| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Still Hiei81 On: July 13, 2005 01:05 CDT
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Sorry. For got something. You need to write an Inuyasha and Kagome lemon!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Name's Hiei81 On: July 13, 2005 01:00 CDT
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Sorry bout your Dad. Ouch, cancer? I love this story beyond all reason. Every five seconds I laughed. Fluffy, a clown?! lmao!!!! I think he would be hot as a rock star though.But that's just me... I think i already reviewed for this but... well... I love this fic! I don't know how to stess it any more then that! Kikyo shood die a horable death... or get hocked(sp?) up with Naraku. Sorry if my spelling is off. I can't spell worth shit. Anywho! Up date as soon as you can. And good luck with your Father! -Hiei81
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Reviewed By: BlueThunder13 On: May 25, 2005 20:45 CDT
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hey there, i have read your story many times and it is really good. i am really sorry to hear about your father, i truly am, cause i know what it is like to lose a close family member, i really hope that you have a great time with him for as long as you can. i am sorry if i am just going on and on but i am sorry, and i hope that you keep on writing your great story... have fun YAY! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 12:45 CDT
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*jumps up and down* I pick 5. I Loved your story! UPDAT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PUDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: dark sapir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 20:43 CST
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please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Crescent moon walker On: March 27, 2005 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story soo many time, and it is the greatest!!! I almost died laughing! Anyway, what you can do to Kikyo is have her fall into the punch bowl, or get knocked out by the Kagome!! Or better yet, have her drop down and die ^_^ ( No one aint gonna miss her!)Naraku, I say, should dress like a donkey's ass and Kouga should dress like a cross dresser (If you like Kouga, sorry for this comment, but, he already looks like a cross dresser.)I hope this would help you out! Update soon! CMW out!
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Reviewed By: Blade_the_vampire_slayer On: March 18, 2005 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic. was great! and you know wher you said that you needed ideas for Naraku and Kouga it sounds like they should be togeather. lol. jk. Well I loved this fic... And maybe you could make Kikyo go with Naraku and Kouga with Ayame or even the single twin counceler.
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Reviewed By: i'm Hiei81 On: March 15, 2005 04:32 CST
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I swear this is one of the best fics i've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!
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Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: March 12, 2005 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!!! it's hilarious !!!! and for the qquiz thingie i vote for * 5 * lol ...update soon!! it was totally funny!! : )
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Reviewed By: dj On: March 09, 2005 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
5 this fic is great You should get hojo and kouga drunk and have a gay experience love this fic it is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: linz On: March 09, 2005 22:57 CST
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very funny, i love it, i would write more but i'm in a rush! love the story update soon!
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Reviewed By: BlueThunder13 On: March 09, 2005 22:05 CST
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omg that was really good... and on your quiz thingie i think you should do answer number 5 when kikyo ends up with naraku and then falls into a lake... that is the only thing that that bitch deserves... excuse my language... but thanks for updating and i hope update soon... and by the way... naraku should be the devil or something... or maybe a bunny rabbit... with the big suit and all...i don't know about kouga... but i hope that you can come up with something soon so you can update.... thanks for writing such a good story... and i hope you update soon... thankies bunches...bye
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Title: Kouga
Reviewed By: NordicaVB still not signed in On: March 09, 2005 21:58 CST
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Hmm, for Kouga you would have to go with something like a King or Zeus...you know, that whole 'king of the gods' act (well, he is a 'prince' you know). Can't really think of anything else for him...unless he goes as the President. OH...how about a sheep, so he's like a Wolf in Sheep's clothing. As for Naraku, he should go as a Pimp or um...I don't think I can say that here, but how about he dresses like a man that likes to dress like women. Sorry, best I could do. Hope it helps!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: March 09, 2005 19:50 CST
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YES! YOU UPDATED! I AM SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Military time
Reviewed By: NordicaVB not signed in On: March 09, 2005 19:41 CST
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Okay, someone may have mentioned this already...but since you have not fixed it...military time is based on 24 hrs. the AM begins at 0000hrs (zero hundred hour) (1200AM). eight in the morning in 0800hrs (or eight hundred hours). 1:00PM is 1300hrs (thirteen hundred hours). So 10:00PM is 2200hrs. I would suggest, if you have time, fixing this mistake because it is a little distracting.
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