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 Reviewed By: godess  On: March 09, 2005 18:12 CST
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I really love reading this fic, every time I read it I laugh so damn hard I love it, I'm going to be sad when you Finnish it though, but I still can't wait till the next update so update soon!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Hououza  On: March 09, 2005 16:49 CST
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Excellent chapter! That was too funny for words! I think I'll vote 1. Again. I think. I have an idea for Kouga and Naraku...the front and back end of a pantomime horse. I have no idea why I have that idea but it just seems to fit for those two... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
 Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 21, 2005 19:30 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC! its so funny..plz update soon
 Reviewed By: ayngel_fire  On: February 16, 2005 00:26 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love reading this fic, every time I read it I laugh so damn hard I love it. can't wait till the next update so update soon!!!!!
 Title: i just found you, and i love you! *not that way you homophobs!* 2!
Reviewed By: aly-oh-mally  On: February 14, 2005 22:48 CST
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IT CUT ME OFF, THE FUCKER HAD THE NERVE!! hehe, my friends say im bipolar. want a tootsie rool? SANGO:hello? she needs to come as Laura Croft. FLUFFY:drag queen RIN:a naughty angel SHIPO:ROBIN!!!(BATMAN) KIRARA:catwoman. sexy hallie berrie outfit too. HOBO*ehem*HOJO:what do you think? a hobo. KIKYO:a VERY nasty lookin wanna be play boy bunny. NIRAKU:a jiggalo. GOOD LUCK! I LOVE YOUR STORY! i totaly wont be offendeed if you dont use my ideas, but i hope you consider them! and have kikyo + niraku fall in the lake when there trien to get the grove right, cuz shes too lose!!! please UPDATE!!!
 Title: i just found you, and i love you! *not that way you homophobs!*
Reviewed By: aly-oh-mally  On: February 14, 2005 22:45 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU!!!! your story TOTALY kicks ass! youre my new idol! ok, sorry, kinda weird today. not to mention the fact that ive just found your story and ive fallen hard. oh well. ok, apart from youre beyond awsome story, and the beyond increadably awsome randomness! *yah!* i got some killer ideas for the costume party! INUYASHA: the night in shining *silver* armor, cuz i think he would look dead sexy!! KAGOME:i totaly want her to be in red and black, so i think she should be a vamp. cuz shes the actual inocent one, and what costume party is there without a suductive vampire? MIROKU:i think he should be that one guy who runs around in a white botton up shirt, socks, brifs, and sunglasses. >_
 Title: Costume Ideas
Reviewed By: Kawaii_Kit  On: February 12, 2005 16:49 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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lol for costume ideas, I think Shippo should go as a Pirate, and Kirara should be his wench (lol, he should have a chain that is attached around kirara's neck;D) ummm who else... Yura should be dressed as a scantally(sp?) clad devil lady, Kagura should be dressed as Yuna from Final Fantasy X-2 (lol), Kanna should be dressed as an angel... she's always reminded me off one, regardless of the fact she is evil in the anime... (I don't hold it against her)... Kikyo should be dressed as the local whore, wait... she already is... Damn... lol, ok now that that's out of my system... Sesshy and Inu should dress in their kimono's that they wear in the anime, and that's about it... Just a suggestion! Keep up the good work!
 Title: uhh here's some costume comments
Reviewed By: foxy4ever duhh [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
You could make shippo go as a fox, make kirara go as a another type of animal. Yura could always go as repunzal to play the hair gimic. kagura could go as a winged warrior or somthing to that affect. last but not least kanna could go as a little girl costume. for shippo's he could just leave his tail out where fur clothes things and have little ears on his head. id personally make kirara a dog like thing with a tail and big ears. i thought i'd be funny if yura went as a stutty repunzal. kagura's one of the not bad, bad guys she could be a leather clad warrior with scared and messed up wings. Kanna always looked young so she could goo in a school girl out fit, and like with the earlier thing have a lolly pop or something.
 Title: Lol, costumes!
Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen(NSI)  On: February 11, 2005 01:28 CST
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Ahh... I forgot to talk about the costumes, sorry... sorta spacey right now @.@.........SHIPPO- Bridegroom... lol, so uncreative, yes... KAGURA- Bride... xD... dead bride perhaps =P...KANNA- Oh... hey... Pippi! Pippi Longstockings! O.O She can wear a wiiig... ^^...YURA- Umm... Yura...hair... hmm... Vampire... xD well... yeah ^^ No wait... a maid! Yeah... a maid xD Oi! You can make Kagura the vampire! *squeals*...KIRARA- Kitty chick, but a cute kitty chick... with a tight leotard... @.@... whoot, too many dots @.@ They should have pizza strips at the party... from pizza hut ;D And Boba... you know.. booobaaa... =)
 Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen (NSI)  On: February 11, 2005 01:20 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, damn, I completely forgot about this fic. There was a big gap somewhere in your updates and I stopped reading fics for a while. Hah, I felt like checking out R rated fics today since I already read all the NC-17 ones. Your story was a the first on the list and I remembered seeing the summary before. So I continued from where I left off (chapter 6)... it's been a year since I last commented @.@ Awesome job, never realized that you were the one the wrote Last Song, that one's in my favorites xD Just realized how weird you were... well... how more weird you were. And damn, I LOVE Yoohoos- most awesome drinks in the world I say! Way better than Milo or Hersheys Chocolate ^______^ Oh, rating from last year's going up xD
 Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 10, 2005 18:40 CST
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shippo-a butterfly kagura- a goddess kanna- a white bunnie rabbit (or a playboy thing w/o the leotard yura- something really really slutty like a bkaini 10 sizes tooooooo small or sumtin or just a thong kiara- kitty like the play boy chick xcept with cat ears and a cat tail ^-^
 Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 10, 2005 17:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Shippo- the obvious; a full-body fox costume! Kagura- maybe a feudal era's respected Lady? Like with a traditional Kimono.. Kanna- a japanese ghost; you know, those ones that wear all white, has a serene glow to them and walks among the living? Yura- a slutty lioness! Kirara- a cute kitten; NOT too slutty though!
 Reviewed By: AO  On: January 28, 2005 01:38 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love reading this fic, every time I read it I laugh so damn hard I love it, I'm going to be sad when you Finnish it though, but I still can't wait till the next update so update soon!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Penthesileia [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2005 19:45 CST
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i love this fanfic! imy brothers been coming in my room to see what i'm laughing so hard about.can you make the girly guy and kikyo date, and then have one of the counslers are something push them in the lake? and than maybe a slug or a frog or tapole or something could crawl up kikyos ear. please?
 Reviewed By: Hououza  On: January 22, 2005 20:50 CST
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Um, yes I see what you mean...there are some strange people out there aren't there... Excellent chapter. So, Miroku and Sango together at last. All the others pretty much sorted out and Inuyasha and Kgome still not getting anywhere. I only hope they can deal with the girly man and zombie bitch. I think those two deserve each other. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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