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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 15:01 EDT
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Ok I've put this off long enough. I've been out of town and have not been reviewing as I should have. Even his dreams make him cold. Gotta wonder about that. I love the nickname. It sounds like Vegeta is out of breath and just can't quite get out that last syllable. *shivers down the spine* PS: That fic you asked me to finish... Chapter one is at the Beta reader. -El-
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 16:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This last chapter had me in heat. Whoo! Cute nickname. ~_^ And that voice, *shudders* Great couple of chapter! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 08:10 EDT
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okey dokey, Vegeta's not seme but he's on top of his "anchor" trying for a semblance of control over his past! Nice loving lemon--you write good ones. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 15:30 EDT
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I've read this fic from the beginning, I just haven't reviewed until now, sorry about that. I wanted to let you know that this is one of the best Goku/Vegeta stories I've ever read. I really, really want things to turn out okay for them! What can I say, I'm a sucker for happily ever after, and if anyone deserves that, it's Vegeta and Goku. So please, keep up the fantastic work, and I'll be reading to the end. :) ~Altair
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Title: Your my goddess
Reviewed By: ale_lestat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, like it, like it. The story is amaizing, lots of lemon, angst, drama and MY tears. My poor Vegeta !!!! I bet that the scar is has something with Vegeta hearing the voice of Freiza. Maybe a device or something implantated, not sure. You know what your doing, keep going. Oh, did I tell you that your a goddes, if not now you know :) Lots of kisses for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 23:06 EDT
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Looking fwd to the sex and the nickname! Does V getting to call Goku something cutie mean that V gets to be seme for a change? I'd like to see that--maybe being the dominant one may help our poor prince recover some of his bearings! :-) I agree that Goku should still call his prince by his full name--V wouldn't stand for anything else. Enjoying the heck out of this suspense. The ship wouldn't be bringing back Raditz by any chance? Nah! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my lord holy shit where in the hell did you think that up? that was weird messed up so jacked up it was- it was great wow and i mean it WOW!
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 24, 2004 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the new chapter. It was great ur doing a great job. I love all ur stories. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 23:05 EDT
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Noooooooooooo. I do not like this voice. At first it was mean and vindictive. Then it was almost nicer but louder. (pleading with Vegeta to accept love). And NOW its torturing Vegeta by breaking his tail? I do not like this split personality. What does it have to do with the mark on his back? -El-
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Title: poor vegeta, poor goku!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 21:14 EDT
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I guess Vegeta can drag anyone into angst, even our beloved devil may care Goku. You're very talented, pixelgoddess. I read your one-shots and they're nicely put together! Fluff and the Xmas piece are so clever and sexy--and that's something coming from me, not a real yaoi fan! I'm hoping this series will end up happily, with some food & sex & plot resolution at last for these poor saiyan boys! I honestly don't know what the ship is bringing--but it ain't peanut butter! Keep on! debbiechan
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Title: Poor Vegeta
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are going to keep tormenting Vegta? Leaveing it like that was crule. (Pouts) please up-date soon. I hope that voice get it. Not nice to send the poor prince down the deep end. Here's hopen he'll make it. BYEBYE LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 23:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What you do to poor Vegeta? Hope you up-date again soon the suspence is killing me. Will Vegeta stay sain? Ok Bye for now. BYEBYE LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good i thought it was wonderfull! i'm only on chapter 3 but still good
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: May 21, 2004 15:57 EDT
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for crying out loud! why did you have to make it a cliffy???? update!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 14:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! NO! What happened to Vegeta?! You've gotta update soon! *|Mari|*
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