2004 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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evil eric evil eric! ryou stabbing him! evil ryou! not sure what to want or expect.
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Reviewed By: Mistletoe88 On: March 07, 2004 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has just a few problems, the flow is off a bit. lingering in one place too long then jumping head on into the next bit so rushed that you are left "What did I miss something?" not that I minded going back and re-reading certain parts. The other is the grammar is off which adds to the confusion. Overall this story ROCKS Please continue.
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 10:55 CST
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Poor, poor Yugi and Ryou... Will Yami and them all come to rescue? Gods I hate Eric... Update somemore please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 09:36 CST
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Sick sick sick!!! Please help them soon, I don't think that I can stand it anymore!!!
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Reviewed By: shinigami_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 21:43 CST
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Oh my... now, this is what is what true torture is all about! ^^ *waves torture flags* Poor Yugi, he feels so degraded, all he can do is apologize. *pats Yugi* So Yami, Bakura, and Marik are "researching" to find some answers... interesting. I must see more! ^^ Keep up the nice work!
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Reviewed By: mimiheart9 On: February 28, 2004 10:23 CST
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Great update
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Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... ONCE AGAIN! deme dun want no yugi/ryou tortute crap ;-; darn it, GIT TAH DEH BEST PART! AHHHHHHHHHH, lol.. AND UPDATE REGRET!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jenna On: February 23, 2004 23:52 CST
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OMG, poor yugi and ryou, being tourchered like that.........sigh, malik, bakura, yami, and marik need to find them soon!
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Reviewed By: The munchkin On: February 22, 2004 02:53 CST
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On 6th chapter. x,x Too much Ryou and Malik...I WANT YUGIIII stuffs! Who cares about the other two! x,x (a mob of yaoi fangirls...I burn them):3 I hope this chapter has it. x,x So far only Joey and Ryou...which is a really..bizarre OOC couple but I don't mind. :P You have a LOT of run-on sentences and punctuation problems. You should check to see if a period is where it's supposed to be or so. Oh, and more Yugi! -,- He's not just another side-character to chuck away. His name is the damned title of the show and manga. x,x So many times, it's just "I don't want to hurt you and Yugi" and it annoys me that all they do is mention him! x,x Nobody has a reaction to him either; Yami just stared and that was it. Not bad so far, just kind of disappoints me...No Yugi. T^T
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Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! DEME DIDNT ASK FUH NO HIKARI TORTURE, GRRRRRRRR!!!!! NO WAY! WHERES THE YAMIS, AND MALIK! AHHHH STUPID EVIL ERIC, and, yugi's dad, wtf, he aint got no name X.x lol HA AHHAHAHAHHAHHAA UPDATE, AND UPDATE REGRET, THATS GETTIN GEEEEEEEEWD XD
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat DD On: February 19, 2004 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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AAAAAHHHHH!!! People are ASKING for Hikaru torture!? -_- The meanies... Set Yugi and Ryou free! Let the cute bishies go! UUhh nuts, you're going to keep toturing them aren't you?
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 22:21 CST
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*kicks Yugi's father in the nads and sets Eric on fire* There, I feel better now. ^_______^
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 21:43 CST
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Oh! Ryou! Poor Ryou! Yami, Malik and the rest will find them right!? Oh! I hope so! And I hope Eric dies. And Yugi's father! They should have a stupid pointless agrument, and kill each other, over like money, or something! That, or have the Yamis save them, along with Malik! But... You're going to torture them even more aren't you, you sick, sick creature.... Man, you're awesome! Oh, and were is Kaiba? Or Jounouchi?
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Reviewed By: Mimiheart9 On: February 19, 2004 19:23 CST
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Great update!
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